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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

it is amaizng loved it thanks for the pm and yeah u really need to write more plz pm me if u decide to continue this or u write something new n this was friking good really awesoem

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

It was a wonderful update neha.

lovely one.

Thanks for the pm .Continue writting nd pm me.

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

OMG.. awesome OS!!!
it was beautiful!!
you've written it very well!
and the end was the best!
that message must have made him smile like an idiot!
lool
but anyways, greattt job =D
- Hinal

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nish22

@nish22

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Neha I give you all the rights to kill me for not commenting earlier!!! This is like the best thing i have ever read.. Keep writing more... I abso-f**king-lutely Love the Way you write!!! U seem to be a person who curses a lot :P Hi5!!! :D Awesome!!!

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

You are talented girl...Its not easy to wrap up more than a year's event in about some 2000 words and you did it so well...Claps for you...Swayam's nervousness was depicted so well...and as usual...Rey was right...I loved the end...And the quote at the end was so true...Love involves taking risks...And it is always better thinking "i did it" than "I wish I had told her"...Write some more OS...and I promise I will comment...Even if it takes my blind eyes some 1000 years to find it and read...:P

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SugarCubes

@SugarCubes

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Are you mad? Thodi si satki hui he Kya? Matlab koi pagal hi itna cute OS likh sakta he na isliye confirming! It's seriously fab neha ji! It's jut too cuiyte! :P loved it sooo much! I know I'm late, sorry! Dnt mind haan plz! But dis is just amazing! Awesome nd veryy adorable! :D <3

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730050

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Madhura..

This is a superb superb, hands down Superb OS!!

Thnks a lot Madz !!

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon
You would thnk i would start off my rant on how good your OS was right away, right?
WRONGa
Cause before anything else i wanna kill you for hesitating before posting this. Its a frigging Awesome OS. Why would anyone think twice before posting this?!
Now i start my rant :)
It was an awesome OS. Really, you explained all that in just one post, its not easy to compress incidents of a whole bunch of years into one post. I know that very well cause i'm very bad at shortening stuff.
Back to business, i loved how you shaped the coupe into a whole new story. That was really good work. Rey seemed like a smart guy. I wish Swayam would have just listened to hm in the first place.
Well, I'm glad that he confessed at least when she was about to leave.
N that was so sweet, she sent an emain saying "i love you too" Aww
I have to say this, the ending had a bollywood touch to it. the way he confessed moments before her departure. Sometimes filmy-ness is good..!!!
Well, yeah, thats it. Really liked your OS n hope to see more of these
Thank you for finally posting it after all the death threats 🤗

Haha! I always enjoy your comments Srish 😃 Ending was filmy so that's why I wsnt sure about this but anyways I am happie you liked it...Thnku soo much Ladkii!!🤗

Originally posted by: ccubedtab
Yes this was really fab.. like the way you presentedwas awsome... hats off...

Thnks a lot !!

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730050

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: rachita_1994
Hayee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is superb!!!!

No words to tell you, how much I like it!!!!!!!!1

Superrb Niaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ur greatt!!!

One of the Best OS i hv ever readd!!!!!!! Write one more soon!!!!

Thanku so much Rachtz but I dont think twas dat good !! Anyways I'll write some more :)

Originally posted by: lovely7010
awesome awesome awesome...
luved it
awww it took so much time for swayam to say he loves sharon
but happy day she accepted his luv...thnxx for the pm

Thnku so much :)

Originally posted by: SrushtiP
Superb!! Simply Awesome!!!
👏 👍🏼

Thnku so much Srushti !!

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha
Simply marvellous dear!!!!👍🏼

outstanding...extra-ordinary !!!👏

reallly hats off to you !!!!

this OS really rockx !!!!👍🏼

mwaaah !!!🤗😳

Thnku so much !!😊

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon
Neha I've unreserved my comment do check it out...

Checked it and replied also !!

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730050

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Savage
It's a shame that I have not been reading your FF, or anyone's FFs in the matter. 😳
But since this is an OS, I thought I should read it and wham, it was amazing, really was, I had no idea you were going to surprise me so with your skill, and the flow of the piece, it took me five minutes to read and I dint like it when Facebook interrupted my reading with a message. I enjoyed reading the OS immensely and I really liked how normal the characters sounded, even when woven into this movie-like scenario and change of events. I liked it very much, bud.

Thanks for writing such a delightful one shot, kudos!

Thanks for the PM. (:

Cheers,

Kankshita

Thnks a ton Kanks...I am so glad you like it

Originally posted by: Madhura..
Ok now I will tell in detail..
I loved the way Swayam is ghabra hua to confess...and all those years, how he liked Shar secretly..sorry loved!

Love the role Rey played..

The way swaron keep dating and rejecting others..

Their bonding and internal concern for each others...

Just amazing job girl..and its described wow!!

Plus the way he finally tells Sharon,,and she goes by flight..and way he is so sad and scared and waiting at same time...

Then her reply by mail..

Superb part..happy we cud convince u to post!!

Am happy I supported my 2 S..Hi5 srish and sree

Aww thnku so much for commenting again Madz..Thnku...I am happie you liked it..Thnks for the banner again !!

Originally posted by: ...Pwinch3ss...
wow lovely post yr

Thnks!!

Originally posted by: Anikz003
Awesome OS!!!!!!!!!!

"As far as Swayam knew, the other three hopefuls made a U-turn after taking a look at his face, just moments before they wanted to ask her." 🤣🤣🤣

Thnks !!

Originally posted by: nly4usharon
superb!!!its amazing!!!
dis is one of d best OS i hv ever read!!!
thank you soo much 4 giving us such a beautiful part!!!!
yaar tum kitni achi likhti ho..i luvd it!!!
ab tumhara xamzz bhi hogaya toh m expectng more of ur wrk...nd plz do PM me
once again its damn gud dear!!!!

Thnku so much Angiee...I'll write more for you guys !!:)