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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Ok now I will tell in detail..

I loved the way Swayam is ghabra hua to confess...and all those years, how he liked Shar secretly..sorry loved!

Love the role Rey played..

The way swaron keep dating and rejecting others..

Their bonding and internal concern for each others...

Just amazing job girl..and its described wow!!

Plus the way he finally tells Sharon,,and she goes by flight..and way he is so sad and scared and waiting at same time...

Then her reply by mail..

Superb part..happy we cud convince u to post!!

Am happy I supported my 2 S..Hi5 srish and sree

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Anikz003

@Anikz003

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awesome OS!!!!!!!!!!

"As far as Swayam knew, the other three hopefuls made a U-turn after taking a look at his face, just moments before they wanted to ask her." 🤣🤣🤣

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

superb!!!its amazing!!!
dis is one of d best OS i hv ever read!!!
thank you soo much 4 giving us such a beautiful part!!!!
yaar tum kitni achi likhti ho..i luvd it!!!
ab tumhara xamzz bhi hogaya toh m expectng more of ur wrk...nd plz do PM me
once again its damn gud dear!!!!

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

neha this is just AWESOME... woman... keep comibg up with such brilliant stuffs...

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Fantastic...luvd it so mch...beautifully written...finally swayam confessed...i to thot ki dis tym also he wud let her go...bt he said...nyc...
Awesome writing...:)
thnx fr d pm...:)

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Freaking awesome os..loved it...finally swayam confessed...
Thanks 4 the pm..

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

amazing , awesome , outstanding , fantastic , many more adjectives !! nia marvalous os ;):) one of the best i have read till now ! continue writing many more , u r an amazing writer :):)