FF- Soulmates & Bedmates - Updated -Part 15 Pg 133

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Hot as usual ... Khushi's innocent sensuality and Arnav's craving for her... also liked the touch of romance when Khushi's decides to wait for Arnav and his emotional upheaval about his parents' death...his need for Khushi's warmth 👍🏼\

Looking forward to the episode on the beach front... :-)

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hiddenpearl

@hiddenpearl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#572

yay...Nancy...we loved it as always...great work girl

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nancy_ipkknd

@nancy_ipkknd

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: angelic_esha
hey i just read the whole thing...
i dont know what to say..im speechless!
every of ur work have to be so awesome!!!!

i love it and i wanted to say how can i get pms for ur work??
please temme ..i really wanna follow ur work...:)

loved part 11!

ughh hate la!
loved the first half the most...:) :D

thanks...follow my blog or buddy me...I dont have a separate PM list

nancy

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#574

loved it!!
hope lavanya's plan fails terribly!!

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#575

Lavanya!!! im hoping her plan brings arhi closer!!! not further XD! i loved the beginning it was so hot and i loved the way you described the emotions they evoked in each other! awesome update :)

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

Loved the update...its sad about the fire..wonder if Lavanya has something to do with it...aww they gonna wake up in each others arms :)

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#577

I love this chapter, there was some emotional progress. I am so glad Kushi tried to stay up for Arnav, so he would not be alone to deal the emotional tool it took to deal with the fire situation. I also loved Arnav took her in to his room just so he can have someone to hold and drive away the loneliness. Can't wait for your next update.

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

love it thank u for pm me

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mizzneetu

@mizzneetu

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#579

Yay! Definitie YAY!

Khushi's innocence and then the lack thereof, and then her waiting up for him- too cute! And then La's planning with NK, can't waittt to see what happens.

Short, but wonderful update.

Keeps the mind craving for more! 😃

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#580

I know I've said it before but I love how you write sensual scenes.

The bit where Arnav knew had Khushi touch him. And her response--how his body felt so foreign to her, muscular, hard, lean--the contrast between man and woman. I loved that you showed Khushi's awareness. And, Arnav's response to her touch. How he admits he fantasizes about her touching him. Brilliantly done.

And, you balanced it out with the emotional aspect--how he is tense when he returns from the factory, but is soothed and comforted by the sight of her sleeping on the sofa--waiting for him to return. How he takes her to HIS room just so she remains near him. He has no expectations of her. He knows her limits.

Looking forward to more.

(I almost want them to be discovered together in bed--by Lavanya perhaps!)