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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahahahaha awesum writting luved every bit of it
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This line had me ROFLing🤣!!! "Does Bhai know? Payal, we didn't ask Bhai before we decided to have a baby!" I mean really!!!!
LOVED the update and thank you for the PM!!!!😃
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That's great!Emergency now,sorry for the short comment but great writing!
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haha...hilarious!!!!!😆😆😆😆
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Love it hahahahha👏👍🏼

Does Bhai know? Payal, we didn't ask Bhai before we decided to have a baby!"

this was the height hahahahhahah
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So now my freedom days are over! I'll have a little sibling to take care of, set a good example. I mean, I'm amazed to see how much Akash Chacho looks up to my dad. I'll have to be a better person, not that i'm not perfect as it is!

... FANTASTIC!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update!
my mind is craving for more...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
😲If Shyam had been my dad, I would have given myself up for adoption the day I was born. 😆 Ur dad wouldnt have let u being born. No matter what. The job u were doing "trying to interrupt Rabba Ves" would have been taken up by your dad then😆


Went to walk with dad at the park without Mum and anything in a skirt seemed to be trying to chat to him, thinking he was some bloke called Barun (I strongly suspect they were all from that IF organisation) Dude we've got every info about him. What time which park he goes...ur Manorama dadi n mum arent the only detectives in the world 😆

But then finally dad got frustrated and yelled "What the" and said with clenched teeth, "I'm not Barun, dammit" making all the girls scurry away. *sigh* cant your dad enjoy some attention? Give him some lessons dude

The last time he talked nicely to a pretty girl, Mum would send him to sleep in my room for a week! But I don't think of that as a punishment. I don't think dad's dying to sleep with mum at night! Whats so terribly exciting about that? But she just has got a bit of a temper, I guess. 😳 Baby..why think too much about things you cant understand? Go..go think about Sarah or Laxmi


So that seemed a little fishy. Then she went to Anjali bua and whispered something, which made Anjali bua giggle like crazy and announce that she was holding a puja right away. *banging my head on wall* tell me Ashar..do you love your bua? Would u miss her if she went away somewhere? Coz if 1 more time she holds a puja I'll kidnap her!!!!

I felt the ground slip beneath my feet! How stupid I've been! I only thought Mum and Dad were capable of having more children through their Rabba Ve's, but here Akash Chacho and Payal mausi were having their own. I felt like a complete idiot! I should have kept an eye on them when they played their 'hide and seek' My poor baby..u've got so many jobs to do..and to think u r only 2 yrs old. Ur resume is going to be very entertaining😆

ran and hugged Payal Mausi, shocking Naani so much that she dropped Laxmi! 😲 That is a wonder of the world

So now my freedom days are over! I'll have a little sibling to take care of, set a good example. I mean, I'm amazed to see how much Akash Chacho looks up to my dad. I'll have to be a better person, not that i'm not perfect as it is! Ahan? Riiight!!! 😉

Akash Chacho is one sweet guy but he's too dependant on my dad, if you know what I mean. When Payal Mausi told him about him becoming a dad, he looked dazed with happiness when suddenly with a frown he asked, "Does Bhai know? Payal, we didn't ask Bhai before we decided to have a baby!" 😲😲😲 Your Akash chachu is seriously tooo dependent on your dad. Why did both have to marry?

Payal Mausi manage to stammer, "Akash Ji, humaray zehen hi me nai aya..." and Akash Chacho replied, "Chalo next time, be careful" he said, hugging her while she blushed furiously. 😲 I'm speechless yaar! Your Payal mausi too...*sigh* seems like ur house is under Arnav colonisation n everyone is within Arnav rekha

Just for 2 days I didn't interrupt my Mum and Dad's Rabba Ve thinking the damage was already done and now this?! Baby...u should never leave ur parents alone...u dont know, when ur parents were kidnapped in that hut..lets not go to it. I'll tell u all about it once u r of my age. Anyways u left them for 2 whole days????? See? Kitna damage ho gaya 🤣

Sarah is coming round for an audience with your's truely! Nice nice. Chupke chupke planning ur Rabba Ve? Not done! Tell your mum n dad na... N do tell me their reaction 🤣
Pehle it was daddyji with Lavanya. Now betaji with Lavanya's daughter! Hmpph! This peedhi seems to be very lucky with Raizada men. No no no no no! Dont waste your time solving this mystery. See behind ur back! OMG! Your parents are having a Rabba Ve! Go ruuun! 🤣

Hats off to you Fari! Amazing part!
Thanks a bunch for the PM😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

😲If Shyam had been my dad, I would have given myself up for adoption the day I was born.😆Ur dad wouldnt have let u being born. No matter what. The job u were doing "trying to interrupt Rabba Ves" would have been taken up by your dad then😆

Went to walk with dad at the park without Mum and anything in a skirt seemed to be trying to chat to him, thinking he was some bloke called Barun (I strongly suspect they were all from that IF organisation) Dude we've got every info about him. What time which park he goes...ur Manorama dadi n mum arent the only detectives in the world😆

But then finally dad got frustrated and yelled "What the" and said with clenched teeth, "I'm not Barun, dammit" making all the girls scurry away. *sigh* cant your dad enjoy some attention? Give him some lessons dude

The last time he talked nicely to a pretty girl, Mum would send him to sleep in my room for a week! But I don't think of that as a punishment. I don't think dad's dying to sleep with mum at night! Whats so terribly exciting about that? But she just has got a bit of a temper, I guess.😳Baby..why think too much about things you cant understand? Go..go think about Sarah or Laxmi


So that seemed a little fishy. Then she went to Anjali bua and whispered something, which made Anjali bua giggle like crazy and announce that she was holding a puja right away. *banging my head on wall* tell me Ashar..do you love your bua? Would u miss her if she went away somewhere? Coz if 1 more time she holds a puja I'll kidnap her!!!!

I felt the ground slip beneath my feet! How stupid I've been! I only thought Mum and Dad were capable of having more children through their Rabba Ve's, but here Akash Chacho and Payal mausi were having their own. I felt like a complete idiot! I should have kept an eye on them when they played their 'hide and seek' My poor baby..u've got so many jobs to do..and to think u r only 2 yrs old. Ur resume is going to be very entertaining😆

ran and hugged Payal Mausi, shocking Naani so much that she dropped Laxmi!😲That is a wonder of the world

So now my freedom days are over! I'll have a little sibling to take care of, set a good example. I mean, I'm amazed to see how much Akash Chacho looks up to my dad. I'll have to be a better person, not that i'm not perfect as it is! Ahan? Riiight!!!😉

Akash Chacho is one sweet guy but he's too dependant on my dad, if you know what I mean. When Payal Mausi told him about him becoming a dad, he looked dazed with happiness when suddenly with a frown he asked, "Does Bhai know? Payal, we didn't ask Bhai before we decided to have a baby!" 😲😲😲Your Akash chachu is seriously tooo dependent on your dad. Why did both have to marry?

Payal Mausi manage to stammer, "Akash Ji, humaray zehen hi me nai aya..." and Akash Chacho replied, "Chalo next time, be careful" he said, hugging her while she blushed furiously.😲I'm speechless yaar! Your Payal mausi too...*sigh* seems like ur house is under Arnav colonisation n everyone is within Arnav rekha

Just for 2 days I didn't interrupt my Mum and Dad's Rabba Ve thinking the damage was already done and now this?! Baby...u should never leave ur parents alone...u dont know, when ur parents were kidnapped in that hut..lets not go to it. I'll tell u all about it once u r of my age. Anyways u left them for 2 whole days????? See? Kitna damage ho gaya🤣

Sarah is coming round for an audience with your's truely! Nice nice. Chupke chupke planning ur Rabba Ve? Not done! Tell your mum n dad na... N do tell me their reaction🤣

Pehle it was daddyji with Lavanya. Now betaji with Lavanya's daughter! Hmpph! This peedhi seems to be very lucky with Raizada men. No no no no no! Dont waste your time solving this mystery. See behind ur back! OMG! Your parents are having a Rabba Ve! Go ruuun!🤣

Hats off to you Fari! Amazing part!
Thanks a bunch for the PM😃



LOL!! Reserved!! =D

*EDITED*

OMG Ashum!! Some your remarks have me in stitches!! =D I was busy today so didn't get time to reply back before ;) Sorryyy!

And Oh, the thought of Arnav interrupting Shyam and Khushi's Rabba Ve is absolutely Hilarious!! He'll just need a couple of lessons from Anjali. Thats all! :)

And you have my permission on Ashar's behalf to go ahead and kidnap Anjali and make sure you use thicker ropes than Arnav's gundas so that she doesn't cut through them and run away =D hehehe!

And your last bit about Arnav Khushi having Rabba ve and asking Ashar to run interrupt them was damn hilarious!!

*Mwahhh* to u!! I was actually waiting for ur comment and got sooo happy seeing it! You're Awesome girl!! Thank you for your comments! Love U!
Edited by SmileyStar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow ur story is so cute as I have started readind it now so am commenting on all the parts and u should thank sweet_Ashum or Munazza as we are best frnds and she told me to read it

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