ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed)

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-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Loved the OS...Can't wait to read the second part <33

Continue soon :$

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Well - I had already thanked everyone of you before - but I want to do it once again because this is the first OS of mine that got moved to the Fan-Fictions Forums!

Thank you sooo much, guys! You totally roocckk!! Muaahhh!!! 🤗

As promised; I continued with what I started with and realized that my ideas were actually turning out to be longer than I expected..! So I have decided that what I had originally planned to be a one-part OS will now be a 3-part Short-Story!! I don't know how many of you are excited to hear this news; but I definitely am! LOL! 😉...

So here I go with part two of Memories... I hope I managed to stay true to the concept of this OS throughout this part... This update might appear a bit stretched; but blame it on the length of the brainwave that hit my idiotic Brainwa!

Let me know how you find this part by dropping in a comment or hitting like...! Looking forward for your opinions!!! Criticism is always welcome!

Loads of love,

Pearl...

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Geet24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Hey Pearl ! I really loved the update Dear :)

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

It was awesome! Loved it :)

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Glimmer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Beautiful update !!!!!!!
Loved it !!!!!! Loving what payal is doing !!!!!
The way you wrote the update is superb !!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!!
Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!!
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Just read the edited part !!!! It was superb !!!!! The way you wrote Arnav imagining Khushi !!!!
And also the paragraph where Khushi runs off and her thoughts are written beautifully !!!!

Edited by Mysticnavya - 13 years ago

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ravenheart

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Pearl, very beautifully written. Loved it to bits. You are a gifted writer. do continue.

Savi

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

beautiful. speechless. loved the way you described each and every word. Fab update. thnx for the pm. =D update soon the nxt part.

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asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

soo beautiful!!! LOVED IT!!! :) :) simply superb!

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SARA

@zuaireah

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter one left me with moist eyes chapter two gave me hope of good things to come...every word written about the way he feels about her is amazing ...i'm speechless...u again kept me wanting more of this...😃

Edited by zuaireah - 13 years ago