FF (Virman) Walking on Sunshine, C7, p42, 2nd Aug

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go
Mindblowin update . Lovin every momwnt in there ... Lol ..Viren is soo adorable <3 Virat seems a complete new chapter to me ... n my my Manvi tryin to prick his ego .. loved that portion . Gaurav-Maya fiasco was hilarious ... n loved the order given by virat to manvi to get in...which though went in air later . Lovin Jeevika tooo ... n pooor viren again . Lovex it ... Continueee sooon

Hey hun,

Thanks so much! Glad to see you're adapting to Viren and Jeevika, I understand they're both a lot different to their real characters, but they're still a couple and that's the main thing - I hope lol. Virat, I agree he's a little to egoistic, but with hot guys that totally works, 😆, Manvi will always take the limelight at the end of the day though.

That scene will develop in the next chapter, where the story becomes a lot more clear, it's all very light-hearted, nothing too serious, but glad to see so many enjoying it, and giving me such lovely compliments along the way. Will continue soon, fikar not 😉

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AngelicDesires

@AngelicDesires

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

Jassi jaisi koi nahin! 😆 Hello hun, I thought you've read this before, so how come you're reading it again lmao. Tinxie, write it on 10 more couples and i will still read it... :P

Thanks for the applause, and... 🤗 ... to you too. Thank You dear...

Me and enough of drama 😲, kabhi nahiiin!!! Arre Tinxie, i was talking about my drama... lol...

Thanks hun, glad you're liking it again lol. As i said, write it on 10 more couples, i ll still like... NO love it...

P.S. I get what you mean, trust me I do, but the reason you're saying that is because you are way too used to Jeevika being the typical damsel in distress type shy gal, that's why you feel it don't suit lol, but take out their roles from the television drama from your mind, and trust me you'll be fine, because this is not a spin off from the show bachu 😛, but then again you know you're enititled to your opinion ofc, and I won't gus in your mind to change it otherwise, it's just something you're gonna have to overcome on your jones lol. 😉

Luv u hun.

x

PS:- I am sorry, but you got me wrong... lol i wasnt talking about Virika(Viren+ Jeevika)... i was talking about Gohem... As you have already written it there... Hmmm... Yep, if i dont go by the Onscreen chemistry they share, i think i should be fine with this being written on Gohem too, but somehow it didnt do that... lol

PPS:- How many names are you gonna Christen(Is that the word???...lol) me with??
Love you too dear!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part... :)

Edited by jasminedayal - 13 years ago

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meriyaar

@meriyaar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

loved it!

everytime i read it i start picturing TaSha then i realise this is Virman and Virika lol. waiting for the next chapters for both... and also when will we see Dewaani again?

thanks for the pm and giving nice loong updates :)

xoxo

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: jasminedayal

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: meriyaar
loved it!
everytime i read it i start picturing TaSha then i realise this is Virman and Virika lol. waiting for the next chapters for both... and also when will we see Dewaani again?
thanks for the pm and giving nice loong updates :)
tc
xoxo

Hey girl!

Thanks again lol, I knooow it's so hard to imagine different couples lol, although I can say it fits very well with Virman, but the original concept will always be inspired from Tasha, so I guess I can't argue there. Will update in a few days babe, erm Deewani - lol this is sort of haunting me now, I was just chatting to Missy and she's bugging me about the same thing! LTL fans I tell you they're so ardent! 😎 So I'll tell you the same, I've written half of the next chapter, but as it hasn't reached it's climax I can't post it just yet, Madhu's got a lot of work to do regarding Dutta's anger issues before he faces Kala as his opponent lol, but yeah apart from that Naku and Dutta will have a small moment in this one, so it won't all be wasted after this long. 😳😳

You're always welcome for the pm babez, and ofc for the mega long updates 😆.

Luv ya,

xxx