ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed) - Page 7

hey i am just speechless...loved the way you have portayed arnav here...his emotions and everything was really intense...could you please PM me when you update this OS?..thanks

Originally posted by: -Zara-

wow! i sooo hope this happens best written angst piece yet!

xxx

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

and you call this a naive attempt?? This is amazing! The hurt, the pain, the longing, all so potent- and the imagery so strong I felt this wonderful sense of place :) And especially the poignant ending- a beautiful positive note with lots of possibilities for the future, and the symbolism as well...

TRULY BEAUTIFUL :) :)

Oh and I hope your exams went well:)

Originally posted by: pc17

Pearl! I loved this-your writing is as elegant and beautiful as your name! Absolutely loved it! I think you're fabulous when it comes to writing OSs 😉 You always brilliantly depict intense emotions.

Originally posted by: amitasaily

This is going to take much more than five minutes, as you said in your PM (Thanks for it).

It is going to stay on my mind the whole day.

FANTASTIC Piece of work.

Originally posted by: Lyraa99

r u gona continue this ... it was so beautiful.. u know m not reading anything these days and yet read two amazing pieces... I loved this mainly because even though it didnt have a happy ending in the true sense of the word, it gave hope...

beautiful work...

Originally posted by: Angels11

I absolutely loved this. Was v angsty & painful 👏

forum writers always seem 2 excel when they portray arnav's pain 😆

Originally posted by: Firebolt

I don't think you give yourself enough credit!! That was really good hon...Well written and i could totally feel Arnav's hurt/sadness/loneliness..

Can we have a happy ending, please?

Originally posted by: Shaf21

Aww...hs emotions...i cud imagine evry singl part f it sinc u hav ritb it soo wel...n here u r caln it a naive atempt...such an awsum os...lovd da way u had endd da os...'one chaptr is over...'...cn v expct a scnd part fr ds 2ooo...wud b glad f u rite a scnd part f ds os...n thanx alot f pming me dis os:)...gud job!u hav realy gud ritn skils!