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shabriya

@shabriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

oohhh wow ur track is different,,,im excited,,il b more dan happy if arnie was sme kind of a don,,plz add me to ur pm

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Ohh gosh!!! I seriously wanna know what happens next <3

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Shiv

@balashiv15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

wow how interesting,,i wish i could write like you :(

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Shiv

@balashiv15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

its a great concept but,, marvelous job and stop the suspense : P you have remade he story but with the same characters

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aakriti

@aakriti120

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

heya

awesome updates...

read three parts in one go...

very interesting story...

continue soon...

many thanks for the pm..: ]

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dancedanceRR

@dancedanceRR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Always love a good mafia story, and this one's no different! Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

wow man..!! now its getting damm excited..!! i really love dangerous type of things..

and romancing in the middle of it would be like heaven..!! do continue😊

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

whoa..!!! m feeling like a mafia..!! i can literally feel the tension going on there at that very

precies moment..!! uff man m loving it..!! do update the 6 part soon...

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saikrishnars

@saikrishnars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

OMG!!!!!

READ THE WHOLE THING AT ONE GO ...AND I FELL IN LOVE WITH IT!!!

ARNAV AND MAFIA!!!!!

WOW!!!

WAT A CONCEPT!!!!

PLZ DO UPDATE SOON!!!

THANX 4 THE PM!

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Rachel, this is just not fair! I was on the verge of figuring everything out, when you decided to throw me off-track with that awful nerve-wrecking, heart-stopping cliffhanger!

Who did he shoot? 😡 Come on, tell, tell! 😆

That man doesn't miss his target, for God's sake! 😲

And Khushi never meant to start her own bullet collection (with bullets from her body!), that one in her drawer was just to remind her that she needed to get a new white dupatta... So spare her from the bullet, pleazzz! 😭

Oh, God, this is so much fun! 😆 Ok, enough of my bhakwas! 😉

Now for the serious stuff- LOVED the update! Felt like I was watching a scene from a movie! But normally when a hitman aims and is blocked, he abandons his mission... bad-boy just HAD to pull the trigger didn't he?! 😆

Keep up the good work, Rachel! 👏

Edited by Chimpsy - 13 years ago