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bablio09

@bablio09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

"Little did Khushi know that he had already entered her life"

oh when will she know.

good going.

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Arati

@RTlicious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

OOh! can't wait for them to meet again and re-collect...at this point i guess arnav does not remember her...but i do so hope he does...and gives the credit of saving his life to her!!😃

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt
Ola Rachel!!!🤗
Hahahah...Coincidentally, I got the first spot now right after reading the 3rd chappy, and saw that you had posted your 4th chappy too!!!
Bhagwan ne meri sunli lagta hain!! Teehee...
Oh kay, now to the chappies...

Chapter 3: Lavanya and Khushi's friendship is such a Cute one and Nazar-na-lagein Types!! Heheheh... Because it is rare to find a Spoilt brat with a Heart of Gem, and that too holding a bond of Friendship with Middle class girl (whom the high class people very much like to categorise as).
Simple as she is, that's Khushi...
Posh as she is, that's Lavanya...
But together they are Perfect..
For Each other...
Both lost their parents at a very young age. One lost them to Fate's cruel game of Death, while the other lost her mother to the cruel game of Modern World's ultimate solution for Happiness - Divorce.
Yes, the correct word was 'Empathise' and you used it here. Well enough because they have seen their share of ill-fated events in their life, but those events eventually lead them to meet each other and become the Life-support, Confidante for the other...They became Friends...Best Friends...

Lavanya's tenth Boyfriend?? Heheheh...Love to exaggerate, eh? Well, it's better to exaggerate in such cases, or the fun is lost! So this Karthik is not in Khushi's good books, eh?
Well, well, she liked Raj? Heheheh...It very much happens!! Ya know, people get influenced by their friends at times when it comes to liking their partners or at times, they don't really matter to them. Real world's been portrayed here Baby!! Right to the Bull's Eye!! Ulterior motives is what strays the lowly and 'high class' people into such things!! The former is the one with such motives, while the latter is the victim!
Aye Haaye!!! Isne toh apni poori prem kathha bataadi!!! :P Khushi will be Khushi!
Hahahah...Prince charming!!! Well, well, let's see if she recognises him fast enough!!
Actually don't let her recognise him so early, or the fun and mystery will go aloof from the story!!! Let them suffer a little, romance a little, fight a little, care a little, shoot a little, punch a little, caress a little, forgive a little, touch a little...etc...etc... All should be balanced!!!

Chapter 4: Akash?! Beautiful Rachel!!! That was not what I was expecting at all!!! :P You surprised me Good!!!
Nice!!! He owes him his life and He owes him his life!!! Confused what am saying Readers??? :P
Akash owes Arnav his life and vice-cersa!!! Cleared? Heheheh...
Nice twist here!
Aman Singh is one person, I would love to meet in person here! I mean his influence is already being shown here to an extent and Arnav's implicit trust and that bond of Brotherhood between them, brings out Aman's protective side for him and Arnav's too!!
Arnav lost his mother at a very young age, but what about his father? Was his mother a widow?
And does his father have any influence here in taking up such a profession or is it just Arnav's own miserable condition and survival instinct that led him to take such a step?
Questions are very much flooding my mind now! As the story's going forward, it's becoming intense! Not so intense, because I know that you're still building up it's base, but let me tell you that the base itself is Good and Strong!! Way to go, bud!!!
When is Shyam going to make an entry here, eh?? I want to read about him now, and very much want to present my analysis on him now!!!
Update it soon with Shyam in it!!! Am hungry to give my analysis now!!! :P *breathing heavily and rubbing my hands in greed* 😈
🤣

Annie😳

Finally!😃

Annie! Oh Annie! Such long comment! I missed it. No one comments so long these days.😭 So I'm kinda shocked seeing both your comments (even the previous one). But then that's you.😆

Actually I'm so confused as to how to take this plot ahead. So many ideas popping in my mind. And yes, Arhi love story is gonna be slow and steady. 😈

Shyam, well he isn't that prominent here. He is kinda like a catalyst. Let me think how I can develop him. Looks like u are missing him. Ha ha!😆

Guns and Roses! how about this title for your supposedly new FF with Arnav and the bad boys.😆 will reply to your pm later at night. Now I'm under strict vigilance. Can't type much.😆

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priyah_reddy

@priyah_reddy

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Hahahha i did stalk your FF and got the update even without your PM 😉

Excellent update 😊 Waiting to read more of it ... Each chapter builds the curiosity and keeps us wanting for more of the story 😊

Do PM when you update 😊

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Gr8 update..
when ll arnav khushi meet again.. eagerly waiting for it..
carry on..

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

omg...

i'm really confused about arnav and profession? is he a terrorist? because they were talking about mission! or is he working in army? and who's that k bhai! i'm sorry i don't remember his name!!!! when will be the arnav and khushi meeting? will arnav remeber his angel? will he hurt her as usual? will khushi realize that arnav is her prince charming? omg... i got lot's of question in my head? oh u said in chapter 3 somthing abbt arnav will haunt khushi hena!

this ff is driving me crazy! pls update sooon

the doctor's name is akash! so u like akash tooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i never read such different ff! different theme! and thrilling really very interesting!!!!!!!!!!

ans i'll keep stalking your ff!

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

I knew the doctor will play a vital role in bringing Arhi closer!!!!

Btw even I like Aman...I just wish they would show him in the serial too!!!

I loved the update...so the doctor is Akash!!

Actually I have a feeling Arhi will meet in the next chapter...I hope so this intuition of mine also comes true!!!

Eagerly waiting for the next update!!!

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Ray!!!

I love your Aman too, bey!! [Oops!! replace the bey with re and please don't mind it!! 😉]

And man, do I love this Akash!!!

So Akash, Lavanya, and Aman play a vital role in deciding ArHi's future, eh??!!

And ooohh!!! Is there gonna be a PayAsh here too or is it gonna be. . . . . . Oh, I dunno, a. . . . . . LaAsh?! (Lavanya+Akash)!! 🤣

Trust me to come up with this after I came up with Molva!! 🤣 😆

Update soon, Rachael. . . 🤗

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Its going great ...i really like lavanya here and aman has got a real substance role in dis one unlike d show...

So arnav is basically a good "bad-guy"...oh I so love him

And I hav a request...Pls do pm me, coz I access IF on my phn and um a poor lil chap,cant stalk IF at ol times and I really dont want to miss upon dis 1...

Pls pls pls...

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Loved both your updates, 3rd as well as 4th chapter. Lavanya's character is sweet. Rich spoilt brat, but with a good heart. So Arnav is some kind of gangster? And Aakash is the doctor. I like Aman too. Hmm...loving the story so far. Keep up the good job. Can't wait for second ArHi meeting. I wonder if Khushi is already seeing Arnav's face in her dreams...Anyway, till next time. GOOD JOB!!