Bachpan ka pyar...part 1-32

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: dumas
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OMG. that is the smile that i imagined arnav to have when he was going back inside. hehe. thanks for this pic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: Sjm15
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I love how this trio is going! You know hoe to give treats!

First the car, when he sleeps on her lap, and then the deck! So sweet, serene. Dhak dhak dhak...
I fell hard for this Arnav, he is adorable! Mr Romance personified. Wow his hotness and romantic to the boot! 😍

The evening by the lake as amazing, she wore the dress for him! And the music, the ambience, the colors of the sun, the beauty of Toronto fall... This is just gorgeous!

Their dance as so passionate and sweet... And Khushi is opening up about how she feels for him! She wants him to know how she feels and he's the one for her too!😳

And he said they wouldn't do anything which will embarrass them! So gentle and so traditional!

I bet he left her another rose, confirming that the first one was his! I could be the Payal, but I think it's a rose. I think he will keep the Payal with him until they get married... Idk, he seems like that kinda guy... Maybe give it to her as a part of a few gifts on first night, you know.

A campfire by the lake sounds nice.. I know i know... you already gave me the movie night...thank you! I as thinking more beautiful music, campfire, sharing a blanket, looking into each others eyes with the light of the fire... 😳

Emergency shopping trip in the day... For clothes or something... Where they allow each other to choose for them.. Awww..

You could see I'm all fired up... Thanks to you!

I am sorry you were feeling a bit low... 😕 Hugs!

You are lucky to have a hubby who is there for you all the way... Just like Arnav of your story! Is he the inspiration by any chance? 😊 I know you dedicated to him... So sweet!

I wouldn't be where I am if it weren't for my husband... He is always there for me... He is more romantic than me for sure... Still... These ones that you write about take the cake! 👏

You write very well... And with such a positivity! More hugs.

And Thank you for the PM!

honesly. i LOVED your comment. hehe. THANK YOU. 😳 your comment brought a smile to my face. not feeling as low anymore. jsut had a bit too much to deal with lately. but i have my hubby by my side and that i all i need. plus you guys and your comments. hehe. that is the second half ofmaking me feel better :)..

i told you guys this trip changed lives. right. :) .. from the time is starts their journey of realizing their true feelings began. and has just begum. he is Mr. Romance pernonified for sure. he is .. well. just what we all want. hehe. right.

she felt for the first time that she also needed to break though a bit or break some of the barriers she has put on herself. and that only for arnav. not for anyone else. ever.

i loved this music. omar akram is my fav artist. his work is just amazing. honestly. any time i feel depressed, or just need to relax, this is what i listen to. i put on his playlist and feel a lot better from the first beat.

and there is a perfect time for everything. right. sunset for a dance at the beach. basically all you need to do is make sure that all of the surrounding is in your favour for what feeling you want surrounding the atmosphere. i love toronto. have always lived here. came here when i was a baby. or toddler. and fell in love with this place since then. just cant leave. home is where the heart is. and my heart is here in toronto.

khushi needs to start to open up. she will a lot more. soon. just wait and watch.

i am sure that if a girl is traditional she would not want a completely different culture guy. they need to have some common grounds. and lets put it this way. a girl can display her traditional aspect in many ways. looking down. the clothes that she wears and what not. for a guy, its hard. and this arnav, is. close to her heart. they are truly meant for each other.

you know me too well now. hehe. darn. no more element of surprise. hhehe. yes its a rose. i started to write it up. but havent finished it yet so i wont post it right now. will in a bit. once its done. and payal is now arnavs. close to his heart. does khushi get her payal back. wait and watch. :)

I LVOEEE THE IDEA. OMG. i was blocked in what to do next for this night and i just didnt know. THANK YOU sooo soo much for the campfre idea. loveee it. i am so taking that scene that you just described. you know you should also start to write. and do add me to your pm list once you do. for sure.

hehe. no my hubby is my hubby. never will share anything about him or us. hehe. sorry that is ours. his love is my inspiration for life. bas :)... update kya. i dedicated my life to him. hehe. ok a bit to mushy gushy. hehe.

cherish your partner. and love them for they do love you. right :) ..

thanks once again for the wonderful idea, and comment.. loveddd it. hehe. thanks

ok where do i start. right..

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: harshitaluv

ya ya 100 percent chale ga...now i'm gonna read the most awaited part of bkp *bachpan ka pyar * :P

hehe i loved the abbreviation. BKP. hehe. thanks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Taz.roxox

Awww i seriously love and don't worry u don't sound like an aunty!!!!!! But OMG I LOVE ThE TRIP SO MUUCH!!!! I LOVE SUNSETS and get to see them everyday cuz i live on an island near a bay!!! And they are so breathtaking!!!! they are slowly on their way to becoming more than friends and i love that!!!! Don't if you take time off if you needed i will wait for the upadates!!!!! lets see where arnav goes with this dance and how things will be whenn they go back!!!! Again LOVE this fan fic and love you for putting the time in to write!!!!!! ALWAYS STAY HAPPY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cant believe you put up 2 parts this soon gonna read part 23 NOW!!!!!

OKAY PART 23 was amazing!!!!!! loved that ARnav slowed down and knows what not to do!!!! I loved the cut little dance on the beach it was amazing!!!! Hats off to you!!! Waiting to see what he left in the door!!!!

part 22. hehe. hehe. lucky you.. not fair. i want to live on an island now. hehe. cherish it. and enjoy the sunsets on my behalf as well. i still love the toronto ones hehe. sorry. easy does it. from friends onwards taking slow steps to make sure you dont fall. right. i need to be in the right mood inorder to be able to write what i think or feel. right. wasnt feeling that well so wasnt able to. but thanks for the patience. thanks :) ... yea, i missed giving two updates, so i decided to make it up. bas. and i am trying to stay happy. and always will. just keep giving such loving and long comments. and i will smile. promise :)...

part 23

i have written two or three dances before. but honestly. i didnt want to take another bollywood song with lyrics. their love is unspoken. and omar akrams tunes speak volumes itself. i listen to it whenever i write. you know what. i just got an idea while reply to your comment. i will post what ever peice i am listening to of his. and you guys can also listen to it, if you want. so you also get the same effect that i have while writting. and arnav respects khushi. he knows her. he understands her. he remembers what she has said to aish and respects it. at the door. its.. well she confirmed his feelings right. he heard his name in her heart beats. so he will give her something that will take it to the next step. a gift to welcome their new blossoming relationship. bas :)

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: harshitaluv
Awww wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow i just luved it like anything..ur the best write..i'm deeply fallen in luv wid ur story... . ...loads and loads nd loads of luv to u...

hehe. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. hhhehehe. i am not the best writer. just an amateur with a whole lot of feelings bas. :) .. love to you too

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: Chocoangel
thank for a amazing double update !! n d part were simply awsum..

i wasnt able to post for two days. so owed you guys that much :)

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: sowmyadharini
thanx 4 d double update..
loved them.

i missed it for two days so owed you guys that much :)

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: Crazy_1001
Oh my that was just beautiful! I absolutely love this! Keep going, you are doing an excellent job! :)

hehe. thanks. just keep wishing me luck and happiness right :)

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freezie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: meradil
definitely her payal =)

btw i love this FF I check at least once a day to see if you've updated :p

amazingly written and such a pleasure to read

the best part is i think you enjoy writing is as much as we enjoy reading it

lastly thanks for not keeping restrictions on your updates (will only update if you have a certain number of likes or a specific number of comment pages) --- i feel like some of the pleasure is lost that way

anyways 👏 on this story

hehe. thanks. its feel really good to know that people like this. brings a smile to my face from inside. really does thanks :)

that is the best part. agreed. i think i am just too emotional. and try to put it down in words. bas.

as for the restrictions. i am not going to say much. some people are really good, and they do deserve all those extra number o alikes or comments. :) apna apna style hota hai. i love to right not for the appreciation, but becase i want to. i wanted to share this. it is making me feel content and happy from inside. i try to update regularly. i do. but as you can tell for the part two days. too many things came up and happened so wasnt able to. when i returned. i had this much emotion as displayed in the writing. i write for an emotional satisfaction purpose. bas :)