So Close, Yet So Far!! - Chapter 4 - Pg 61 - 27/05

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

Awesome update...loved it...I'm very happy to know that u r planning to continue the other ff's too...

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Pari u Updated this.

The best suprise I ever got today.

Thanks for continuing this from the bottom of my heart(Dil Se)

It was very spl and thanks.

Now I hope u'll continue the rest too the same way but Wil give u time foer it as the reson is disappointing.

But jus remember there r more ppl who love u than the ones who dont.

Next to the Update .

It was superb.

Wow neeti's suprise is still awaiting her and with loads of fun and entertainment.

Cliff hangers I have nothing more top say.

Ab sab chal gaya jab u planned to continue this.

Plz update next part soon.

Mujhe pata hai ki is me mera bak bak tha wil try to give u the big comment of update later if my lovely time permits so.

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Supeb update and thanx for continue dis.. And update asap :)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Thanx for continuing this dear:):)
D update was simply mindblowing:):)
Luvd it...:)
Waiting for d next part:):)

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

it was lovely
n take ur time...

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

It was fabulous i loved it

it was awesome

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

okkhhh!!!! 4 dis 1 i m nt late hope so...hehehe
kya kru yaar xams 🤢 peecha hi ni hod re

okh!!! nw coming to update
wow i love it
actually dis is my 2nd fav work of ur...coz 1st 1 is kriyaansh
n i love to read dis alot
n again short part
okhh!! okhh!!! i knw u r giving short updates 4 dis...bt thoda to bada kr update...chalo koi ni
love da way u describe neeti's dress...plss mat kia kr aise coz i m crazy 4 cloths ...hehe 😉
n i guess ab hogi hmari diva ki entry...waiting 4 dat
chalo nxt update jaldi kro...i m waiting 😊
love you!!!

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#378

awesm update as always .i don't know i can read next part or not,bt atleast i will try,

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#379

Ur the sweetest devil Aditi...thanks a ton for the PM...I was reading this one for the first time -zyaada mehnat nahi karni padi, sab chapters padh liye - ekdum philmi ishtyle narration tha...I mean aisa lag raha tha jaise sab kuch meri aakhon ke samne ho raha hai...next part sad hai - well life is a mixture of happy & sad so jhel lenge - in short Luvd it (with a capital L u see), pls continue sending PMs in future too and please keep writing - ur too good at it to stop for any reason!!!!

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: Angelic_Aditi
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Chapter 4:

"They're coming," said an excited Mukti.

"What? And you're still standing here? Run idiot!" ordered an excited and hyper Shakti.
Lolz this is so like shakti... always hyper...

Saying that Shakti ran up the stairs fluidly, taking two steps a time and ran to the closest room. Mukti was right at her heels and she closed the door behind as she entered the room. There friends were not surprised seeing this. They all chuckled lightly and turned their attention towards the door which now held everyone's attention. A grand entry was about to be made anytime by 'them'.

Difinitely they'll enjoy this scene... its as entertaining as tom and jerry....
Shakti was not able to make it to their wedding and had smoothly lied for not able to make it for the anniversary either.
wah!!!👏👏👏👏👏 mujhe to shaks se jhoot bolne ke liye training leni chaiye

now coming to point ... i m so glad that i m one of the bunch of ur friends who forced some brains to ur head... seriously u need a councellor... matlab inte baar depression main toh main bhi nae gae ... i m comparing coz i know the no. of betrayal i got is not something that happens in a normal life...

one request whenever u feel depressed or upset or u r angry... feel free to share... we'll always find the other way rather that discontinuation of the ff... kkk ... so next time plz show some grace on me by being a good girl...

enough of my bak bak... the update is amazing and the most grt thing is that i am a meloncholy lover and i love sad endings... so waiting eagerly for ur nxt update...