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Posted: 13 years ago
50 chapters in one go..
Lady where u been all my life.. u r one helluva writer..
can't even begin to tell u what all I loved.
suffice it to say.. loved it all.. disliked nothing.. missed noting
loved that u kept their character traits intact..
loved how it wasn't all physical.. passionate onemoment tender the next
be..au...ti... phull...
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Posted: 13 years ago
So...I'm up to Chapter 15 after starting this and even though I'm still going through the Chapters, I had to comment...this is an awesome story. šŸ‘

My mind is buzzing from the intensity of it all...it's like a slow excruciating seduction but with the tragedy that Khushi is clueless that she's being seduced...though at some points, I'm not sure if Arnav even knows he's seducing her! šŸ˜•

After Chapter 14 (I think!) I came to the conclusion that even if you did get round to writing a consummation chapter, it would just be an anti-climax because you've already created a scorching heat from the lead-up chapters!!!😃

Love your writing...it's so evocative...I can feel like I'm there with them...I'm not a voyeurist but your writing is making me into one!! 😳

Can't wait to catch up on the rest.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read 16 through to 45! The man is in love...totally. She at least knows it...what a shock it's going to be for him!! Love your writing...it just transports you so easily.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Binguuu!!!
Commenting to keep in track!!
Read until chapter three!!

And I have butterflies in my stomach already!!

I'll get back to you within a max of 3 days!! Need that much time to read all three threads amidst my shitty work!! šŸ¤“

Awesome, AWESOME concept, though!

Know that it is being loved, already!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow soo good read till 33 chapter soo late need sleep but sleep or reading ahhh sleep is winning but must go on reading. Love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have read all 50 chapters in this thread and what more can I say other than A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

Now off to read thread 2.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Bingala, dear girl, simply amazing and gripping narrative technique...I read all the 84 parts in one day and had red eyes at the end of that! Did you ever complete beyond Part 84? i notice your last update was in July...I assumed you must have finished the whole FF by this time? Well, did you? i have to say, it has me even more rivetted than the serial at this point!

Thanks so much.

Anupama
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Posted: 12 years ago
uve got me grippped girl!!...jst awesome !!!...i ws literally blown away!!!...surely a masterpiece!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bingala! I love u!..ur a star when it comes to writing! Im sure u love ur fans too! Please reciprocate our affection by updating soon..and do not let it go unreturned! Hahahaha lolz! This was the best i could do to bribe u and trap u into updating...plz update sooon i miss reading it=(
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am a new reader and have completed reading this thread. I'm loving the way you have handled it all from the beginning to this chapter.
Arnav's desires for her & her desires for him - Their thoughts, their monologues, everything is so aptly written. I didn't find even Arnav's most scandalous thoughts as cheap or vulgar. You've penned it down so beautifully.
Then their journey of exploring each other. Arnav's sweet gestures of fulfilling her wishes. He didn't say much but his choice of songs said a lot..
Both in their heads know that it's going to get over after few months though they never voiced it.
Khushi is treasuring the good days as memories for her upcoming life. Even in her thoughts she never go beyond lo.. to associate it with Arnav because she knows its only platonic.
But knowing and understanding are two different things.. Their world full of smiles crumbled due to his one moment of fury, lost temper.
But she is treating him right, its the same word he has used for her in his mind. So how could it be wrong now? And he thinks she is using him!!! After all we are dealing with the great ASR here, what more can we expect from him??
Khushi gave shyam a perfect reply - a silent slap on that pathetic man's face..
Now going to read more.. See u in next thread..😊

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