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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#391

awesme 👏 loved it 😉
Thnx 4 the pm 😃

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Homairah

@daydreamerr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#392

This is getting better and better! I love how you alternate so quickly between Arnav and Khushi's thoughts and give the same situation through both of their eyes. Even though they're Arnav and Khushi from the show you've given them a whole new personality in this and it's so much fun reading and finding out more about them. Cannot wait for their next inevitable encounter ;)
And I'm very eager to know how this 'mission' involving Lavanya is going to pan out now that Arnav has clearly trapped her. Great writing! :)

And thank you for the PM! :)

Edited by Thehom - 13 years ago

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Res...will come back asap Edit : Told yu i'd be back as soon as poosible (: Just read the last three updates!! Man...! I loved how you showd Arnav's past and how he never wanted this as their future. Love how you switched back and forth with the scenes from both Khushi and Arnav... Loved how she had recongnised him as soon as she looked him in the eyes... lol...poor La...she is sooo in her own world to notice anyone but Arnav...khushi is gonna be in for a shock when she finds out avout Rishab being Arnav... :P Its nice to see Khushi finding good in everybody's heart without even knowing them... Awww..he was smiling w/o knowing it when he sees Khushi in the fountain...really cute!!! Can't wait to read how she comes to know about Arnav being Rishab...! Will stalk this from now on...just excited to read more! Amazin update..<33

Edited by SweetFarwii - 13 years ago

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#394

buddy,loved it 👏
Thnx 4 the pM 😃

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Loved it! And I got to read five updates in a row! Loved it, and please continue soon!

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#396

plsss update sooon 😳
Thnx 4 the pm 😃

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#397

wow so much happen

khusi and arnav's encounter vs arnav and lavanya's

wonder how long will he be able to keep his facade

its interesting

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#398

no arnav , she is just not a random person... she is ur soulmate:-))

loving this... what will arnav do if he finds out tht khushi is lavanyas fren

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Simran

@Sim1234

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#399

Great update! Thank you for the pm 😃 awww I wanna know what arnav was going to say to khushi she should have stayed but I guess it's fair on her aswell she wouldn't want to be annoying!

Can't wait to see what happens next especially when arnav finds out that khushi is la's best friend😊

Thank you for the awesome update once again loved it!

Sim

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#400

I read chapters 8,9 and 10 together and to be honest the suspense is getting better of me. Lavanya and Khushi talking about the same guy at the same time?! Who will come to know of the connection with Lavanya before,Arnav or Khushi? What about The instant connection between them is so perfect.And their chemistry,even on paper and words it is so tangible. Looking forward to reading more.