OS:Take me out! (pg. 12 part 2A, part 2B pg.16)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
ha ha the fingerbowl scene was very funny! she should take him to a dhaba someday seriously LOL! if he asked payal abt her likes then y did he take her there? stupid laad governor.

amazing update. loved it!!!

Hey thanks. You know I was thinking about that but I came to the conclusion that he is still ASR after all, he's going to follow the plan regardless. He'd already booked reservations and organized the media. Yep he is stupid isn't he?! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey
I absolutely looovvveeed it!!!!!! This was perfect!!!! Hahahahaha so typical KKG to mention a dhaba..

This was the perfect day: filled with comedy, some new discoveries, a few sweet tender moments & an ending that had a BAM

You have a flu?!? Gosh I feel so bad now, I shouldn't have pressured you with my DON threats last night lol. Really really sorry dear!!! How are you feeling now? Keep yourself warm, drink hot tea/choco and take ur meds!!!

I really loved this OS!!! Hmmm, any chance of you turning it to a SS? Would love to see the morning-after reaction, when khushi goes to office & meets asr again... Oops, sorry!! No pressure or forcing you hehehe

Anyways thank you for the lovely update & the pm as well dear :)

YAY! Glad you liked your treat! Hope you got lots of studying done? Gosh...I feel like a mother 😆

No worries babe, this stupid cold is getting me down so writing actually cheers me up.

I will take care of myself, bedridden at the moment so THANK YOU for your concern 🤗

Hope your chemistry test went well!

SS...hmmm...your demands are increasing day by day!... Only joking! People keep suggesting it so I might consider LATER, I can barely keep up with my two measly ffs. I am such a fail!

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multifaceted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

haha...both the parts were too good...i loved their bantering...awesome...hope you get well soon :)
eagerly waiting for the next part..thanks for the PM

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anjs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

it was awesome...wud like to read more of it...

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Becs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

That was so cute and hilarious!!! Thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks!!!!

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Khushi and her antics were just perfect and so was ASr who was true to his usual self, bt would have loved to read about the small moment that they had shared in the restaurant. Do update soon and PM me. Loved it. U write really well.

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Sukirti Singh Raizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

wow...wat a date...

an amazing part...

luved it...

thanx for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: swati-89
Khushi and her antics were just perfect and so was ASr who was true to his usual self, bt would have loved to read about the small moment that they had shared in the restaurant. Do update soon and PM me. Loved it. U write really well.

Hey thank you!

Actually the moment was the whole vegetarian thing in the restaurant. 😊