New Maaneet FF Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na#2 link#3 pg142 - Page 43

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG piya u shocked me to core with all the five updates i missed
kya u turns, v-turns the ye...
god...mere pass words hi nahin hai...
naintara using maan...then an years leap...geet and maan doing a movie
maaneet married...
and finally the whole fiasco
god...abhi or u turns dekhne ko hai...
what do i say...ur just superbbb

great going and ur ff is just rocking
keep going yar
god bless
luvya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiiting..n still hating maan in this ff 😆
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Waiting... 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I am so sorry I was going to update yesterday but there was a power cut here in Pune so couldn't type nor post the update. Well here is the next part I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. After 2 updates that is in part 19 I would be introducing the next twist of this FF so be ready😉 😲
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PART 16

She looked at the mangalsutra and kissed it as if trying to indicate that for him maybe this relationship is a game or a drama but she would always remain committed and sincere towards this special bond

Meanwhile,

The news of Maaneet's marriage reached Prem

He dialed Geet's number to congratulate her. Adi entered his cabin exactly at that point of time

Geet's pain reduced to a great extent just by seeing Prem's name flashing on her mobile screen

Geet: Hello Prem

Prem: Hello Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana

Prem was expecting a shy smile or a sweet blush from Geet and this was the only reason why he had addressed her like this but as soon as Geet heard this name she recollected Maan's words that Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana sounds really funny

Prem loved Geet to such an extent that he understood the language of her silence as well

Prem: Kya hua Geet tum khush nahi ho? [What's the matter Geet aren't u happy?]

Geet wiped her tears and tried to sound normal

Geet: Ye tumse kisne keh diya Prem aaj meri zindagi ka sabse bada din hai aaj maine mera pyar paa liya hai meri puri duniya mujhe mil gayi hai [No Prem today is the most wonderful day of my life as I got my love, my world within my folds today]

Prem: Kabhi kabhi sab kuch milne k baad bhi hum adhure hothe hai Geet' kisse jhooth bolne ki koshish kar rahi ho apne dost se aur wo bhi tumhara aisa dost jo tumhari saason ki daastan meelo dur rehkar bhi padh saktha hai [Sometimes we stay incomplete inspite of getting everything'why r u hiding the truth Geet and that too from me, your friend who can read the story of your breath precisely even if he is miles apart]

Geet: Nahi Prem aisa nahi hai [No Prem it's not the way u r thinking]

Prem: Geet ye Prem tumhe kafi ache se jaanta aur pehchanta hai tumhare dil ki har tamanna ko khilthe aur bhikerthe hue maine dekha hai iss liye mere liye ye samajna mushkil nahi hai k tum kab dil se khush ho aur kab duniya k liye apne chehre pe ek dhikawe ki muskurahat laane par majboor [Geet this Prem recognizes u very well as he has seen the desires of your heart being bloomed as well as getting shattered apart I can distinguish very well when your heart rejoices and dances in real and when u try to put up a fake smile in front of this world]

Geet: (thinking) Itne kum samay mein tum mujhe kitne kareeb se pehchanthe ho Prem aur Maan jiske saath maine itna waqt guzara unhe laga k main unke iss natak mein unka saath dungi ek baar bhi ye nahi socha unhone k ek ladki k liye shaadi k sahi maaiyne kya hai' [U know me so well and that too in such a small duration of time but Maan who has spend such a long time with me thought that I would happily participate in his drama he didn't even think what significance does the institution of marriage hold in a girl's life]

Prem: Tumhari khamoshi kafi kuch bol gayi Geet bus ek sachhe dost k naate tumse ek baat kahunga kisi se aakh mundar pyar karne mein koi kharabhi nahi par kabhi bhi uss pyar ko apni kamzori banne mat dena usse apni taakat banakar andhere raasto ko ujaagar karne mein istamal karna' Kismat ne tumhe agar apne pyar se milaya hai toh uss pyar ko apne pyar ka ehsaas dilau [Your silence has spoken a lot Geet as a true friend I will only tell u it's good to love someone beyond sanity but never make your love your weak point use it like ur strength to enlighten the dark path with the divine light called love'Destiny has gifted u a chance to claim your love back use this opportunity to the fullest and make him realize the beauty of ur true love]

Prem: Humesha yaad rakhna Geet duniya idhar ki udhar ho jaaye par tumhara ye dost humesha tumhara haath thame tumhara saath dega jab bhi meri zarurat ho mujhe yaad karlena Geet tum mujhe humesha apne paas paayogi [Remember Geet this world might change but ur friend will always stand by your side holding your hands just give me an indication whenever u need me I promise to be with u that very moment]

Geet: Thanks Prem

Prem: Meri Geet ka khayal rakhna aur yaad rahe meri Geet ki aakhon mein aasu aane na paaye warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga jaanti hona mujhe gusa aata hai toh kya hotha hai [Take care of my Geet and remember I don't want to see even a lone tear in her eyes otherwise I would get angry and u very well know what happens when I get angry]

Geet: Haan pata hai ek pal ka aisa gussa jo agle hi pal mein udanchu ho jaata hai [Yes your anger cannot last even for a second it comes and goes the very next moment]

Prem (making a puppy dog face) Genuine insaan k sincere feelings ki koi kadar hi nahi hai yaar [There is no value for the sincere feelings of a genuine man]

Geet bursts out laughing

Prem was very happy on hearing the musical tune of her laughter. His heart was content that he was successful in erasing some pain of her heart

Prem: Apna khayal rakhna Geet [Take care Geet]

Geet: Tum bhi [U too]

The call ends

All the belongings of Geet had arrived at Maan's bungalow by that time. Maan was busy giving instructions to the servants he did not give a second look to Geet neither did he bother to ask her who was the person with whom she was talking so freely' Geet waited for few seconds look forward to gain some attention but she was left disappointed and she finally went to the washroom to freshen up

After some time she stepped out of the washroom and saw their room decorated with beautiful flowers of different types and sizes. The whole setting was so beautiful that it appeared like a magical paradise

Geet: (thinking) Achha toh Maan Nakul se ye flowers ka arrangement karne ko keh rahe the chalo unhe kumsekum mere favourite phool ki pehchaan abhi bhi hai [Oh so Maan was instructing Nakul to get these flowers atleast he still remembers my favourite flowers]

Geet took a red rose and looked at it lovingly when Maan entered their room

She was just about to thank him when Maan started the conversation

Maan: Dekha Geet main na kehtha tha k humare fans kitne crazy hai dekho itne kum time mein itne saare flowers bhej diye par najjane kyun saare k saare red roses hai ab 2 famous Bollywood superstars ki shadi par itne maamuli middleclass type k red roses koi kyun bhejega? Inhe dekhar yun lag raha hai jaise k ye kisi k favourites hai aur issliye unhe jaanbujhkar bheja gaya hai mujhe toh red roses bilkul bhi nahi pasand 'kuch dhang ka toh gift bhej dethe u know kuch mengha ye roses toh ek haadh din mein murjaa jaayenge phir inka kya kaam inn roses ki kismat toh aakirkaar kachre ka dabba hi hai [Hey Geet look I was right we have a crazy fan following and here is the proof within such a small time our room has got flooded with flowers but boy the thinking level of ur fans is so cheap. 2 of the most famous Bollywood celebrities have tied the knot and they are sending these stupid middleclass level red roses as a gift. I can't understand why did they choose red roses only they could have purchased some nice expensive gifts that we could have cherished. I really hate red roses they have flooded my bungalow with it as if it is someone's favourite'such roses have only one fate and that is dustbin]

Maan: Achha Geet tum taiyaar hokar hall mein aa jau [Okay Geet u get ready and come to the hall]

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k76iZzd7NOU

Oh ranjhe majiya charayiya Oh ranjhe majiya charaiya

Doli le gayenaikhed ve lag gaye nain avade

Ve lag gaye nain avede ve lag gaye nain avede

Maan did not wait for any answer and left the room. Geet's eyes were fixed on the retreating figure of Maan'her finger moved to the stem of the rose and got pricked by the thorn. It was not only her finger but also her heart that was bleeding as she realized that Maan does not even remember the name and the color of her favourite flower and she was thinking that Maan had made all these arrangements for making her feel special maybe not as a wife but atleast as a friend'

Sab ki baaratein aayi doli tub hi laana

Sab ki baaratein aayi doli tub hi laana

Dulhan banake humko rajaji le jaana

Sab ki baaratein aayi'

She smiled at the foolishness of her heart and walked towards the mirror. The reflection of her mangalsutra in the mirror made her emotional as she imagined herself as a newlywed traditional bride whose eyes were busy weaving dreams of a bright and blissful future.

She was just about to touch the imaginary image of hers when all of a sudden her red bridal wear got converted into a white saree making her realize that there her dream was baseless. She might be the bride of Maan for the world but her presence or absence was not at all significant to him' the condition of a non living entity was much better than hers'

Her thoughts were broken as Nakul informed Geet that Maan was calling her urgently in the living room

Geet fixed her hair and walked towards the hall

Maan was standing in the balcony as soon as he saw Geet he went and took her in his embrace

Geet's heart got a temporary relief with this act of Maan she rested her head on his shoulder and Maan started guiding her towards the balcony

Geet was happy as she was sure this was not a publicity act as no one was present at that place other than the two of them

For a second she felt that she has once again got her best friend back who was capable of understanding the feeling of her heart to some extent

As soon as they reached the balcony Maan placed a kiss on her cheek Geet was so vulnerable to his touch that she could not stop her cheeks from getting red

Maan took his lips towards her ear and whispered softly

Maan: Bevakoofo ki kami nahi hai iss duniya mein ek example toh humare nazro k saamne hi hai [The world is full of fools an example of which is right in front of our eyes]

Geet lifted her eyelashes and looked in a downward direction from the balcony

Chaha tha maine socha tha maine kya kya the arman dil naadan k

Aaakhon mein aasu aaye haye

Aaakhon mein aasu aaye par koi na aaya

Ab toh kisi ko bhi apnake hai bulana sab ki baaratein aayi'

Maaneet fans had gathered at Maan's place to give them their good wishes for a happily married life. Once again her heart was broken to a million pieces as she realized that the kiss, the hug was once again a means of gaining publicity by showing the world that both of them are indeed husband and wife'She could not control her tears and few precious pearls crossed the barrier of her eyes and rolled down her cheeks

Music

Maan: Nahi Geet ab toh inn aakhon mein khushi k aasu bhi main bardash nahi kar saktha aaj se inn aakhon mein bus mere pyar ki jhilmilahat hogi aur tumhare hotho par mere pyar k taarane..main tumhari zindagi khushiyon se bhar dunga ye vaada hai tumhare Maan ka [No Geet from today I won't tolerate these tears in your eyes even if they signify happiness as from now onwards your eyes will only sparkle with my love and your lips will sing the tunes of my love'I will fill your life with loads of happiness this is the promise of your Maan]

Maan delivered this sentence in a voice that was loud enough for the fans to hear'all the fans started cheering and dancing in joy after hearing such a love filled statement of Maan

Inn aakhon mein thi ek raat saji haatho mein kabhi chudi thi baji

Par aakh khuli toh aaya nazar na raat saji na chudi si baji'

Maan tightened his grip on Geet's waist and kissed her tears away'The fans started whistling on watching the love of Maan for Geet but Geet's heart was silently crying in pain'she had always dreamt of this day but today Maan's touch was not giving her any pleasure infact it was acting like a slow poison which was destroying her whole existence

Mera tuta tha dil uski jhankar thi saara wo rang tha mere khoone dil ka

Maan happily waved his hand in the direction of the fans and gave some flying kisses to them after which he closed the balcony with the curtains. As soon as they were far away from the media and public attention Maan removed his hand from her waist roughly and left for his room. Geet was dying a slow death with every passing moment

Geet sat on the sofa and started to think about the outcome of this incident in the long run as she felt that more than Maan she was the one who was fooling herself

As she was lost in her own thoughts Maan walked to her with a beautiful smile on his face

Maan: Geet jaanti ho humare ek chothe se plan ne aaj humare charo tarah paiso ka tajmahal khada kar diya hai pata hai saare bade bade directors k offers aa rahe hai hume lekar film banane k liye aur jaanti ho sabse badi baat unhone jo price hum dono ko offer ki hai maine uss price ka triple quote kiya aur saare directors ne meri maang maanli'dekha Geet main tumhari kitni care karta hoon khud k saath saath tumhara bhi fayda karwa diya ab toh hum milkar paiso k samundar mein dupkiyaan lagayenge give me a Hi Fi darling [Geet do u know the small plan that we executed today has gifted us with a Tajmahal of money haha offers are pouring in like water and big big directors are interested to make movies with both of us; taking advantage of the situation I demanded a price triple than the money that the directors were quoting and guess what all of them have agreed. You have to agree Geet that I really care for you just look along with my benefit I have made u benefit as well now very soon both of us would be swimming in an ocean of money. Give me a Hi 5 darling]

Ye toh hai rona dil ka'haye ye toh hai rona dil ka khaheka tarana

Ab toh kisi ko bhi apnake hai bulana

Maan plays a romantic music and forces Geet to dance with him'Geet was physically present but her soul had left her body long back in search of her true existence

They continued dancing for some time and Maan purposely chose some romantic dance steps;Geet was trying to fight a battle between her heart and her mind'

After some time they ended their dance and Maan went towards a particular direction and removed the camera from there

Maan: Geet iss camera mein humare dance ka video recorded hai main issmein se kuch ache pics lekar kisi bhi tarah mediawalo tak paucha dunga aur isse humare publicity k mission ko aur kamiyaabi mil jaayegi [Geet this camera has captured the video of our dance and now I will chose some pics and by some means or the other I will make sure that these photos reach the media it will definetly boost our mission of gaining more publicity]

Sab ki barate aayi doli tub hi laana dulhan banake humko rajaji le jaana

Sab ki baaratein aayi

Maan left from there and Geet was forced to take a decision

Geet: (thinking) Nahi Maan mera pyar koi khel nahi hai ab main aapko sachhe pyar ka ehsaas dilaungi shadi kya hai rishte ki aihemiyat paiso se kitni badi hai aur pati patni k rishte ki pavitrata kya hothi hai ye main aapko bataungi aapko badalna hoga Maan mera pyar aapke andar chupe hue uss Maan ko bahar le aayega jo rishto ki kadar karna jaanta ho [No Maan my love is not a game I will make u realize the divinity of the bond called marriage I will make sure that u understand that relationships are more important than money I will show u how pure is the relationship that a husband and wife share'U will have to change Maan my love will bring out the original Maan who has got lost in the dark well of money and fame'my love will change u Maan]

Geet: (thinking) Ye Rishta bhale hi intefaq se juda hai par iss rishte ko main kamiyaabi ki bulandiyoon tak paucha k rahungi'ye Geet Maan Singh Khurana ka vaada hai [We got into this relationship accidently but I will make sure that our relationship works to such an extent that it reaches the heights of success'This is a promise of Geet Maan Singh Khurana]

PRECAP: Geet starts her mission 😉

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Once again guys be ready for the coming twists😭😲

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
this Maan is a jerk...don't like him at all...he only thinks about himself and doesn't care a fig about Geet...
can't wait for the next part...
BTW moi wanna see geet in sherni Avtaar...
can't see her suffering like this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahhh love this strong geet 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update loved the precap ..Hope to see strong geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
hate maan to the core


bloody bas***d...

irrittasing

how cheap to gain publicity
even forget his friend geet


which ws or will be dere whole life.

bt he wants money


want twists

jaldui
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.
Feeling very bad for geet.😭 Maan is so mean in this...bt i knw Geet wil change her. All d best to geet.😊 I knw c wil succeed in her mission.

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