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Posted: 13 years ago
hey that's true i can be adorable most times haha
thanks for the coompliment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sjm15

Eee!

So cute!
I usually reserve this eee reaction for babies! But now I make an exception! Hehehehe
cute na. hehehe. thanks :)

Such a cute update! love love love it! I noticed that you posted close to 2-3am, I was surprised! So sweet of you to post even when you have in laws over! 🤗
have the best inlaws possible. but i still need to do the work and what not na. this is the only tme i get. hehe. so i guess it all works out. plus i am a born insomniac. so. :)

I loved the trek! Tom and Minta are amazing friends! Just amazing!
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wait and watch what these two evil people have planned. mua hahahahha..hahha.
Khushi and Arnav held hands, 😳 So so cute! And their eyes conversation is always adorable! So romantic! You know I am working today, and in my half spare hour, am reading BKP, not watching the actual epi on the net! That can wait until I get home. 😆

heheh.. and you say that updating at 3 in the morning is a biggy. not compared to what you did :).. thanks.. :).. hehe. BKP is not as good as IPKKND though :)
I feel like jumping up and down! 😃 🥳

my eyes will be going up and down seeing some one jump from reading this. baad mian chakkar bhi agae ga. hehe :)

And she is going to do more! 😍

minta hai na. karwaigi!

Guys do need reassurances! So true!
yaar, yeh baat hum psychologist say ziyada kaun samagh sak tha hai. what the mind and soul need and are craving right.

I am amazed that she allowed him to carry her up to the room when she was wet, or did I understand it wrong? Too too too cute!

he looked ahead. if he would have looked at her, he would have seen her wet. and maybe made her more uncomfy. she trusts him. and she was all wet. how could she go. so he helped out. bas. like always. sighhh...

Thank you for an amazing update, for putting a smile on my face, and for the PM!
your comments put a smile on mine 😃
thanks

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy_1001

I love the updates, and the storyline is just plain awesome!

Just wondering isn't it kind hard to go hiking wearing churridaar? Did Khushi only bring shalwaar kameez when she went to university, just wondering?

Im always checking this story for updates, Im hooked!


hehe its not hard at all. you know i was known as chicken legs when i was a kid. always always wore choridar. loveee them.. and you can do anything in something that you are comfy in. right :)... no no. she brought pants shirt, dresses. but arnav packed her bag remember. and he said right before. you are more comfortable in shalwar suit right. remember :)..

hehe. thanks :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update very cute and sweet them holding hands so sweet awesome well written beautifully done thanks for the pm loved how they are always tuned in to each other



OMG OMG OMG. ths pic just gave me another scene idea. THANK YOUUU 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashshhs

Too cute...loved, loved, loved it! Make them confess their love in words as soon as possible. Thanks for such a wonderful story :) :) :)


man. jab akhon hi akhon main baat hoti hai, akhon hi akhon main mulaqat hoti hai, zuban say ah thak na niklay, par dil. thak baat phonch gati hai. hehe. meaning... you dont need words when you eyes can talk to their heart directly. right :)
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Originally posted by: nehamcc987

reserved!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


update tho kar nay dooo :P .heheheh..hehh too cute..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehamcc987

reserved

i am only reserve to make sure i am first i know i am crazy actually i don't think most arshi fans are normal


DHINKA CHIKA DHINKA CHIKA..
ae ae ae ae
re ae aea ae
DHINKA chika dhinka chika.
hehehehehe
its ok. i am the same. or maybe worse 😕
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There are two musical compositions for this one. First is this new guy I found. And the seond one is of couse my fav. Omar akram. The dance is based on his tune. I have highlighted where yo need to listen to him from. The other guy you can start listening to from here. :)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Ntg5hz-Zcw&feature=BFa&list=PLC486F8C9D56215CE&index=1




Part 26

Minta: there are some couple that are made in heaven, and I know for a fact, that you two are one of them. Okay. Let me go and get something for you to wear. hm. I have the perfect dress for you. Yes you are doing whatever I tell you to. Bas. Okay. Its just a dinner and a movie. Nothing else. Okay. (minta had to make sure she did not take the word date around khushi. She already lectured her enough today as is.) she left her room and returned with a long satin black dress. A nice, not to low v-neck, with capped sleeves. Minta made her hair and did very light makeup. She also got ready her self. Leaving khushi alone for a little while to get herself emotionally ready. Minta came back to get khushi. Khushi placed the rose back into the trolly. The girls both started to walk down the stairs. And were amazed to see that the guys had done. It was just mesmerizing.


Khushi and minta just looked around. The lights were off. But the entire place was set up with lit candles. Some were rose scented, and some beautiful curved long ones. The logs in the fire place burning. Arnav and tom were finishing setting up the table. White satin table cover. Shining sterling silver cutlery, and a single long white candle in the center on top of a long silver candle stand. It was just simple beautiful. The guys did not notice the girls standing there. The girls were silent. Taking in the breath taking site of each and every thing one at a time. Minta leaned into khushi's ear and whispered.

Minta: khushi. Mahaul hai. Aur sathi samnay khara howa hai. Ek baar us pyar ko apna kay daikh lo. He loves you. And deserves to be loved as well. Just take a look at him. She saw him. He was lighting the final candle the one on the table. As the flame was lit, she saw a man, who loved her, understood her, cherished her, and every moment spent with her. She saw the man, she wanted to spend the rest of her life with.

Minta: tom and I are busy with us. So you two will have your own privacy. Even with us around. I promise. Khushi turned to see mintas face. She saw a friend. A true friend. Minta cupped khushis face.

Minta: ek bar, sirf ek bar, us pyar ko apnao. Aur usko tumhara pyar apnanay do. Hmmm..


tom had put his hand on aranv shoulder. Aranv turned around putting his back to the girls.

Tom: listen arnav I need to tell you something.

Aranv: yeah. I think we managed to get everything for you two set. Are we missing something.

Tom: yes we are. Two more people.

Aranv: what do you mean.

Tom: minta spoke to khushi today. And listen, you have to act as if you dont know anything ok. Minta spoke to khushi and managed to get khushi to accept her feelings for you. This is the last night here man. Make the most of it. You wont get another opportunity like this again in your life. Trust me.

Arnav: what did khushi say?

Tom: minta has spoken to her about accepting and acknowledging her feelings for you. You know khushi best. But minta has given her the shove or push. You may need to start off a couple of things. Act normal. But dont be so uptight around us. I know you guys are better with silence between you, but if you want things to progress then start to talk to her more. Minta and I are both going to here, but not be here. You two will have all the privacy you want. If you want we can go and eat on the deck leaving you guys here.

Arnav: no no.. thats ok. He smiled. Thanks tom. You really are a true friend. They were about to hug. But then heard minta clear her throat. Both of them turned. Their eyes widened.

They saw two beautiful women glowing in the reflection of the candle lights. Khushi looked down and minta looked at them and smiled.

Minta: are you ready.

Khushi: sighed. Hmmm... she looked at her friend and smiled. Minta smiled back.

Minta: make this night memorable khushi. Yehi ek mauqa hai. Trust yourself, and trust him. They both started to walk towards the table.

Minta: you guys have done a wonderful job. Its just.. breath taking. Thank you .. she walked over and hugged tom. Tom hugged her back.

Tom: you look stunning. As always. Both smiled. And tried very hard to set an example for their friends. But, khushi and arnav had their own ways.

He looked at her loving, and she blushed. She slowly looked up. And met his loving gaze. So much warmth and affection was in them. Both taking deep deep breathes. Hoping that the slower their breathed, the more time would stop for them.

Arnav eyes: you look … sigh.

Khushi looked down while tucking her lose strands of hair behind her ear.

Tom pulled a chair out for minta, and she sat down. Arnv did the same. Khushi gently sat down. He sat right beside her. It was a rectangular table. Tom and minta sat along one side, and arnav and khushi on the other side. The guys opened up the first dish. Pasta al-afredo sauce (white sauce). Followed with soup and garlic bread. Apparently tom had braught this ready to make things in this suitcase. It was easy for them to make, and had an impact rather than pizza.

All of the four passed around the dishes to each other and took it out. Tom, minta and arnav didnt do the let the guys serve the girls. Because than would be moving it a bit too fast for khushi. It was nice seeing how they all tried to help her gradually become comfortable with the environment.

They enjoyed a decent conversation remembering the drive here, past university experiences, etc. khushi did speak once in a while. Laughing at mintas jokes or smiling at something that the guys said. Slowly she become more easy comfortable with tom and minta being there. Arnav was sitting on the left. He finished his pasta. He put his right hand under the table and held it out. Khushi noticed. He was looking at tom and minta. He was about to move his hand back, thinking she would not want to hold it infront of them. He felt three shaking fingers on the side of his plam. Right between his thum and index finger. He felt a pleasurable tinkling sensation as she slowly slid her delicate, smooth fingers across palm and his fingers. He sighed. He felt her thumb caress the back of his hand and slid across. Once he felt her palm touch the side of his palm between this thumb and index finger he wrapped his fingers around hers. Both felt a sensation rise from their fingers, making their way across their hands, across their wrist and up their arms. Right to their heart. Arnav and khushi turned their heads to see each other. Both smiled as they continued to hold each others hand under the table. They looked back at tom and minta. Tom and minta both smiled and continued to talk about random stuff. Dinner had finished.

Tom: dessert anyone. Everyone negatively shook their heads. They were full.

Khushi: main coffee bana doon. Wait. There was no more milk.

Minta looked at tom. She had lied in the morning. Tom understood.

Tom: I got more. There was a conveince place near by and I took his car.

Khushi: should I just make it for everyone.

Tom: yes please. I have heard a lot about the coffee that you make. She smiled politely. She knew who must have told him.

Minta frantically shoke her head. She looked at arnav. He just smiled and blinked his eyes once. She understood that.

Minta: I will clear the table. Why dont you guys go and get the other stuff ready. Hmm. She hinted to tom.

Tom: yes. Of course. Arnav lets go.

Minta started to clear the table while khushi was making coffee. As the water boiled she helped minta out.

Minta stopped and hugged khushi.

Khushi was somewhat shocked.

Minta: you know what. For the first time khushi. You seem khush from inside. I mean it. Hamesha aisay hi khush raho.

Khushi: can I ask you something.

Minta: pocho..

khushi: main kuch ghalat tho nahin kar rahi hoon na? She seemed worried. Confused. Doubtful. She had this inner gut telling her that yes she did love him. But something was holding her back. What she just didnt know. Minta turned khushi around and made her look at arnav. He was sitting on the sofa with tom chatting away.

Minta: look at him khushi. When you fell into the water, he immediately came to make sure your izzat was still intact. For you izzat means a lot more. Or more strict point of view that is. In your own eyes I mean. You felt uncomfortable, and before you could say anything, or I could, he acted in a way to make sure that you were ok. I am sure that you two must have come close. I have a feeling of that. But I know both of you. Khushi started to remember yesterday night, their passionate dance. And how they almost kissed. She remembered arnavs reassuring words. We will never do anything that will not allow us to look at ourselves in the mirror.

Minta: khushi. Trust him. And trust yourself. Bas.

Khushi turned around and smiled. She hugged minta with love.

Minta: chalo. The water is boiling. Coffee. Khushi made the coffee while minta finished cleaning up. Khushi put all of the cups on a tray and took it over. Minta followed. Khushi was about to serve tom. But realized that she did not have her duppata. She tried to bend down but didnt. Aranv noticed her hessitation. He stood up and went infront of khushi.

She looked at him. Minta sat beside tom and started talking.

Arnav: which one is which.

Khushi: voh. They are all the same. Arnav grabbed one cup and gave one to tom. He turned around to get his cup. Very very quietly khushi whispered... thank you. Enough for his ears to hear her.

Aranv looked at her and smiled. She smiled back. Her eyes sparkled with the reflection from the candles. Time stood still. They both just looked at each other. Candles. The sweet aroma of a rose filled the room. Khushi looked down shyly. She raised the tray a bit while still looking down. There was only one cup left. Did she just make three cups.

Arnav: sirf ek. He grabbed the cup.

Khushi: kafi hai. She blushed and went back to the put the tray away. Arnav was shocked. Pleased. He smirked. This trip was truly becoming more and more memorable for them. Him and khushi had taken their relationship to new levels. Step by step, they became closer. He sat down on the sofa. Minta and tom sat on one. Aranv quietly asked minta: what did you exactly say to her. Couldnt you say it before. They all started laughing.

Khushi came back: what happened. Why is eveyrone laughing. She asked with a smile on her face. She was about to sit down beside minta. But looked at arnav. He tiltled his head to the seat right beside him. She hessitated. Minta put her feet up on the sofa and leaned in against tom. Tom put his arm on the back of the sofa. Allowing her to more comfortably sit. His hand was infront of mintas. Khushi looked at him. Minta with her eyes hinted for her to go there. She started to nudge her head towards arnav while looking at khushi. Khushi sighed. Smiled and went and sat beside him. She folded both of her hands in her lap. Tom and minta gave each other another high five.

Tom leaned into minta ears and started whispering.

Tom: nice move. But how do we get them to dance. Wheres the music?

Minta: I forgot the cd. Argh. And there is no cd player here. Think tom think. This is not kuch kuch hota hai that you play a piano with your fingers in the air. Oh how I wish I was kajol and my shah rukh did that for me. Sigh.

Tom: phir say drama queen shuru hogae. Hehe. They kept on giving each other ideas.


Aranv looked a bit angry. Khushi felt something. She looked at minta and tom. They were busy within themselves. She looked at arnav. He seemed dissapointed and a bit angry. Straight face. Raised eyebrow. He looked at her.

Khushi: kya howa. She whispered.

Aranv did not answer. He just stared at her.

Khushis eyes: batayeh na. Please. Kya howa.

Arnavs eyes: why didnt you come when I asked you. Did you have to have minta tell you to come. Varna nahin ati na.

Khushi sadly looked down. She didnt know what to think. She wanted to take things a bit slowly at her pace. She just mentally agreed to this. She.. she.. just sighed... she saw aranvs hand on hers. She looked up. First at minta and tom. She gulped. They werent looking. Thank God. She looked at arnav.

Khushis eyes: sorry. I .. I ..

he placed his finger on her silent lips. She didnt speak a word, but he knew what she was saying. He could read her eyes.

Aranv: nahin khushi. I am sorry. Shayad main... whatever you are comfortable with. Mat ghabrao. Tumharay liye puri zindagi intizaar karon ga.

Khushi smiled as he moved his finger. He had finished taking a few sips and gave khushi the cup before minta and tom would notice. Khushi held the cup. She slowly brought the cup to her lips. Closing her yes. And slowly taking a sip. She could still feel the wetness from his lips around the rim. She moved the cup back down and licked her lips as she sucked them in. aranv had always drank after her, but this was the first time that she drank after him. Her heart was beating a bit faster and faster. Before she could bring the cup back up again. Aranv had taken it back and drank another sip from where her lips has touched the rim. She just looked at him with widened eyes. He leaned back on the sofa. Minta had sat back up and faced them. Tom fixed his position as well. Khushi just smiled as she lowered her gaze. She looked up at minta.

Minta hinted and asked her with her head movements: what happened.

Khushi just smiled and negatively nodded her head.: nothing.

Minta closed her lips and gave a interesting look. She smiled at her friend. And khushi was happy that minta was there for her. With her. Supporting her. Allowing her to accept what needed to be accepted.

Minta: tom. What the movie that you guys got?

Tom: argh. I forgot it. Upstairs. Its not a romantic one though. Not for this atmosphere.

Minta: aww. Phir ab.

Tom: lets dance. Hmm. Mintas eyes widened with excitement.

Minta: magar tom. Where is the music. There is not cd, mp3, ipod or stereo here. Phir. She sighed in dissapointment.

Aranv took out his phone: music I have. Hmm.

Tom: perfect. He stood up and put his cup down. and asked minta for a dance. She put her cup away and held onto his hand. They stood in the dance position. Her hands on his shoulders, and he put his hands on her back. He was about to move it down to the waist but saw mintas evil look. He stopped. Aranv had put on (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wLwZqoJjt-w&feature=BFa&list=PL92E77B1F0F1BB762 ) on his phone. He put his phone and cut on the side coffee table. He stood up and placed his hand infront of khushi.

Aranv: may I have the this dance.

Khushis eyes widened. She wasnt smiling or anything. She noticed mintas head at the back staring at her. She smiled and nodded. Gently placing her hand in his. He took a few steps back and she followed his lead. He moved his hand that was holding hers a bit up and twirlled her once until she came closer to him. Her hand landed on this shoulder. Their eyes met. He slid his hand onto her waist.

Arnavs eyes: aisa mauqa phir shayad milay hummay. Is pal ko jee lain.

Khushi lowered her eyes.. and after a couple of seconds smiled. Aranv pulled her waist and made her move in until their was no space between them. She eyes widened. She turned he head around to notice minta and tom. Minta had her had on toms chest and had just closed her eyes. She noticed khushi turning her head. Tom had leaned his head against hers. Both just swaying side to side.

Aranv moved his hand from her waist and touched her chin. He made her looked into his eyes. She then wrapped his arms tightly around her waist again. Moving his right foot ahead. She moved her left foot behind. Then back. He moved his left foot back and her right foot followed. Then back. They started to semi waltz, tango, and just let their bodies flow with the music in perfect synch. Sometimes just swaying. Sometimes just twirling. Sometimes just dipping. But never ever breaking eye contact. For the first time, they felt a type of fire arise from within them. Needing and wanting to be each others. But controlling their emotions they just danced. Their heart beated together. Their breathes danced in tune. Khushi could read what aranvs eyes were saying.

Aranv eyes: thank you. For making these moments of my life the best ones. Har pal jo tumharay sath juzara hai, vohi meri zindagi kay sab say haseen pal hain. Bachpan say lay kar aj thak. Tumharay sath juzara howa har pal. Mujhe yaad hai. Kya tum.. kya tum.. he seemed a bit hessitant for the first time. Hes eyes seemed a bit worried.

Khushi looked at him lovingly. Giving him the courage to continue.

Aranv eyes: kya tum meri zindagi ka har pal aisa khoobsorat bana sak thi ho.

Khushi eyes: meri zindagi ki har saans hum apkay naam kar chukay hain. Yeh pal kya cheez hain? The let go of each other hands and he twirled her around. Her back to his chest. He leaned into take in the mesmerizing scent of her hair. Sliding his hand across her stomach. She closed her eyes. And put her hands onto of his. But he moved back. She opened her eyes. And turned back around. He held her waist with both hands. And she put her hands on his shoulders. He hinted with his eyes that minta and tom were still there. She felt a sense of happiness from within. They did not let their emotions get the best of them. Especially him. He made sure that their personal moments, where theirs only. She smiled and looked down. Still swaying side to side.

Aranv leaned into her ear.

Arnav: khushi..

khushi looked up.

He nudged his head towards the door to the deck.

Arnav: bahar chalain. Hmm. I think they, tom and minta might want some time alone.

She giggled. Ghotay she thought. He wanted to be alone with her, not leave them alone. She nodded her head. He let go of her. They started to head out.

Tom: hey aranv. He said from the back. He threw his phone to him.

Tom: thanks . Aranv caught it. No more words were needed. As to where are you guys going. Or anything. Minta and tom just moved their way to the kitchen. Aranv and khushi went outside.


Precap: hehe. Sorry for no precap yesterday. As per one of my good friends, I decided to become like star plus and sometimes give precaps and updates and sometimes not. Hehe. Okay for today.

Aranv does something to khushi. Breath taking. Under the stars. Dont get your minds running off. Hehe. Nothing that extreme. And something that khushi would allow. Hmm. Then minta had an evil plan from before. Rmember and that is what tom and minta are going to be doing inside. Mua hahah. Dont forget to comment. LONG LONG comments. Shehe. Sorry for beign greedy. It you cant, than that is still ok. Will love you none the less :) … and do tell me how the song selection was.

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update tho kar nay dooo :P .heheheh..hehh too cute..

hey freezie i love how you comment on every single comment how sweet
also the way you comment on the persons comment is so cute too
do update soon cuz i am tried of reloading the page every single minute
like i said i like being first for your update🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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hey freezie looks like i am stalking ur post haha
i love reading it before the pm

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