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Posted: 19 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

i luved yur last part
please continue soon
i want kripa-angad to meet soon
yeah..... 👏

thanx a lot. i won't promise u that kripa and angad will meet but u never know i. keep reading my ff to find out.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: pasaris

gr888 fan fic.....n hmmmhmmm i think they r sending her to u.k to study......??????

absolutely! u got it.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
hey del nice prt cont soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
hello guys. here goes my next part. one thing i should say u people r wonderful guessers! but the person who got it right was....... pasaris.

PART 4

(note:kripa and her parents are like friends.)

k: i don't know. i don't have any idea. i have said everything i could think of 😕 wat is left?
a: kripa beta, u forgot something u very much wanted?
k: come on, stop guys. please tell me wat it is?

gayathri luks at angad and smiles.(gayathri is a doctor and angad is a business man. angad has told gayathri that she needn't work b'coz they have got lot of money and everything that is needed for a happy life but gayathri told him that she liked to work and angad said if she likes it then he won't tell her not to.)

g: i got a job!
k: 😕 😕 so 😕 😕 ? u already have a wonderful job and ur saying u got a job 😕 😕 r u fooling me 😆 😆 it doesn't make any sense! i didn't want u to get a job or something when i was small. wait,did i hear it right?
g: u heard it right!but ask..
k: (kripa cuts in)ask wat? i never wanted u to get a job when i was small? 😕 and wat kind of surprise is that? it..
g:(now gayathri cuts in)calm down beta. listen to me. i know u never wanted me to get a job when u were small but u didn't ask me where i got a job?
k: where?(kripa asks this in 'i am not bothered way.')
a: here comes ur favourite part.
g: i got a job in England!!!!! 😃
k: wat?????? 😲 😲😲

(the moment she heard england she remembered angad)

g: kripa,ur not happy ?
k: wat? oh... yeah i am very happy for u and i remember when i was small i use to say i want to go to england.
a: exactly beta!that's why me and ur mom decided that she will apply her job in england.
k: oh, thanx mom and dad.i am really happy.
a: thanx is ok beta, but why do i feel like u don't like england.
k: 😲nooo!!! i luv england. when r we moving?
a: mistake kripa, 'we' r not moving, only u and ur mom r moving.
k:wat???????😲why? why r u not coming?
a: understand beta, i have lots of business and things here ,how can i just leave them and come?
k: but dad...
a: understand beta, i know u will.
k: ok 😭 😭
a: waise bhi tumko mujhse chutkara chahiye tha na, always wanted to change my name, see now u don't have to hear my name 😉
k: dad, how can u say like this? i luv u very much. its not b'coz i don't like u or ur name. its b'coz.....

kripa stops and finds her parents staring at her.

k: come on guys 😕 😕 wat happened? why r u staring at me like that for? 😕 😕
a: after somany years u r going to say the reason why u want me to change my name.so we r very keen to hear ur reason.
k: if that's the case.......then i am not saying! 😆 wait for some more years.
a: beta this is not fair.
k: it is( and she ran to her room)
g: (to angad)it was ur mistake, u should have not said that.
a: now this is not fair, why didn't u stop me when i was saying that? and u were also so keen to know the reason.
g: ok baba, mein haari. yeah i know, i was also keen to know , but we just messed it up when she was abt to say.
a: i know her she will say that one day, but i wonder wat is the reason, i don't think its a big deal.
g: 😆 😆 i think its b'coz ur name is very old fashioned. 😆
a: 😡 oh yeah and wat abt gayathri, u know gayi means cow 😆 just think abt ur name. 😆 😆

now kripa comes out hearing all this.

a: and anyway angad is a wonderful name and all the stylish, handsome and good guys still put that name and ur name is much more old fasioned.
g: oh yeah 😡 😡 my mom put that name for me and its a wonderful name 😡

and they both start fighting in a kiddish way. kripa can no longer take in her father saying angad is a good name and all the handsome guys have that name and she shouts.

k: stoppppppppppp u both!!!

kripa's parents stop fighting and they start laughing like anything 😆 😆 😆

a: 😆 😆 its been ages that we have fought and i had gr8 fun fighting 😆
g: me too
k:omg! u guys r worst than kids. 😆
a: kripa..
k: oops, sorry dad.
a: its ok beta 😆 😆 gayathri we should fight some other day. its so fun 😆
k: wat r u saying dad? fighting is fun? 😕 😕
g: of course beta, fighting is not fun when u fight with a girl but with a boy its really fun, u end up laughing 😆
k: really? well, i am going to try that.
a: no beta! we were just joking.
k: anyway, who is gonna fight people? me? no way! and never in the world with a boy!


hey kripa dear u never know when u will start fighting 😉 😉 . ok guys thats it for to day, i will only continue when i have enough comments 😆 , just kidding, i will continue tomorrow. 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: hawoo

hey del nice prt cont soon!!! 😊

thanx a lot hawoo and see i have continued , i will post the next part tomorrow.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
that was sooo sweet!! this is the first time i have read kripa's parents fighting like that!!! yeah, i agree wid gayatri that it can be fun fighting with a boy!!! n my prediction is that kripa will very soon find out that by fighting with.....................me!!! 😆 no ofcourse not, it's angad -the one who's not her dad 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47

thanx alot unum and continue urs tomorrow!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will continue tomorrow😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nabz8888

that was sooo sweet!! this is the first time i have read kripa's parents fighting like that!!! yeah, i agree wid gayatri that it can be fun fighting with a boy!!! n my prediction is that kripa will very soon find out that by fighting with.....................me!!! 😆 no ofcourse not, it's angad -the one who's not her dad 😆

thanx! i know , i made kripa's parents fight for a while, everytime its angad and kripa who r fighting in a kiddish way, so i thought why not parents?😆 😆 i wanted to make it different. everytime kripa's parents are shown as characters who r very serious and gives lot of advise so i thought i would chnge them a bit😉. u never know who kripa is gonna fight with. does she need any reasons to fight😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. 👏

thanx a lot and i will continue today.

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