~ArHi FF: The trodden paths~ ch4 pg69 NEW--13/7))

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

Superb Update !!!!!!! It was brilliant !!!!!!
The way yash was trying to see if arnav cared !!!! The yash and Jiya part was cute !!!!!! I think Khushi should listen to yash !!!!!!
Loved the meeting of anjali and yash !!!!!!
The Arnav and Khushi part was beautiful !!!!!!! The lines were beautifully written !!!!! The emotions described were awesome !!!
Omg !! Payal divorced akash ?????
Can't wait to read more !!! Update soon !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

yash and Anjali ❤️

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nj123

@nj123

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Loved the update! Payal divorced him😲

Can't wait to know what happens next.

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

payal divorced akaash? this is a first... very very interesting...

love the interplay of emotions... i guess yash must have married khushi because she was pregnant??

your writing is amazing.. i love your intro... it is so true..

"Think twice before leaving the place in someone's heart. Because it hurts to know how much you miss that place... Especially when you decide to go back and find out that someone else has taken your place"

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@flowers4u

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#465

intresting twist...great update ...continue soon

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duncanelise

@duncanelise

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

You write absolutely heart wrenching, gut twisting stories that have me cursing you and blessing you at the same time...I loved whatever you've written so far! Great stuff!

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

okayy i like this yash guy, he's funny, really sweet and is good with kids. and i don't like the fact that i like him! hmph 🤢 its easier to hate him, so i ccan feel sorry for arnav. but noo!! gaaahh! but i think i'll give him the benefit of the doubt because he was happy seeing Mr. Akdu jealous and also cus he was trying to gring some sense into Khushi. so okayy...

and jiya is adorable!! awwiee the way she seriously answered yash's mock serious question. lol

and arnav-khushi scene was awesome! i honestly wasn't expecting her to do anything, but she did, and he took hold of her and they talked! gosh u have no idea how long i've been waiting for these 2 idiots to talk on the show but nahin!! they're aren't gonna do any such things.. hmph

and payal and akash got divorced?!!!! is it because payal found out about wat khushi did and she got all guilty?!! :'( that's kinda sad.

awesome update! i really liked it, especially the khushi-arnav and yash-jiya part!!

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#468

Fascinated by your story.

Very mature writing. Can really lose oneself in this story

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#469

Nice update.so yash's for anjali.plz update ur other ff's too.

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#470

woww awesome update.. loved how arnav was getting jealous of yash and yash saw all the emotions running on arnav's face and got his answer... hmmm is there hope for yash and anjali? loved arnav and khushi scene... even when he thought that she is married but wants to with her... so yash knows about jiya but what about mrs ahuja?? payl divorced akash... my god 😲