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Posted: 13 years ago
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punjabi family...
hmmm any connection with their nainital trip???😉
nyway nice part
loved it 😊
Edited by ssnair - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
great work jaan
loved it ..loved it
aww why no precap ...oh well
plss update soon
and thnks for the pm
luv u
xxx
Edited by xsumi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ssnair

punjabi family...

hmmm any connection with their nainital trip???😉
nyway nice part
loved it 😊

hahah if u want to know then wait for chapter 11 😆
and thank u very much for keep on reading my boring post
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: xsumi

great work jaan

loved it ..loved it
aww why no precap ...oh well
plss update soon
and thnks for the pm
luv u
xxx

haha thank u very much Xsumi
😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Superb.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. Beautiful poem.
The Dhaba on the way to Nainital is where he is going.
Can't wait to read more.
Already added you.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
seriously dear u wrote so well
loved the way u update every time
keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Fab update! Finally someone is stepping up to him besides Khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 11: standing in the rain

Recap: arnav was looking for Khushi

Arnav was losing hope but suddenly a Punjabi family passed by and his brain's light up. He suddenly remembers a place where they went together and he didn't searched for her there so he decided to go and search for her there. Arnav took his car but on the way, the tire was flattening so he couldn't ride any longer. But he didn't give up; he walked all the way up the hill in Nenitaal. When he reached there, he saw her standing in the rain in front of the dhabba.

Khushi:

Hey Devi maiya, why do I always miss him maybe because I'm used to it now,

I swear Devi maiya, in front of god; I will one day make him bow,

How can he hurt me that much?

Now I am even scared by his touch

Devi maiya, how can u make someone's heart as hard as stone

When he says something painful, it's like he is taking out my bone

His touch is so sensitive and tender

Sometimes I feel like he will chop me off with the blender

After giving me so much harm

I still can't resist his charm

Standing alone here in the rain

I wish these droplets would shower away my pain

This rain is reminding me the moment when we first hug

I'm now so possessive about him; he is now just like my drug

But I won't forgive him so easily

I will give him the pain equally

Arnav had tears in his eyes while hearing this , he went towards her and kneel down, his actions said that he was asking for forgiveness and giving her a bow just like she was his god.

Arnav:

I know I'm sorry won't work but I still want to ask for forgiveness

I know that I shouldn't have made a deal just like marriage was a business

You are my god, and only to you I will bow

I know I was very mean and acted like an animal just like cow

But I regret for what I did, I no longer want to act like a kid

Before it was you who I wanted to get rid

But now I can't live without my breath

Unless u only want to see me on my death

You know sometimes I do not know how to stop the things I say.
Quickly building a defense against what come and what may.


May I learn how to treat you, as a good husband would?

I want your guide, because your training would be so very good

With saying that, arnav closed his eyes, Khushi kept scolding him and asking him to stand up, but he didn't. She bent down to see him, and she was so shocked and started panicking because he fainted. She picked him up with her bare hands, well he was quite heavy as he is a guy, and then the aunty came out of the dhabba and helped her.

Precap: Khushi taking care of Arnav

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sowwii for the late update guys.. i was quite busy these days. n bingo for the guess. all of u are so smart :p

Farah <3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. Very interesting.
So sad and painful.
Can't wait to read more.
Continue soon.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Hope He Finds Her :) 😳

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