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spicyrays

@spicyrays

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Hey jst read uar ff its diff. I lykd it... Plz continue soon nd do pm me... K tc

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@spicyrays

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Hey jst read uar ff its diff. I lykd it... Plz continue soon nd do pm me... K tcHey jst read uar ff its diff. I lykd it... Plz continue soon nd do pm me... K tc

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

awesum updt...

her must b charlie...

shakz nd archie bonding ws nyc...

thnx fr d pm...

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ASMITA

@ASMI98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

finally u updated...awesome part...update the next part soon

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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

oh wow guys u completed the demand...

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719483

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Bye Ridz..
@Asma-Ya d problem itself comes wid d like section.Funny thing is i have 189 ppl i sometimes get around 40.

And I don't understand how can you sit quite?
You work so hard, and then such less replies.
Don't you feel demoralized? Cause I do! 😒

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Puja

@puja_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

finally tune update krne ki kripa kari...ws waitng desperately fr it...

d update ws awesome...luvd d convo n especially-

"Shantanu: Well I didn't want to spoil your moment (eyeing the two who were still in between a hug), but to be precise it has been 6 years, 7 months, 3 weeks, 5 days, 13 hours, 47 minutes and some seconds.'' lyn...😎jst luvd it...waitng fr nxt part...plz agli baar thoda long update karne ki try krna...

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Eyesfriendly

@Eyesfriendly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

just read ur SS...

and loved it so so much...

waiting 4 ur next update...

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719483

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Thanks again for reading and for your wonderful comments. Here goes the reply part. 😳

~~ Unres ~~

Like always, my number one. Aw, I love you Cinderella. 🤗

Originally posted by: asmaju
res

unres

It was amazing.
Lovely one.

The way Shaks and Archie bonded was so cute.

Lovely.
u dont know haow much happy i'm.
ha jha is liye tera mehanat kam kar gayi pari.

loved it.

pari back to devil mode woh bhi puri tarah se.
ek saat double demand.
likes aur pages🤗

aur tere cliff hanger ki tho mai😍
no idea tu kise lane wahi hai and y did she run inside room ???/
phir se shock hai shayad.

Update soon.

Thanks a lot di. (Dil Se, Dil Se) 😊

Yay! I'm glad ki you are happy! 😳

Lol, *phew* Thank God kaam kar gayi. I wah not sure of this one. Gusse mein likh rahi thi pata nahi kya likhti gayi! 🤣

Yes di! Back with a bang! 😆 Yes di. Jismein se pages toh aap logoin ne pure kar diye hain aur likes ka toh wait hi karte raheinge ab hum! 😛

Aw, I love giving cliff hangers. And my luck ki iss SS mein main sahi length par with a cliff hanger end bhi kar paa rahi hun! 🤣

Jyada serious nahi banaungi abhi. I'll save it for the last chapter and the epilogue. 🤣 🤣

Ya shayad nahi! 😉

I will di, ek baar mujhe woh 65 likes mil jaayein! Huhahaha! *Evil Smile*

The one I'm always waiting for. 🤗

Originally posted by: 21Neha21
u updated...i m so happy...
n thanks a lot my sweet devil for mentioning me...loads of love n hugs to u...🤗 🤗
n d update...it was mind blowing...
d bond dat u showed bw shaks n archie was so adorable...😳
n den came d shock..6 years...!!!😲
i eyes literally popped out of my head...i m getting really restless now to know what has happened in dese 6 long years...plz sweets reveal dese mysteries now...
n den came another mystery..'they r coming'..y shaks was so effected bcz of dere arrival...😕
i really cant wait to read more...plz sweets try to update soon...😊
m waiting eagerly...

Yes I did. Chalo dance karein. *Dhinka Chika* 😆

Thanks ki kya zaroorat hai di. Aw, love and huggies. Yay!! 🤗 🤗

Thank you di.

Lol, shock laga laga laga shock laga. See, I'm a pro at giving shocks! 🤣

Bahut kuch ho gaya hai di joh bas ab main kuch hi dinoin mein sab ko bata dungi! 😉 Lol, meaning to say - the mystery will end soon! 😳

Haha, pata chal jaayega di. Be patient. Sabr ka fal meetha hota hai.

I'll update in an hour or so di - tab bhi jab mujhe mere likes nahi mile. 😭 😛

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Finally u updated!!...Its awesome
loved it sooo much
n r u serious woh log pure 6 years baad mil rahe hai itna time gap😲
awww loved archie-shaks bonding...
amar hai kiske saath dat shakti is feeling bad...
n i guess "they're" her parents just a guess
eagerly waiting for the next part n itna bada page demand u r sachi mai badi devil...

Hehe, yes di. Finally I did. 😆

Thanks a lot di. 😊

Yes di, I am serious. You'll come to know soon. 😳

Bas hai koi - woh bhi aapko pata chal hi jaayega! 😛

Um, maybe!

Hehe, di comparitively toh chota hai! 😳 I'll try and update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: prrk86
loved it thanks

Thanks and you're welcome. 😊

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Awesome updt..

Loved Archie n Shaks bonding..

If Im correct I guess him n here 'her' is charlie.

It was fabulous.

Eagerly waiting for d next updt.

Thanks a lot di.

Di, it's no fayda hiding this 'her' part. I so not want to include Charlie here, but I don't know who else to bring in if not her. Am hell lots of confused. Help me with it if you can! 😳

Um,next update I hope you wouldn't mind reading. It's just a filler and happy update. No sadism. 😛

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome update...loved it very much
loved the bonding of D3 gang with shakti and jack flirting with sam thats soo sweet
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon

Thanks a lot di. 😊

Hehe, thank you.

I'll try and update soon.

Originally posted by: tinatartari
tats nt fair aditi
such a short update aftr so many days n tat 2 ended in a cliffhanger
plx plx plx continue soon

Sorry di, but jyada time nahi mil paa raha hai. Will update in some time. Let's see how things work out for m. Really sorry. 😳

Originally posted by: chsripriya
amazing yaar no words archie and shakti r such good frnds and everyone there r so sweet and amazing loved it especially shan's comment loved the update plz update soon and thnx for pm me

Thanks a lot di, thanks a lot. 😊

I'll try and update soon. 😳

Oh, you're welcome. 😊

Originally posted by: crazysky
wow plz pm me

Thanks and sure, I will di. Add the Id - KriyaanshFF for PM's. 😳

Originally posted by: Love_Kunwar
the suspence!!!
i really like your concept!
i really want to know what happened between them...but a really good SS.

plzz continue soon 😊

Hehe, thanks a lot di. The mystery will soon start opening and you all will know everything. Thanks again di. I will di. 😊

Originally posted by: yogini64
OMG!! . . . 6 years 😲

& who is this gal who came in between 'arsha' 😡

shaks relation wid D3 gang is so adorable . . . . 😛

unlock the mystery soon 😳

Yes di, 6 years. Long na? . . . Bas hai koi girl. You'll come to know about it soon enough! 😛 . . . . Aw, thanks a lot di. 😊 . . . . . Haha, aisi bhi kya jaldi hai di. I'll take my sweet time! 😆 Rofl, jokes apart, I'll unlock it soon. After one more mysterious update. 😉

Another one for which I was waiting like mad! 😆

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
*tada*🤣 🤣
u r back 🤗
i really missing ur ff/ss/os dear n sply dat kriyaansh n arsha ff...pls use b upload kr na sweety 😊

n coming to dis update
hell!!!!!!!!!!! dis is really short part
bt i knw u r busy...so maaf kia 😛
n wowD3 gang b include kia
n aww finally tune tanha ko b yaha couple bna dia..hehehe
aditi is aditi 😉

n agree JACK jha ladki dekhi in waha fisla...hahaha 🤣 🤣
n aww he is standing wid her *sigh*
love dis update so much as usual

ab nxt pls jaldi se arsha ya kriyaansh ff update krio
i m waiting despiratly 4 dat

n yeah our devil is back
bt i m loving dis
coz i rili missing ur dis habbit
so comon asma lg jate h kaam par...hehe
love u sweety ❤️
take care😊

Haha, yeah *tada* I'm back! 🤣

Aw, no worries di. Now I am back with a bang! 😆

I know di. But I want to finish this one first and then begin with the rest all with a fresh mind. So, yeah. I'll end this one in three more chapters (probably two) and an epilogue first and then start updating the rest. 😳

Hehe, again I know di. But kya karun time kam mil paa raha tha. Now that my vacations have begun, (Finally - Yay!!) I'll try and give bigger updates! 😊

Lol, how can I forget the D3 gang. And specially - my favorite - KriCky or Shakti-Archie bond! 😛 And TanHa are meant to be together, Toh isliye unhein bhi together karna zaroori tha! 😆

Lol, flirts I tell you! 🤣 🤣

And yes, 'she' is standing with him! 🤢

Thanks a lot di. 😊

Lol, usmein thoda time lagega. 🤢 I've told you the reason above. 😳

Yes, the DEVIL is back. Back with a bang! 🤣

Aw, love you too di and you too take care! 😊 🤗

Originally posted by: kaba3003
Amazing update:):)
Luvd it:):)
Waiting for d next part:):):)
Thanx for d pm:)

Thanks a lot dear. 😊

I'll try and update soon. 😳

Oh, you're welcome. 😃

Will reply to everyone later. Abhi it's not possible. Sorry. 😳

P.s - Guys my laptop crashed. Don't know when will I be able to update. Let's see. Really sorry for the inconvenience. Though I'll try my best to make it soon. 😳

Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 13 years ago