FF: Will-O'-the-Wisp - On hold indefinitely - Page 24

Ah! A big fan of the movie and so I ask you to refrain from comparing anything with Saagara Sangamam...

I'm seeing a lot of people who understand Telugu going around this thread, no wonder Lehar would be one too...😉

Very satisfying(?) update for me. I love how you get into the inner workings of the minds of your characters in all their steps towards each other. This was done wonderfully. Please continue soon.

Hasini 🤗...what an update...it was sweet ,cute ,funny,emotional and touching...loved the convo between Dhruv and Nanhi...the way it started it made me 😆...lifebouy soaps...killing Dolly...but the unsaid thoughts and doubts made me all 😭...what did she mean by her Ma falling into a naali in the city and washing the smell with a bar of soap 😕...this budding friendship/relation between the two of them is heart touching...always makes me all chocked up...the credit goes to your incredible writing skill👍🏼 ...it connects us with the characters so well...thank u so much for giving us another awesome update 😊

Yeah...Good good...I'm loving Nanhi too nowadays, though initially I was a little skeptical about having her involved in the story line.I was even worried about picking a little older Nanhi when the story only calls for a six year old.

So are you all ready for the sparks and their attraction to take the forefront? Let's build up that track from Part 15 onwards...

You know the feeling that comes with carrying the whole thread on your shoulders?

Yeah! Its getting to me again...

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Yeah...Good good...I'm loving Nanhi too nowadays, though initially I was a little skeptical about having her involved in the story line.I was even worried about picking a little older Nanhi when the story only calls for a six year old.

So are you all ready for the sparks and their attraction to take the forefront? Let's build up that track from Part 15 onwards...

Ah! Thanks Avi...

Well, we should have silent readers first to have them drop a comment. People refuse to read anything other than M&G. But its not always encouraging when people have nothing to say or leave the classic one word response. I'm not asking for post after post of appreciation, just a thought or two would help.

As for the city being the naali allusion, you will figure it out in the next three chapters. Its all about Dhruv and Lehar and their conversations and some unspoken ones too...

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

the way it started it made me 😆...life-bouy soaps...killing Dolly...but the unsaid thoughts and doubts made me all 😭...what did she mean by her it connects us with the characters so well...thank u so much for giving us another awesome update 😊

Ah! sweet...Just what I wanted to hear...

As I said, you will find out about Lehar's fall into the naali soon...

Always meant to ask you what you feel about Yami being the story. Is it working for you with Dhruv (KK)? 😉 You know why I'm asking this, right?


Thanks!

Ok, will wait for the naali clear up. Doesn't Dhruv need a part time something to keep him occupied? Also Guru has not featured much here, he is an interesting character don't you think?

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

You know the feeling that comes with carrying the whole thread on your shoulders?

Yeah! Its getting to me again...