Bachpan ka pyar...part 1-32

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bubblycool

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

thanx 4 d double update..
loved them.

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Oh my that was just beautiful! I absolutely love this! Keep going, you are doing an excellent job! :)

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meradil

@meradil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

definitely her payal =)

btw i love this FF I check at least once a day to see if you've updated :p

amazingly written and such a pleasure to read

the best part is i think you enjoy writing is as much as we enjoy reading it

lastly thanks for not keeping restrictions on your updates (will only update if you have a certain number of likes or a specific number of comment pages) --- i feel like some of the pleasure is lost that way

anyways 👏 on this story

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

wow it was just soo damm romantic...loved every bit of it...very passionate..thnx 4da pm dear...

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

Beautiful...
Both updates r awesome...
I luved d dance...
I think it's her payal...

Thanks 4 d pm

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Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

Nice updates.,

thanks 4 d pm

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

That was sooo beautiful... a perfect declaration of love fit for them and only them!!! Amazing :D Their confession and the dance... it gave me tingles just thinking about it!!! Your Arnav is the perfect gentleman :D I love how you show his feelings and her own... he knows her and there may be a little nervousness but no hesitation throughout the whole thing... they both know each other so well... truly remarkable relationship they share!

I read other people's comments saying they think he left her the payal he took before ... but I don't think he will give that back to her yet...maybe later but not right now... that payal is something he has cherished all these years and I think he will only give it back once he has made her his completely... when he marries her.

Right now I think he left her a rose ... to confirm that it was him that gave her one in the first place... a new rose to signify a new stage of their relationship... this is not just two kids falling in love or having a crush now... its two young people acknowledging their feelings for one another... like a beautiful promise of the sweet future they hope to share with each other :D

Thanks for the PM's and I hope you are feeling better :D

Edited by Orion_N - 13 years ago