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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#241

mesmerizing and warming update!

the update did reflect a part of khusi still struggling with her emotions,she is still struck, she is somehow finding it really hard to trust arnav again and i guess she is absolutely right in her position!

u penned down the emotions beautifully!

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Excellent update.

Oh My God, has Anjali seen the video of the terrace scene? I'm happy that she realises what is right for all and is getting over Shyam. I like the way you are developing this plot.

Also, I love how you very clearly bring out Arnav's and Khushi's emotions...the pain, the regret, the love and most importantly the lack of trust when trust had been there all along. Beautiful!

Keep up the good work.

All the Best for your exams.

Thank you for the PM!

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Wow that was fantastic convo between bua ji and Kushi

He so understands Kushi

Loved ow heis helping her see the light...

Anji knows about Shyam

Oh. My goodness

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

omg it was awsuuum...loved it dear...was waiting for it...thnx 4da pm dear...

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

I'm late but I'm here! Again, a beautiful update dear! Oh. That rhymed! :P

Arnav monologue, Anjali Arnav teasing, his brief conversation with Khushi and his realisation of the change in her stance, Khushi's monologue and Khushi's convo with Bauji! Amazingly done.

I feel a renewed respect for Bauji's character after reading your version of him. He is exactly the kind of person Khushi needed to guide her in solving all the confusion in her mind. You've put it all so eloquently. Emphasising the emotions. Brilliant work!

Anjali watching a video on her phone? Very curious!

Thank you for updating! :D Looking forward to the next one~! 🤗

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Wow! What an update. It is just perfect. Always happy to read ur work. Will wait for ur future updates.

Thank you once again for such wonderful FF.

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

heya..

awesome update..

loved anjali teasing arnav..real cute..

and arnav trying to spare time for khushi..

khushi and her father interaction was very intense and needed..he made khushi realize her true feelings..

brilliantly written..

many thanks for the pm..:)

and good luck for your exams..

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

hi dear

i cant tell u how eagerly i was waiting for ur update...u made my day😃

and omg, this was such an amazing, brilliant part👏👏

i loved the conversation between khushi n her dad...so intense, so true. i definately learnt a thing or 2 about trust...hats off to you, it was beautiful👏

ok i gt a little scared the way u described anjali's state at the end. no sparkle, no smile😔...so not anjali. it means she knows. i feel so sorry for her, she doesnt deserve it. i hope she doesnt hate or blame khushi

goodluck for ur examz, im also starting wid mine

thanks for taking time out to update🤗

plz continue soon

take care

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#249

That was awesome loved it. I know exactly how you feel about exams. I am going through exactly the same thing. I wish you all the best with your exams Inshallah you pass them all 😛😛

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#250

your ff is the the best one on IF!

so realistic as watching real ipkknd on tv.

i m really scared that those 13 miised calls are from shyam & he will threaten kushi to leave arnav.

please, please i beg you don't bring a seperation card between them at any cost.i just love your ff but i m really weak hearted so pl don't give a heartattack with this jha idiot.

thankyou