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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Oh beautiful... The conversation between dad and daughter!!!!! GirL...you hv outdone yourself!!!!!

And all this in between exams? Amazing!!!! Bet this would hv relieved ou of your stress a bit... Good luck for your exams... 😊

Waiting for your next update soonish.. When do your exams get over?

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#232

awesome, and emotional. I love the conversation between father and daughter. great update. Thanks for the Pm.

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subiscs

@subiscs

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

omg!!! this is just fab!!! awesome update!!👏

all the best with ur exams 😊

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Awesome

Good luck with your exams

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Beautiful..
one of d best updates i've read till nw..
brilliant!
m at a loss..dnt knw wat to say..
if i try to start describing hw exquisite dis update is then it wud b dsrespecting its value..
evry single word played in frnt of my eyes n d images started flowing in mind like a slide-show,mkng evrythn feel so real..as if m khushi,n watevr is written in words is actually my emotions n thoughts in dis situation,as if all dat's hppng wid me..
u knw,dis is a huge achievemnt 4 u,ur readers r experiencing dis while reading ur work..it shows d level of ur success 😊
really m honoured,being able to get to read it..
keep writing..
n all d bst!😊

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varshapan

@varshapan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

oh loved this looong post.. was worth all the wait..

bauji explaining to her what her heart knows but her mind needs to be told and reassured about. that was wonderful... and now finally her heart and mind are galloping together towards the light of her future, towards the love that arnav promises.

and nk finally sent the video to anjali?! wow, that was one huge twist... but i guess she was the only person who needed to see it first. and she had to go through her pain and betrayal alone.. to make herself strong.

brilliantly written!

thanks for the pm... don't mind waiting for the next post if it is as good and long :) as this one...

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Amazing update..
Thanks 4 d pm

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

That was a fabulous work..!

I love the Anjali here.. That mischievousness and the naughty glint was too good! The was she was teasing about his work left out and also, when she left the dinning hall knowing the couple needs some privacy time! I love Anjali here.. She's not dumb here..!

Kushi and hey Babuji's conversation was heart touching! Arnav actually told the truth to him.. That was very considerate of him.. His advice on don't dwell in past was very correct.. Finally Kushi's heart is opening back to dhak dhak!!😳

Anjali and a video? Where Shyam dis assembled her car brakes? or the terrace video?

So she knows the truth and she is living it for other's happiness? she's deftly brave! The way she eliminated Shyam from happy family list deliberately showed it actually!

Thanks for the PM dear!

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Hmmm, I really do like Khushi in this; she is not acting like a doormat, thank God for that. She is soul searching and trying her best to come to terms with the whole situation. I can just imagine her turmoil, not to ignore Arnav's understanding her predicament, giving her all the space and time, yet reminding her she is going to be his for keeps. Nice update and thank you for wording this so well.