Fixing a Broken HEART !! pt 5 pg 60

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

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4 pming me dear...😃

for ur all updates...

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

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Tama

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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Osum FF u start

What a concept what story flow

maaneet romance superb

maaneeta cute

adi komal cute fight nice

maan so much posessive about geet dik raha hi

feel bad sweet geet maan ko itna pyaar karthi he ki uskeliye job sacrifice bi ki

first para toda terrific that when u mentioned in that para maaneeta 4 and in story u r telling maaneeta 3 means something is there in store which we dont know

maan love geet nice lekin itna bi posessive ki geet hurt ho jaye
well is para me bahut baat chupi hi
maan let his eyes roam all around her, she was indeed morning beauty, her swollen lips from last night, swollen buds from his constant sucking n biting...her messed hairs..she seriously drives him creazy without doing anything...she was his mishty, he loved calling her mishty..

bending down, he gently pecked her lips, "morning.."

she kissed him back as her hands went around his neck and she climbed on his chest, " i hate u.."

maan bite her lower lips making her wince, "say u love me..."

geet smiled, loving his agressive kiss, he was insanely possessive of her, and now she was quite used to dis fact...

she still didn't say it n simply enjoyed d morning kiss...

possessive he was, leaving her lips, he bent more n bite her already swollen nipple harshly, driving her creazy as she moaned loudly, "i love u.."

especially those lines geet wont say direct ILU she always say I H U

maan insists her to say that she loves him

i am terrified what will maan say after geet ask for joining jaise ye precap he

precap :

geet, "maan where r u..."

"geet..stop being presistant..when i said im held up..den i mean it.." snapped maan..