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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa

kriti,short part but nice...loved their romance...and tum writer ho,ye tumpar hai tum kahani ko kaise likho ,hum reader hain,hum padhne ke baad batayenge kaisa laga...😃..waiting for next part..

punam

well i like ur that thought
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosyammy

hi kriti, nice into. I loved it...and about the part its awesome...do cont . Soon...and plz riddhima ke doctor bane ka dream ke baare mein clear kijiye...and 3-4 months ka leap accha rahega...do cont. Soon very very soon...appka other ar ff bhi suru kijiye jo incomplete hai...ya thanks for the pm...

With luv
Ammy


thank ammy
ye mai aur bhi shuru karungi
but after competing this ff
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Finaly u r bck!!! Welcum bck dear... Hope ur xams wer amazing... Abt d part though it was small bt i lovd it d romance of ar & d saas-bahu bonding too... Nw abt d leap i too dont want it bt if u hv a stry trck accrndngly den go ahead... I wil be waiting 4 d nxt updt...


thanks dear
m not taking any leap
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelicdove

amazing ff!!!!!!

so love AR relation here
😛
i have a thing for arrange marraiges and with AR being in one is just too awesome and welcoming👍🏼
ridhima is so young here😲 but that makes it more intresting😃
i loved how they started their first journey together from the first night itself😊
and love the way they grew closer,fall in love and confessed😃
armaan is so caring!!!!!😛
and ridhima is just too sweet and shy,how she waits for him and takes his care
oh,i m loving it!!!!!!😃😆
and aww AR are gonna be parents,how cute!!!!!!!!
i just hope ridhima's wish to do mbbs is fulfilled bcoz i myself have one😆
ok!!!!!!!now the last thing to say is that u update so infrequently,it makes me😭😭😭
i have been following ur every update since you have started this fic but sorry couldn't comment that time agr jab hi cmnt karte toh hyad mai discont. na karti
plzzz update soon
and pm me to if possible


thank u so much dear
m gad u liked this ff

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guyz...m back
and thank u so much for waiting for me
agar mai wapas aayi hu toh cz of u guyz
and i m very very sorry
i knw jitna maine ap abko hurt kiya hai uske sorry bohot chota hi
ut still I'm very orry
mai aap sabko kaise hurt kar akti hu
mere pas koi bhi reasons ho but how can i do that

well ye baate mai jo new thread open kiya umai nhi khi..nd u knw ye new thread kholne ka idea hi bekar tha

ok now i m back with updates

2 updates maine likh liye hi

ab bas ye pke cmnts pe depend karta hi ki aap ye update kitne jaldi lena chahte hai

and replied to all ur cmnts and queries o page 94-95..and theres is changes in Character Sketch so plz have look

-kriti



Edited by Devil_kriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 12

AR come down for pooja...after pooja

Billy : riddhima beta tum hume itni badi.Khushi dene.wali ho...toh tumne Aj jo.magna hai.maanglo

Dadii: ha tujhe Aj jo chaiye maaang le

Ridz : papa maa Dadii kya jo mujhe chaiye wo aap deppaoge

Anaya:aisa kuch.nhi hai.jo hum apni bahu ko.na de paye

Ridz : maa mai aage padna.chahti hu myjhe mbbs karke doctor banna chahti.hu logo ki

Ar : BASSS

Armaan intrupts her in.middle and shouted in angry voice

Ar :riddhima bohot bakwas karli tumne kamre mai jao ridz tries to stop and convince him to let her cmplt her conversation with his parents this is.her last chance to.fulfilled her dream of becoming a doctor but ammy orders her to go to their room NOW Then ridz quietly goes to their room and tears are flowing from her eyes

After riddhima left armaan apologised from his parents on behalf of his wife

Dadi : armaan apni biwi ko samjha kya ye doctor banne ka Shok.pal liya hai armaan nodded

Ananya : hmm armaan beta bahu pe Jyada gussa mat Hona is halat mai bache k.liye Acha nhi hoga...agar bahu maa na banne wali hoti mai khud hu use apne tareeke se samjhati...she said in angry voice

Armaan : ji maa...

Nikki : Bhabhi pregnant na.hoti toh kya karti maa app...Bhabhi ko marti jaise mujhe mara tha jab Maine aapse 15 saal ki umar mai dance competition mai Jane k liye permission mangi thi...Nikki said in.anger armaan tried to stopped Nikki from talking further Coz he.knows his little sister she's so.muhfat and can say anything everything when she was in.anger it.does nt matter to her that the other person is hurt from her words

And he can't see his mother hurt... But

N : bhai plz let me.complete it...q.maa aisa kya kaha Bhabhi ne mana apko mera dance karna.pasand nhi hai isliye apne mujhe.roka par Bhabhi wo toh doctor banna chahti hai usmai kya galat hai...dancer ka.profession apko galat lagta hai par doctor.unmai kya khrabi.hoti hai

Ar : bass Nikki...bass ek aur shabd aur.nhi pta nhi ho kya gya hai dono ko sab.mere pyar ki galti hai.sar pe.Chada k.rakha hai dono ko isliye tum maa se aise lehze mai.baat karni ki.himmat kar.payi...

Dadi : bilkul shi keh rha hai bigad rhi hai ye ladki jaldi se Iske hath peele karo aur vida karo ise

Armaan : shi.kaha Dadi ab iska pati hi.ise sudharega

N\ : bhai ( Nikki whispers) she is.so.hurt with armaan words and.rahul is.also hurted with armaan behaviour but uske bhai ko.toh uski.maa k aage kuch nhi dikhta and Ananya is.so.proud of.her son...

Billy : bas ab bohot ho gya sabka drama sab apne kamre mai.jao n.Ananya nashta ki tyari.karo

Ananya : ji par wo.Nikki ki.shaddi ki.baat

Billy: ha.toh ab.umar.ho gyi.hai dhundo ladka Now Nikki is.almost crying...and she ran towards her room

Armaan goes to.his room and found riddhima sitting on floor beside bed and crying he goes towards her and.sits on bed

Armaan : kya zaroorat thi maa papa se ye kehne ki tum age padna chahti ho janti ho.humare gharo.mai.ladkiyo ko age padna allowed nhj hai.fir bhi

Ridz : kya ladkiyo ko sapne dekhna bhi allowed nhi hai she said in slow voice...now turn towards him and said

Riddhima : kya galti hai meri Maine ek.sapna dekha use poora karna chahti hu...kya ladki hone ka matlab hai wo sapne bhi na dekhe use poore karne ki iccha bhi na rakhe

Ar : riddhima now u r a married woman n maa.bhi banne wali ho shaddi se Pehle baat alag hoti hai but shaddi k.baad a big no n mujhe working wife nhi chaiye ye baat tum apne dimag mai Beetha lo...he poked her forehead while saying this

Ar : I m very disappointed with you riddhima mujhe tum se ye umeed nhj thi...and he going to get up but riddhima stops him and said

Riddhima : plz aap mujhse naraz mat hoyiye mere liye aapse badkar kuch nhi hai aap nhi chahte toh mai ye apne sapne sab bhul jaungi...mere sapne aapse humare ghar se badkar nhi hai...plz I m.sorry mujhse baat kijiye

Ar : hmm mujhe Thoda tym do and mere office k kapde nikal do mujhe late ho rha hai.aur neeche jao maa Akele nashta laga rhi hai aur ha neeche jake maa papa Dadi ko.sorry bolna

Ri : jii...and ridz goes towards wardrobe to take out his clothes

ridz reached downstairs and found Ananya serving tea to billy n Dadi... She goes towards them and

ridz : maa papa Dadi mujhe maaf kar dijiye aisa dubara kabhi nhj hoga All nods and then Ananya said...

Ananya : aur aisa Hona bhi nhi chaiye

ridz : ji maa aisa kabhi nhj hoga

All.again nods and then again Ananya said Jao sab aate honge tum puriya tal lo tel garam hua pada hai...and then riddhima goes towards kitchen

After breakfast all men goes to office and then the day which starts with love and happiness ends in silence

so hows the update guyz

i knw small tha but u knw n bada mujhe likha nhi jata *puppy face*

ok challo ab jldi e comments karo

kriti

Edited by Devil_kriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yipeee i m first to comment
amazing part
very hurt by armaan's reaction
i hope armaan realized his mistake soon
plz pm me for updates
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

yipeee i m first to comment

amazing part
very hurt by armaan's reaction
i hope armaan realized his mistake soon
plz pm me for updates
continue soon


thanks dear
yeah hopefully soon
Edited by Devil_kriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chota lihai tou fast fast updateee
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part! M surprised by Armaan's behaviour! He should have supported her!
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