~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7))

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mimi

@moon_mine

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#541

awesome!!!!!

another brilliant part...loved it!!!

too good!!!! pls cntinue wid the nxt part soon...hope khushi soon goes back...hearing abt payal n akash!!!!!

watng fr

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

Poor Arnav...he thinks he has lost his love forever!!!

Can't believe Khushi.left everything behind for everyones happiness and now she finds out her sister is divorced!!!!!

Thanks for PM

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CrazY-4-BaRuN

@CrazY-4-BaRuN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#543

PayaAsh ? 😲😲

and Yash and Anjali ?!.. isnt it Anjali whom he held at the bathroom ? Or am i wrong ? 😕

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#544

Oh my!

Payal divorced Akash! Whoa!!

I love this update soo much!!

It was awesome!!

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riddhima11

@riddhima11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#545

amazing ff...

touching events so far.. simply loved it.. continue soon.. n thanx for the pm.. love -pankhuri

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Shivana

@SNR7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#546

Lovely update - full of surprises but intense longing & romance as well...I think I know why Payal left Aakash but what I'm curious about is how Khushi will react to this information...

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purplepower

@purplepower

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Posted: 13 years ago

#547

Just read ur FF in one go and what can I say... It is incredible, beautifully written with a truly unique storyline!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more 😃...xxx

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#548

I loved it. I am loving this FF. this is so different from everything else I am reading right now. I really Yash's character too. Amazing update!!!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#549

I'm late again! Darn!

The way you handle relations - beautiful hun! The words, even though you say that you weren't your best in this one - still had a Lyraa-touch to it! Some of them were brilliant! The little scene between Yash and Anjali, Arnav and Khushi - I'm in love with the concept that went behind writing them. And girl, you gave me an attack with that last sentence! Divorce?

Urgh - this is so complex! But I trust the way you manage your FFs flawlessly!

May I ask - what happened? This is a beautiful beautiful story, why did you say you were losing interest?