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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Damn those tears!...I'm blubbering like a baby whose mama has forgotten feed time!! That was heartbreaking. Some joy...love...cuddles soon please!

Edited by neverbefore - 13 years ago

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tracy1191

@tracy1191

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

wowww😊😊😊 loved it... plzzz update soon;)

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amina

@aminakhan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

i m speechless...ur ss is amazing...

brilliant work

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Anaya S.S

@nabnab

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

wow just wow

so glad you gave Shashi such strength...it was so heartbreaking to read! If only her family were like this in the real show...

and Arnav's letters ;(

beautifully written:)

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

hey, I came across this sort story and had in fact just finished reading your other FF 'Perfection' a while ago. I will leave a detailed feedback for the FF in the specifc thread.

I like the way you have approached this story that too from a totally different perspective, broken love, longing, sense of injustice, pretence of happiness, everything struck a chord with me. Your lines are very crisp and realistic. You could imagine any father speaking like that. It will be interesting to see if Kushi is willing to forgive Arnav, Its one thing to love someone but totally another to forgive them unconditionally.

P.S- I will send you a buddy request, if you are in the habit of sending PMs for updates, I would be greatful to receive one.

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nj123

@nj123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Amazing concept! I can't imagine the pain she must have been going through.
I wonder what she's gonna do next.😊

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Bravo Shashi Gupta, Bravo Navin for depicting what we all fail to see sometimes. Simple values and truth. you need to take the blinkers off to look the Gorgon in the face.. and after that you still love him then fine.. you can deal with it but its hard to take the rose colored glass off.

Well done for bringing a supremely different outlook to this story.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Well..i have a heavy heart now...only ur update will lighten it...

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Livetoparty

@Livetoparty

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

i loved it...it was very deep...

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

That was so realistic and beautifully captured the emotions. I just caught up with it now and I can't wait until you update! Why did arnav change his mind?