Bachpan ka pyar...part 1-32 - Page 68

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update very cute and sweet them holding hands so sweet awesome well written beautifully done thanks for the pm loved how they are always tuned in to each other

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Posted: 13 years ago
Too cute...loved, loved, loved it! Make them confess their love in words as soon as possible. Thanks for such a wonderful story :) :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehamcc987

reserved!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haha me first to comment after a long long time,finally party time
Dhink chicka, dhinka chaika i am dancing to this. hehe.

Dhink chika, dhinka chaika

re ae ae.. here wa ek thumka .. therewa ek thumka. hehe.

Ae ae ae..

Dhink chika, dhinka chaika

Dhink chika, dhinka chaika




Re ae ae..

Ae ae ae..

haha you can definitely call me crazy or what.i am more obsessed w/ this story than the actual ipkknd show.i totally loved the update, absolutely amazing but amazing sounds an understatement to me.you have left me totally speechless.freezie you are totally awesome you have updated 3 in the morning when you should have been sleeping plus you wrote a 6,244 word update to be exact or you can say 13 pages exact.yay yeah they got even closer on this trip.oh i love how both got the message that each other loves each other.it was so hilarious when everyone was smiling except minta instead she was pulling their leg (arshi's).oh khushi is so innocent and the sharmili types that are so scared to tell even her best friend like if they had a crush.oh boy she almost died when minta saw the rose and that by the dresser and she had to shoo her away.khushi remember minta is always gonna be one step ahead since she is such a drama queen

hehe. you are adorable. you know that hehe. i still think the show is better though. :S .. at 3 am. its the only time i get :). after looking after inlaws, kids, hubby, cookin,g cleaning, everything. sigh. this is what takes my thakan away. plus reading your comments as well. hehe. dhinka chika.. dhinka chika.. argh. you got this tune into me.

i cannot believe that you did a word count. hehe. or saw the number of pages. yikes. man i dont even do that. i just make sure that i have three emotional scenes. plus until the music i have in my playlist plays. hehe. sigh. i love this story because it touches the heart. right. hence its close to my heart as well. and always will be :) ..

minta. just read the next update. and you WILL loveee her. i told you guys from before. you will LOVE this girl. :D ..

freezie if you don't mind i will tell you what i thought about the update later like 12:00ish cuz if i don't go my mom will kill me and it's 3:20 am here

hehe. its ok. i dont mind. as long as you like it and read it. bas that is enough for me :)

omg so sweet of arnav to help her get down from tree and even give her his shirt when she got all wet and her clothes stuck to her.such a gentlemen rarely guys like these exist.also how nice of khushi to give arnav half her chai because he dropped his . i found these things so sweet and romantic.oye hoye khushi actually held arnav's hand i think i am gonna faint.don't forget she talked to tom for the sake of arnav who does that,that was very sweet and made arnav happy.it was adorable how each other helps one another back to back.

guys like this do exist. its a RARE. very very RARE species. hehe. one or two left. i got one. 😳 hehe. love my hubby. and no. i do not write about anything between me and my hubby. this is pure imagination. but my guy is the best. that is what everyone in love says. i have been married for .. i dont know how many years and we are still like this. 😳

she held his hand out or pure emotional .. outburst you can say. she needed him. and he was there which ever way she wanted. i think he also almost fainted when she did that. so dont worry. hehe. and she sees how he is doing everything for her. she is also trying to do things that will make him happy. just wait and watch. :) next update. sigh...

okay i just love how minta explained to khushi this is how last day here and should take the relationship to a newer level etc etc.also if she missed this opportunity she will regret it the rest of her life.also arnav is a great guy etc etc.haha she tricked her into a dinner and movie which was actually her date.hope she confesses her love soon.i really loved this update.totally amazing.

khushi needed to realize that time was a factor. and only minta could have done that. and she did :).. plus. it is better to try and do something, as long as your conscious allows it rather than regret it. regret eats up a person from inside. :)

do continue soon and thank you so much for the pm p.s. everything was absolutely perfect except no precap jk who needs one when you wrote such a long and phenomenal update.don't worry we luv the long updates the most


hehe. like a good friend of mine tells me, she is also a reader, that i some times act like star plus. hehe. well lately i have been acting like it. kabhi update miss hogaya ya phir precap nahin .heheh. sorry will try though it was a bit too late. and with inlaws over. i dont get much sleep anyways. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehamcc987

hey freezie it's 2:50 am here in chicago
i stayed all night waiting for this update
i was like i have to have to be the first to comment
ok i am gonna comment now hold up a sec
by the way are you gonna continue soon or tomorrow


you know what. i am coming to chicago in june. i hope. end of june. hehe. i have my cousins wedding to attend. you are truly adorable. you know that. hehe. waking up all night. all i can say is.. i am speechless .. thank you :)

i am updating now. and will update anohter one before i go to bed. its 10. so the next one after this will be regular time. :) .. i hope. wish me luck.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dhwanikapoor

Phew!!!
Got back to normal after a week...had d most crucial week of ny life...jjust pray for me dii...
you are always in my prayers :)..

Ohk so I read d last 5 updates altogether and trust me it was a much better way...starting from d beginning of d trip to till today I read it ol...d continuity made me love it more... And was moved...
wow. 5 updates. man those were long. how long did it take you. 😕 i cant get my husband to read one. wait he read the one i dedicated to him only. but the others. all he does if i am reading you comments on my phone, then he just scrolls down and sees how long i wrote it. and he reads the comments as well. hehe. i try to prove to him that this is my true calling. and i expect him to be this romantic. ehhe. just fun and games with him :)

Everything about d trip is breath-taking and romantic...d dance,d way he sleeps on her lap in d. Car,dey sitting together..everything...

just wait for their last night there. 😉

Still running short on time so will re-read d updates whenever I get free...promise...coz I hav really got a lot of comment...
comments i love comments. but take your time. i can understand how busy you must be :) .wishing you luck .. 😃

Always remember even if I fail to comment..i l really love ur work and appreciate it coz its close to my heArt..
hhehe. i can understand why it is so close to you :) .. its close to me too :)
P.S till den pls bear wid me,dii
chalo maaf kiya. hehe. no no. enjoy your time and what is going on. :) this ff is not running away anywhere. dont worry. :)
Loads of love and hugs
Dhwani

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Posted: 13 years ago
reserved
i am only reserve to make sure i am first i know i am crazy actually i don't think most arshi fans are normal
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priasweet

wow sooo beautiful and amazing update

every part of this update is outstanding
especially the way minta talked to khushi to encourage her to feel her love and express her love to arnav that was simply superb
loved it a lot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and why no precap 😭
pls update soon
eagerly waiting to know what is gonna happen after dinner
what khushi is gonna do?????


hehe thanks. minta i love. told you guys you would love her. hehe. she is what khushi needed. khushi needed to realize that time was about to escape. and minta gave her the push shove and what not. hehe. she is a crucial part of the story :)..

for precap. sorry it was three in the morning and i needed to sleep as well. my inlaws were over and i have to wake up first thing in the morning and then the race to complete the day begins :D ,. hehe.. this is my relxation and destresser .. hehe.
thanks for the lovely update. khushi will.. not telling. hehehe :P alot happens during dinner. and a lot more happens after dinner .. hehe that is all i can say.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: umamashahid

m so sorry di. i was a bit busy with my examz so couldn't read ur updates.

i've read 3 parts now i mean 18, 19, 20. they r just awesome


hehe. its all good. i hope you do well :) ...
the ff is not running away anywhere so dont worry. take you time for your exams and what not :)>. good luck 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

wow tht was an awesome update...

loved the way minta is helping khushi to come out n be open...
waiting for nxt part eagerly...
waise which movie this tym????
wanna see wat khushi does...
update sooon...


minta is exactly what khushi needed. her friendship is true, and afterwards you will also get to see its loyalty :) ..
movie,, wait and watch. hehe.. i dont know either. hhehehe. movie wil be covered in not this next part, but the one after that. hehe..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nupsiii

MAN!!!!! that was amazinggg..ur every part is amazinggg...plzz pm me :))


hehe. glad you liked it :)

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