OS: April Fool, Arnavji!

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love_arshi

@love_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

As always, loved the OS...

😉

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

I absolutely loved it!

I was so scared when Khushi yelled 'April Fools!'. My first thought was 'Gayyee!' but it was awesome! :D

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Very good! Completely loved it.

Thanks for the PM😊

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asrksr

@asrksr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Superb!totally loved it!!it is the oath!i never expected to see it in a romantic shot. Waiting for the next os...

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

woww amazing OS... he was so concerned about her... he put khushi in his cabin so that he would see her all the time 😳

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-monalisa-

@-monalisa-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Ahhh!!! Loved it! Awesome work 👏

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sayli

@sayli_sarun

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

awww... so cute i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

"You like ber?"

"So do I!"

Oooh. Yes, please!

Just keep doing more food plus seduction scenes and I'll be a very happy woman.

Loved this OS. The writing had a unique energy to it. I think it was the pace--it was spot-on.

Especially when he starts to look for her, and his fear and worry, that was conveyed in how you wrote it.

I loved how you showed Arnav' desire to have her close, and his full understanding of her personality. How she mingled with the staff, what she did at the office to amuse herself.

His full awareness of her every move despite it appearing otherwise.

Well done.

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Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Awesome OS,Smita! 👏

How I wish the cvs would show something similar in the serial!

Loved Arnav in this one!😊

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Sana

@-s.a.n.a-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Amazing os!! Loved it!!👏⭐️

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