So Close, Yet So Far!! - Chapter 4 - Pg 61 - 27/05 - Page 39

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it ws awesome
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Hello all you beautiful people. How are you all doing? Missed my updates? Well I am so sorry for the delay but was caught up with some important work. Anyways, thank you so much for your encouraging comments. I hope you enjoy this next part. Please let me know what you thought. : )

Chapter 5:

She was talking with her friends when all the lights suddenly went off and a knowingly smile appeared on the faces of Mohan's.

A song began playing and there was a spotlight on a girl wearing a black sari standing with her back towards Neil and Neeti.

Aap ki kripa se yeh shubh ghadi aayi
Jiji aur jija ko badhaai ho badhaai
Sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaai
Suno jijaji, aji aap ke liye
Meri jiji ne bade tap hai kiye
Mandiron mein kiye phere ' 2
Pooja saanjh savere
Teen lok, tain tees devon ko yeh rahi ghere
Wah wah Ramji, jodi kya banaayi
Jiji aur jija ko badhaai ho badhaai
Wah waj Ramji
Movie: Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

Shakti turned around and took small steps towards her sister and jeejs while singing the song. Neeti was shocked to see her at first. She couldn't believe her eyes. Her mouth was hanging open seeing the view in front of her.

Finally with the last link Shakti reached them. With her index finger she closed her sister's now wide-open mouth, smiled at her jeejs and took Neeti into a bone crashing hug. Neeti returned the hug almost at the same time.

Both the sisters were so happy to see the other after such a long time. They couldn't believe that this was really happening. After a long hug, she hugged her jeejs next and congratulated the pair again.

'Why didn't you tell me that you're coming?' asked Neeti.

'Because I wanted to surprise you.'

'That's no reason. You know..'

'Shush! I missed you too!'

Neeti again hugged her.

'Btw, you don't sing that bad. Consolation prize toh jeet hi jaaogi in some competition.'

'Thank you jeejs. I am happy koi toh mera talent samajh paya!'

And they all laughed. Shakti then hugged her mom and dad, whom she was not able to meet before. The party again began with much more enthusiasm this time and the family shared some special moments.

After some time, the three sisters excused themselves and appeared back with a big cake. Neeti and Neil cut the cake together and everyone enjoyed.

'Don't you think the party is becoming bore?' asked Mukti.

'Chal fir, dikha dete hain sabko apna rang!'

And the two disappeared grinning widely.

The two appeared again welcomed by darkness and a spotlight! :P

Jali toh, bujhi na, kasam se koyla ho gayi hum
Lagi hai, tujhe na, kasam se tauba ho gayi hum

Mila na koi aisa, mere sapno ke jaisa
Mila na koi aisa, mere sapno ke jaisa
Chhan ke mohalla saara dekh liya
Jawani chadti jaaye, karega kaun upaaye
Jawani chadti jaaye, karega kaun upaaye
Chhan ke mohalla saara dekh liya

Jali toh, bujhi na, kasam se koyla ho gayi hum
Lagi hai, tujhe na, kasam se tauba ho gayi hum
Jali toh, bujhi na, kasam se koyla ho gayi hum
Lagi hai, tujhe na, kasam se tauba ho gayi hum

Pyaar ki hera pheri kar ke meri sang se chura le
Ya mere dil ki basti nainon se loot le
Dekh ke woh albela mujhe akela apna bana le
Ho gayi neendhein sasti, nainon se loot le

Pyaar ki hera pheri kar ke meri sang se chura le
Ya mere dil ki basti nainon se loot le
Dekh ke woh albela mujhe akela apna bana le
Ho gayi neendhein sasti, nainon se loot le
Hai aisa kaun bata de, jo mann ki pyaas bujha de
Hai aisa kaun bata de, jo mann ki pyaas bujha de
Chhan ke mohalla saara dekh liya

Jali toh, bujhi na, kasam se koyla ho gayi hum
Lagi hai, tujhe na, kasam se tauba ho gayi hum
Jali toh, bujhi na, kasam se koyla ho gayi hum
Lagi hai, tujhe na, kasam se tauba ho gayi hum

Dor se kati patangi, main satrangi aaj hui hoon
Kyun bala basna mera apne pe hi chale
Raam yeh kaisi maaya gori gaaya aag hui hai
Kyun bala tan yeh mera paani mein bhi jale

Dor se kati patangi, main satrangi aaj hui hoon
Kyun bala basna mera apne pe hi chale
Raam yeh kaisi maaya gori gaaya aag hui hai
Kyun bala tan yeh mera paani mein bhi jale
Raam jhi rog mita do, vaid ka pata bata do
Raam jhi rog mita do, vaid ka pata bata do
Chhan ke mohalla saara dekh liya
Jawani chadti jaaye, karega kaun upaaye
Chhan ke mohalla saara dekh liya

Jali toh, bujhi na, kasam se koyla ho gayi hum
Lagi hai, tujhe na, kasam se tauba ho gayi hum
Jali toh, bujhi na, kasam se koyla ho gayi hum
Lagi hai, tujhe na, kasam se tauba ho gayi hum

Movie: Action Replayy

Both the girls did a beautiful Bollywood dance complementing each other with every step they did. They were perfect in whatever they did. They certain X factor that made them so entertaining to watch. Seeing the two on the dance floor just inspired others to get up and dance as well. They were totally comfortable trying new moves and just letting loose. They didn't care what other people thought, and just got totally into it. They attended to, and expressed themselves with, every single molecule of their bodies. They just didn't hold the right arm up, they held it at the right height and angle, they knew how to position their wrist, they knew the degree to bend and straighten the hand, they knew what to do with the tips of the fingers -- and they knew it well enough that they didn't have to *think* about it so much that it distracts them from their art. No one could tell that it was an on-the-spot performance. Near the end, they were joined by many more people and the whole DID and D3 gang girls in particular. They danced their hearts out!

Suddenly the lights again went off and the spotlight played it's role again. It was working on a man this time who has it back towards everyone.

So there you have it. Let me know what you think. : ) That's for sure one of my worst song selections! Anyways, that's all I can write for now. Don't have even china sa time. I will update after the 28th. Busy until then. Sorry! Love you all.

P.s - It was a long one. At least, longer than my usual. I don't know anything about such party's. So, don't comment on the dance part. It's a talented family, so dance toh banta tha boss!

PP.s - PM's are on their way. ; )

- Devil

Edited by KriyaanshFF - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update Pari.
it was short nd nice one.
i nvr knbew u'll update it so fast.
Superb cute ones
loved it alot,

Thanks for pm,

Update soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u were back with ur updates with a bang...but it was somewat small...o probs kaam chalalenge...awesome update as always...wish the man is kunwar
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Posted: 13 years ago

it was a short part, but loved it..

welcome back Devil🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update aditi...loved it very much
its good to see you after soo long
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

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