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Posted: 13 years ago
I just started reading ur FF..
Itz wonderful..


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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for th pm- actualy had missd many updates in between so caught up with those ... luvd reading them & luvd th swaron relationship or rather beginning of it... u made them endearing without losing th essence of their basic character...like ur commentary too
Yes I want pms in future & hav added u on buddy list 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
K ftr ur 2nd chap i ha told u 2 pm me bt u dint n directly i get a pm abt ur note loilz..
Bt acchi baat he i read d remaining parts nw n juzz loved dem... D way swaron keep on bumping into each oder is superb.. I hav liked ur pm vala note n ur der in ma buddy list so plzz pm me fr sure d nxt tym u update hmm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sneha Accept Ma Requst
Thn Plz Pm Ur nxt Update 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice..
do pm me wen u update.. !!:) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oops.. lagta hai maine kuch zyada hi PMs miss kar diye.. my bad.. sorry for that 😊

seems like fir aisa kara toh joote padenge 😛

PS : You guys have no idea how much your comments make me smile.. like for real.. such "awwwieee" comments.. THANK YOU SO MUCH guys 😊 Glad you're liking it 😊

PSS : Next part will be up soon 😊

Edited by SwaRon.is.magic - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oooh ! astronomy camp ??? kya baat hai badi creative ho gai reh tu ?!?!?! update soon !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: barbdoll

oooh ! astronomy camp ??? kya baat hai badi creative ho gai reh tu ?!?!?! update soon !!!



Ho kya gayi hu ? Already HU😛

aage aage dekh hota hai kya 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for the update Snehu!<33
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PART 8 UPDATED

Okay, So they all move inside. It was D-A-R-K everywhere. You couldn't even see if someone was standing there in college ground from inside, and of course the creepy night time voices, pretty scary haan. It was almost 9 till then. No one was interested in the astronomy thing but they were actually waiting for the professor to do something. But yeh professor toh dagabaaz, dhokebaaz nikla :P He asked everyone to wait outside till he sets up the telescope and stuff. Sab bechare bahar khade huye boriyat ke mare pak gaye.

Nil : yeh telescope lagane gaya hai banane ?!


Vicky : Bhai, banana mein bhi itna time nahi lagta!


Nil : *laughs* sahi bola bhai


Vicky : chal na dekhte hai yeh kar kya raha hai andar


Nil : Mujhe toh lagta hai so gaya hoga.. kharraton ki awaaz bhi aa rahi hai mujhe.


Vicky : mujhe yeh samajh nahi aata yeh budhaape mein hum bachon ko kyu pakata hai ?!


Nil : Oldies ka favourite time pass


Rey : Oh Common guys


Vicky : chal na Rey dekhte hai na yeh kya kar raha hai


Nil : Haan chal na bhai chal na waise bhi yahan kitna andhera aur garmi hai


Vicky : chal chal chal na bhai


(Nil and Vicky almost jumped on Rey )


Rey : FINE GUYS! Lets go !


(Swayam & Sharon look at each other and smile)


They all stand up and move towards the room in which the prof was setting up the stuff. Rey slowly opens the door only to find that Nilesh was correct! Professor maharaj so chuke the. (Okay, even I'm speechless right now! Hahahahaha :P )


Nilesh : *jumps* See I told you na! I told you ! Budhaa so gaya hai ! *dances*


Simmi looks at Nil and goes Awww. (Nimmi Forever <3 )

Everyone looks at her with raised eyebrows. Oopsy :P She starts looking here and there.

Sim : *comes and stands next to Sharon* So guys what's next ? (Chaaalu Simmi, topic change kar diyaa :P )


Sh : Yes guys, what's next ?

Rey : Let's go back then ?

Sw : No dude, why back ? Aa hi gaye hai toh lets stay na? Waise bhi none of us was here for the astronomy camp, right? *looks at Sharon*

Sh : He is right guys! And And I have something really important to tell you *excited*

Nil : *hugs Swayam* Bhaaai hai tu!


Sim : *whispers to herself* When will he hug me like this ?! *dream mode*

Rinni was standing next to Simmi and hears Simmi saying this.

Rin : *confused* huh ? You want him to call you Bhai ?

Sim : *drools* *hits Rinni on the head* Rinni Focus!

Vicky : *runs to hug Swayam & NIlesh* : Bhaaaisss

Rey : GUYYYSSS! Apna Bhai-chaar-aaa baad mein continue kar lena? Abhi lets listen to what Sharon has to say ?

Sharon : *laughs* thanks Rey :P
So guys I have a GOOOD NEWS for you!! Guess what ? Footloose auditions starting soon! And we are one of the two dance teams representing St. Louis!

Everyone jumps with excitement. They start hugging each other. Even SwaRon almost hugged each other. (ALMOST, hug kare, itni achi kismet humari kahan :P ) But the BLUSH BLUSH carries on Eeep.

Nil : Guys.. issi baat pe dance ho jayee?

Everyone : Hojaye!!

(Okay, this was Lame. Sorry :P )

So, all of them start dancing, ALL of them, including kriya, Vishakha, Amar, Bharat and Neha, showing their signature moves. DANCE WAS IN THE AIR. What a sight!

While dancing, Sharon and Swayam bump into each other once again (Zyada ho raha hai ab :P ) Sharon was about to fall that Swayam catches her.

*look look hawa hawa*

Sharon picks a part of her hair and puts it behind her ear and continues dancing, blushing. Swayam keeps looking at her thinking about how beautiful she is. After a while, both of them move aside and look at others still dancing. Swayam goes and stands next to the professor and watches him sleep, making funny faces. LOL . Sharon picks up a bottle of water and starts drinking. She looks at everyone constantly for a few minutes. Then suddenly she looks at Swayam, she finds him standing next to the prof making funny faces. She smiles and wonders how adorable this guy is.

Sh : SWAYAM

Sw : *stops making the weird faces and laughs* Yes Sharon ?

Sh : Come here please?

Sw : Jo hukum madam :P

Sh : *laughs* Oh you!

He comes and stands next to Sharon. Takes, the bottle of water from her hand and starts drinking. (Haayeee main mar jawaaan)

Sw : Ji bolo ?

Sh : *laughs* yeh tum kya kar rahe the?

Sw : Kya? Paani pee raha tha :P

Sh : Paani nahi dodo *looks at prof*

Sw : Oh wo *laughs* dekh raha tha humari neend uda ke kaise so rahe prof ji :P

Sh : *laughs* Oh God! You make me laugh so much :D

Sw : *looks into Sharon's eye* (In a flirting tone) Its not easy to make a girl laugh, specially making you laugh is not easy. Lucky me, right? *winks*

Sh : *blushes* Oh you!

Just then, Simmi comes to drink water. She looks at Sharon.

Sim : SHARON? You're blushing? What happened huh ? *elbows her*

Sh : *Blushes more* Oh God Simmi! I'm not blushing! *tries to hide her tamatar jaisa red face* :P

Sim : Don't lie haan. Look at yourself man

Sh : Oh Simmi! Shut up!

Sim : Fine dude. I'll be back in 2 minutes. You guys continue. Btw, You were blushing *laughs and leaves*

Swayam laughs too.

Sh : Hogaya?

Sw : Kya?

Sh : Tumhara hasna?

Sw : *laughs* haan *nods like a two year old kid*

Sh : Good! Anyways.. I wanted to talk about the other dance team. Look at Vishakha, Kriya, Neha, Bharat and Amar. They are pretty awesome, right?

Sw : *looks at them* *scratches head* Hmmm.. point to be noted!

Sh : Told you!

Sw : And what about the sixth member?

Sh : YOU

Sw : Me? *looks shocked as if Sharon ne isko I love you bol diya ho* :P

Sh : Haan tum. Don't tell me you aren't into it. You're a FAB dancer. Common man

Sw : *looks into Sharon's eye* Am I ?

Sh : *blushes* Yeaah! Ab toh you're in ?

Sw : Yes madam! *laughs*

Sh : and you deserve a slap! *slaps Swayam* (Pyaaar se :P )

Sw : Haayee! Ek aur baar :P

Sh : Uff! Swayam! Tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta :P

Sw : *laughs* *claps* Okaaay GUYSSS! Stop ! Sharon wants so say something.

As he says this, the light goes off!

Sh : Oh shit! Ab yeh light kaise chali gayi ?!

Nil : *makes scary sounds* Bhooot!

Sim : Shut up Nil! Don't scare me!

Neha : Naaahiii! Mujhe andhere se bhot darr lagta hai!

Everyone starts moving here and there, bumping into each other.

Rey : *shouts* GUYS!!! Can we stay at our places!!?

Vicky : Alto jalalto aayi bala ko taal tu.. alto jalalto aayi bala ko taal tu

Sw: *laughs* yeh kon hai ?

Nil : Vickyy hoga Vicky! Jabse uske saath hai na.. tabse saara din yehi bolta hai!

Sw : Kiske saath ?

Nil : Aur kon? Ne..

Vicky : Shut up Nil !

Rey : GUYSS!! Not again please!

Suddenly, the light comes back. Everyone was like pheeww!! Everyone was holding someone or the other's hand. Sharon was holding Swayam's hand. As the light comes back, Everyone looks at each other. All blushing and smiling. Swayam and Sharon look at each other, deep into each other's eye. Embarrassed and blushing.
Edited by SwaRon.is.magic - 13 years ago

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