So Close, Yet So Far!! - Chapter 4 - Pg 61 - 27/05

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So, here are the replies to all your comments. 😛 Thanks so much for reading my fan fic and commenting. Thanks so much for the lovely comments. I'm glad you're liking it. I'm going to post Chapter 3 soon. 😳

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
*RES*

Will wait for the unres di. 😳

Originally posted by: The007Shivani
thank god there is no demand but thanks for the update and next time plz put a link in pm it was hard to find this

and yeah sorry for short commenting i have 1 day to finish my project and it is already like 1 here in the afternoon and also have guests over at night

Yeah, I know. There isn't! :)

I will for sure. Was in a hurry this time.

No need of sorry yar. Chalta hai! :D

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
dat was amazing sweety
i love it
awww kruti n shaks relation is jst i cn't describe...n i love jack n shaks sweet moment
n den giraya tune bomb AMARJEET i was also too shock...i was xpecting AMAR only bt AMARJEET...hmmm seems intrsting story...n kch kch idea to tune de hi dia h
n thnk god is bar demand ni h 😃

Thanks a lot di.

Haha, see I'm so good at giving shocks! 😳

Lol, you know it I guess! 😛

Lol, aapko nahi hoga idea, toh aur kisse hoga! 😆

Lol, just wait for the next time! 😉

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

yeah dear i m okk nw...actually mjhe koi mind prblm h to kb headache strt ho jata h pta hi ni chlta...n headache jb hota h to i cn't tell uu aisa lgta h ki abhi bomb fatega...bt i m fyn nw dear 😊

Oh, oka di. I'm glad you are ok. 😊

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
Amazing!!!

Thanks. :)

Originally posted by: asmaju
Awesome update aditi.
pari plz dont strain urself.
i dont know but felt a bit pain while readin this update.
shayad kuch ho.
dont know..
it was short and cute update.
and i can understand wen ppl cant even press like 4 a sec.
take care.
update next part at ur pace.
i wont force u .
update ka comment exactly wil give u 2morrow.
as u know the reason.

Thanks a lot di. 😊 Dil Se Di, Dil Se! 😛

Of course di, I will not. After all, kissi ne mujhse kaha tha ki health is more important than all this! 😳

Um, you must have felt di. After all, it's supposed to be a l'le sad!

I know di. Sorry for the short part. But aapko toh pata hai na! 😳

You too take care di. 😊

Oh, don't worry di. I will and I did it at my pace. I updated exactly one day before it completed one month! 😆

I know the reason very well. And no pressures from my side. Comment whenever you'd like to. 😃

Originally posted by: asmaju

Thanks a lot for the bada waala comment meri pyari Cinderella! Love You!! 🤗

Originally posted by: 21Neha21
first of all a bone crashing hug to u🤗
thank u so much for dis lovely SS..
n i m realy sory my devil..couldnt read it earlier...
but i didnt want to read it in a hurry...sory..😛
n i loved d SS...its so amazing..
luv u a lot for giving us a yet another wonderful FF..
u have written it so beautifully n its full of suspense...
i so want to know whats d party is all about..whats d matter bw arsha and shakti calling kunwar amarjeet..!!
dat was really shocking...dat means something very serious has happend..
i realy cant wait to read more..but i know ki u r realy busy..so i'l wait..but dats going to be realy tough for me...

Aw, *Huggies* *Huggies* 🤗 🤗

Ismein thanks ki kya zarurat hai di? 😡 Chalo, take it back! 😛

I know di, why you couldn't read it and I absolutely understand and respect your opinion. So no need for sorry. Now take this also back! 🤣 🤣

Thanks a lot di. 😊 I'm glad you liked it! 😃

Um party ke abouts - next to next update. 😊

And rahi baat about the matter between Arsha - toh that's going to be the last update. 😳

I know di. I was shocked too!! 😲 ( I sound more like a reader na? 🤣 ) And it's sort off serious! 😳

Dekho di - aap wait nahi kar paa rahe the toh maine 10 days pehle hi update kar diya. Specially for you and Asma di. You guys rock! 😆

Love you too di and thanks for your lamba-lamba waala comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: kittu_arsha
This Was Awesome..Pleasee PM me next whenever u Update 😛

Thanks a lot dear. 😊 Um add the Id - KriyaanshFF - to your buddy list for PM's. I don't send PM's from this Id. 😳

Originally posted by: ASMI98
loved the update...shakti meeting all her friends of did...😊

Thanks a lot di. Yeah, she is. 😊

Originally posted by: chsripriya
she called him amarjeet 😕 lets see plz update soon and thnx for pm me

Yeah, she did!
I will try to di. No promises. 😳

You're welcome. 😊

Originally posted by: medha16
nice update...something is gravely wrong it seems...waiting 4 d mystery to reveal itself!

Thanks a lot di.
I think so. Can't say anything now! 😳

Mystery will reveal. Soon. 😆

Originally posted by: yogini64
Shakti is enjoying meeting her DID frnds . . . But she called him- amarjeet . . . . . It pinched me too 😔 . . . . . It seemed like a formality that she needed to greet a guest 😭 . . . . Pata nhi itna kyun ladte hai dono... Can't see them apart.. 😛

Of course she is di - She had been away from them for so long! 🤢 . . Yeah, she did! Shocking na? . . . Of course di. It was a formality only. I'm glad ki aap samajh gaye! 😳 . . . . Maybe it's a l'le serious than the normal fights. Maybe -- well leave it for the future update to reveal. 😛 . . . . . Me too di. But life isn't that easy. There are thorns on a rose flower as well along with the beautiful rose itself. . . . . . . Did you notice, today I replied to you in your dot-dot style. It's pretty exclusive, isn't it? 😛 . . . . . . . Thanks for the bada sa comment di, thanks a lot! 🤗

Originally posted by: anniemathias
it was awesome as always
u r too gud the way u explain relation between jack and shakti was mindblowing
i was shock to know shakti called amar as amarjeet well done

Thanks a lot dear.
Well, you know - friendship is 'my' forte! 😃

I know dear. I was feeling sad even writing it. So can understand how it exactly feels! 😳

And, and, and. I almost forgot. 😳 Thanks a lot for filling my thread with such awesome ArSha pictures. Thanks a lot. They have improved the beauty of my thread. Love you dear and I hope I keep entertaining you guys in the same way throughout! 😊

Originally posted by: D3FAN
great update aww i wonder what had happened between them thnx 4 da pm

Thanks a lot dear.
You'll get to know that soon enough! 😳

You're welcome.

Originally posted by: prrk86
ho shakti addressed kuwar as amarjeet
nice update thanks

Ya, she did that! Shocking, isn't it ?

Thanks a lot and you're welcome ( though I don't know for what! 😳 ). 😃

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome update...loved it very much
loved the masti of jack and shakti and bonding of kruti and shakti

Thanks a lot Cherry di!
I'm glad you liked it! 😊

Hehe, I loved that part too! 😆 😛

Originally posted by: PD_puja
Dat ws nyc...luvd it...bt shaks ne amar ko amarjeet adress kia...shocking!!!wanna knw d reason...jarur kuc badi problem hui hogi...
Luvd dat little jack n shaks wala convo...so sweet...
Update wenevr u get tym...bt plz krna zarur...:)

Thanks a lot di ... I'm glad you liked it! 😊 ... Yeah I know di. I was shocked too! 😲 ... You will get to know that soon di - just in the last update. 🤣 😳 ... I think so di. I can't say anything as of now 😳 ... Hehe, thank you di ... I will di. I'm not going to leave anything hanging in air - it'll make me and you all both sad. So I will update for sure. Just the timing is not confirmed! 😳

Originally posted by: ArSha_Forever
Awesome :)

Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: Arsha1994
Awesum prt...
Kurti & shakti relation ws cute...
Jack & shakz wer so sweet...
Shakz called him AMARJEET...
Interesting stry...waitin fr d nxt updt...

Thanks a lot di! 😊

Ya she did. 😲
Oh, thank you! I'll try and update soon! 😳

Originally posted by: Nirju99
superv update

Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha
res

Will wait for the unres dear! 😳

Originally posted by: tinatartari
it ws fab bt lil sad tat shaks callng him amarjeet!!!
evry1 calls him amar n she...idk y z she dng this bt definitely sm1 z heart must b broken cx ov tat!!

Thanks di. Ya know di that it is shocking, but there is a reason behind everything happening. I know who you are thinking might be hurt, but when you know the whole reason, I'm a 101% sure that you'll change the person you are thinking about! 😳

Originally posted by: geethapapi
its really nice1 and sorry 4 the late comment 😉

Thanks a lot dear and no problem. No need of sorry. You commented is enough for me! 😊

Originally posted by: crazysky
its lovely

Thanks a lot di! 😊

*Phew*

It's like finally I'm done! 😛

Finally finished replying to each and every one of you. I hope you see this post as well. 😳

I know I took a little extra time this time to reply but was really busy. Sorry for the trouble guys. 😳

Love you all!
Don't forget to check the three posts on the next page for my introductory speech, update and the much dreaded note. This time it contains a little note for my OS readers as well. 😡 😳

Take care and have fun. Adios.

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Hello Everyone.

Yeah yeah, it's me only. 😛

Well I'm early. According to the schedule, I had 10 more free days.
Well, anyways, here I am.
Hope you missed this SS. 😆

Anyways, I'll be updating in some time.
The update is for a few people.
My Cinderella - you know why!!
Neha di - I don't want to tell here why! 😳 And because I love you! 😆 🤗
Shaffy di and Puja di - Welcome back! :D

Deetha di - I miss you! 😒

Well not to forget, this one is also for all my darlings jinhein maine uss din woh khatarnak (as some said) sa message bheja tha. Sorry guys, but main paagal ho gayi thi and mujhe pata nahi kyun laga ki aap sab mujhe bhool gaye! 😳

So guys, finally I'm done with replying to each one of you. Sorry for being late but was caught up in some work. Check out the last post on the previous page or simply click here to check them out. Thanks.

Warning - Do check them out. It took me real long replying to each one of you.

Thanks.
Scroll down for the update. 😃

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Hi everyone, I'm back with Chapter 3. Please let me know what you think. Thanks again for reading and for your wonderful comments. Don't forget to check the post above! 😛 Happy reading!

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Chapter 3:

Kruti: Worry not, when we are here!

Someone: and we too.

Shakti was hell lot of surprised on hearing this voice. She could not believe it was really him. She turned slowly to face him and was even more surprised. He was not alone. All of them were together. Shakti stood like that in pin-drop silence for some time and then slowly came back to her senses. She ran up to him and engulfed him in a tight hug.

Shakti: O.M.G. Archie, is that really you?

Archie did not reply anything as he was too busy taking in her feeling again. It has been long since he last saw her. Or even heard her voice for that matter.

Sam: Uh! Not again.

Bharat: Woh akela nahi hai. Hum bhi hai.

Shakti pulled away and looked at them apologetically, pouting slightly. Archie just laughed at her expression. His arms were still wound around her waist. Shakti finally let go of his hold and met everyone individually.

Shakti: It's been so long guys. It seems like forever since we last met.

Sneha: Exactly Shaks. It's been six years.

Shakti: Long six years!

Shantanu: Well I didn't want to spoil your moment (eyeing the two who were still in between a hug), but to be precise it has been 6 years, 7 months, 3 weeks, 5 days, 13 hours, 47 minutes and some seconds.

Shakti let go off Sneha and ran into Shan's arms.

Shakti: You remember?

Archie (from behind): Of course, everyone does. We missed you so much Shaks. It's been hell without you.

Priyanka: Exactly! Everything has been so boring. It's not the same without you. You know, I'm just so happy that we are not D3ing anymore, because to be true, it was no fun without you.

Shakti: Aw mere pyaare pyaare bache. Common guys, cheer up. We are here for a fun event and not some rona-dhona event. Common let's enjoy.

Everyone hooted at this discussion and started mingling around. Shakti was standing with Priyanka, Vrinda and Kruti - her besties. She looked around to have a sight of everyone. Alisha was there with the DID people clearly missing old days and catching up with them. Jack was trying to flirt with Sam. Shakti giggled at seeing that. It was so like Jack. Ladki dikhi nahi and he's already trying. Further she saw, Shantanu and Sneha lost in their own world. And it took her no time to realise that finally the two fools understood their feelings. She decided to congratulate them later. Her gaze further moved on and settled on him - the last person she wanted to see. And it was then she noticed he was standing with 'her'. Her heart flinched and she felt bad. Involuntarily, she went to the past. It was for 'her' and him that everything was the way it is today. She closed her eyes to stop the much dreaded memories from coming back to her mind. She was in her own world, when Mukti's voice broke her concentration.

"What?" she asked irritated. "They're coming!", Mukti informed her. It was all that took Shakti to enter the hyper mode. She excused herself from everyone and ran up the stairs to a room with Mukti right behind her.

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So here it is. Please leave your comments and likes. I'm unsure of this part so please let me know what you thought. Enjoy your weekend! : )

Next update on page - 55
Remember - I didn't give any demand last time. Well this is to cover up! :P

76 ( 3 more added by this Id ) PM's sent. Hope to see 65 likes. 😊

Scroll down for my *ahem* *ahem* much dreaded note! 😳

Adios

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Short update? Yeah I know! But isn't something better than nothing?

Please bear with me guys. I'm really busy.

It was difficult for me to write this much only. 😳

Another mystery? The 'they're coming' part! Will surely be cleared in the next part.

P.s - Ignore the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. Am in a hurry and didn't have time to recheck! Sorry.

PPs - The SS is going to end in three-four more update. (Maybe more, if the length remains same. :P )
I've already typed the Epilogue part. But not the ones in between.

I'll try and update soon but can't promise.

A little note for all the OS readers. It's been two weeks since I wrote the next OS and it's still kept with me. But like I said if you'll not like, I'll not post. If you're stubborn then believe me I'm stubborner (if a word as such exists! :P). I have no problem in waiting but am not sure about you. So, when I post the next one totally depends upon you! 😳 Tada! 😆

Anyways, take care and enjoy. Don't forget to leave your comments.
Mind you - this time I want over 65 likes!! 😡

And the page demand you already know! 😛

Bye, Take care. See you soon with the next update.
Will update Ever After next, probably in the next couple of weeks. After 24th of May. Thanks for reading. : )

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

res

unres

It was amazing.

Lovely one.

The way Shaks and Archie bonded was so cute.

Lovely.

u dont know haow much happy i'm.

ha jha is liye tera mehanat kam kar gayi pari.

loved it.

pari back to devil mode woh bhi puri tarah se.

ek saat double demand.

likes aur pages🤗

aur tere cliff hanger ki tho mai😍

no idea tu kise lane wahi hai and y did she run inside room ???/

phir se shock hai shayad.

Update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

u updated...i m so happy...

n thanks a lot my sweet devil for mentioning me...loads of love n hugs to u...🤗 🤗

n d update...it was mind blowing...

d bond dat u showed bw shaks n archie was so adorable...😳

n den came d shock..6 years...!!!😲

i eyes literally popped out of my head...i m getting really restless now to know what has happened in dese 6 long years...plz sweets reveal dese mysteries now...

n den came another mystery..'they r coming'..y shaks was so effected bcz of dere arrival...😕

i really cant wait to read more...plz sweets try to update soon...😊

m waiting eagerly...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Finally u updated!!...Its awesome
loved it sooo much
n r u serious woh log pure 6 years baad mil rahe hai itna time gap😲
awww loved archie-shaks bonding...
amar hai kiske saath dat shakti is feeling bad...
n i guess "they're" her parents just a guess
eagerly waiting for the next part n itna bada page demand u r sachi mai badi devil...

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