Bachpan ka pyar...part 1-32 - Page 56

Super duper update!!! absolutely lovely...can't wait for the next part :) :) :)

Really Awesome update...It was sooo sweet!! <33

This part is dedicated to my husband :) ...

click on the music website below before starting to read. This is a dance. Their dance. I have written many mnay dances before. But honestly. This one. Sigh. Cant say anything. Please do enjoy as much as i did :)..

Part 23

He held her by her arms and moved her to infront of the water. So the sunset was behind her when he looked at her. She was just beautiful.

Wind caressing her hair. The velvety sunset in the sky. Her eyes closed. Head tilted a bit down. Her arms hugging her. Waiting for him. Just for him. Took out his phone and quietly took a picture of her. She didnt hear it, it was on silent mode. He wanted to capture her, her beauty, this moment.

He opened a file he has always saved on his phone. A certain peice of music. Omar Akram. A dessert flower. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JnrBfPfS6bk&feature=autoplay&list=PLB23A2A39D7C6C8D6&playnext=2 ). you should listen to this.)

the soft music started. He put his phone in his pocket. He walked up behind khushi and moved in a bit closer. He slid his hands onto her waist. She started to breath heavily. His touch was enough for to understand what he wanted. he bent in towards her ear. In a soft, husky voice. He whispered.

Aranv: khushi... sigh. Please. She took a deep deep breath. While still lettting him hold onto her waist. She turned around. Her eyes still closed. She put her hands on his shoulders. As the piano started to opened her eyes. Head still tilted down. And slowly raised her eyes to meet his. He pulled her closer to him. Not allowing any air to pass through them. He slid his hands a bit behind her waist onto her hips. To make sure she didnt move back. And she didnt want to either.

While looking deeply into his eyes. She slowly took off her sandals. You could still heart the sound of her single payal tinkle. She was now bare footed on the sand. And arnav took off his slippers. They wanted to touch the tenderness of the sand. Feel every bit of the environment around them. He lifted her from the waist and put her arms across on his shoulders. He lifted her up into the air. Her chest was now at his eye level. But he looked up. Looked up at her. And she looked down at him. Slowly he started to turn around. A bit away from the slippers so they dont fall. The soft and gentle music guided their movements.

He gently placed her down on the ground, just like a rose petal would softly make its way to the ground. She moved her hands away and turned around. She took two steps front and he held onto her hands. She turned around and looked at him. He pulled her hand. And she twisted and turned into his arms. Her other free hand held onto his other hand infront of his stomach. They both looked at each other. They both moved they right leg front with a sway to the side. And then back. Not loosing eye contact. Then the left foot front with a sway from the hips. Then back. With the arm that he used to pull her towards him he twisted her out. And this time pulled her in. She came straight ahead. And held on his other shoulder. Their held hands held properly this time. The way you hold it for a dance. Both just looked into each others eyes, he pulled her closer in while sliding his other hand around her waist. Their stomachs touching. Not a single wind could pass between them. They started to waltz. Dancing across the beach. Just feeling each others heart beats. This moment was theres. He moved his hand from her waist and let her hand go. She turned around. Moved her hair over to one shoulder. He pulled her back. Her back hit his chest. He rested his forehead on her bare neck. His nose against the back part of her shoulder. He slid both of his arms across her stomach. She slid her hands across his arms to meet up with his hands. Both just swayed from side to side. She tilted her head to the side to allow him to rest his head more properly. He used this hands to twist her until she now faced him. Her chest collided with his. Some strands of her hair across her face. Her arms rested on his shoulders. But most importantly, their passionate eyes looking into each others. Both breathing heavily. He put one hand on her waist and the other under her head. She closed her eyes and tilted her head back. He started to bend forward allowing her to slide down.. her back fully arched back. Their chest still against each others. He slowly brought his lips to the bottom of her neck. He didnt kiss her. No. He just slid this lips from the bottom of her her neck to the top. Khushi gulped. The feeling of his lips on her neck was making her lose her senses. He moved his head to the side of her neck and slowly brought her back up. She opened her eyes and looked at him. Both again in the watlz position. She now held onto his shoulder a lot more tightly than last time. Sliding her hand a bit towards the back of his neck. And he fanned his fingers out that were on her back. Pulling her more and more into him. He let go of her hand and moved the hand that was on the waist again. And held her waist from both sides. She put both of her hands on his shoulder. This time sliding both of her hands behind his neck pulling him in. He lifted her up until he was closer to her heart. She pulled him in. And he turned his head to the side. And placed his ear on her heart. All he could hear. Was his name. Nothing else but his name. He closed his eyes. And slid his hands that were on her waist to cover her back. So he could hold her more tightly and securely. Also to be able to pull her more in. She bent her head in and hugged his head. Her hands spread across his hair. Holding his head close to her heart. One of her feet lifted back and pointed out. This moment they both wanted to cherish. She. For the first time. Let him close enough to hear her heart. Which only spoke his name.

The music stopped.

She moved her head up and put her foot pointed down again. She moved her hands from his hair to his shoulders and he moved his head back. He gently brought her down. Both just staring at each other. The sunset was now gone, but the stars in the sky were witnessing them. She looked at him lovingly. He slowly moved his head in towards hers. She closed her eyes. A slightly parted her lips. He was still holding her waist. While she was holding his shoulders. He saw the outline of her lips. How he wanted to touch them. Kiss them. He slowly moved more in. Their noses touched. She could feel the warmth of his breath colliding with hers.

Very very softly arnav whispered.

Aranv: hum aisa kuch nahin karaingay. Jis say khud baad main nazar nahin mila paen. I wont complete this, until ... he stopped. She closed her lips. And left her eyes closed. She could feel his hands move from her waist. She slowly opened her eyes and turned around to look for him.

She saw him walking back inside. Hands in his pocket and head looking down. He turned around to see her. And gave the most gentle loving smile ever. At that moment with that smile. He won her heart. She hugged her self again. And for the first time. She. Khushi.. smiled from the inside. She got her slippers. And saw that he had left his. She picked his up and walked inside. Aranv had already made his way up to his room. Khushi silently went upstairs and placed his slippers outside of his door. Knocked and went into her room before he would be able to see her. She closed the door. And stood against it. Aranv opened the door and saw his slippers there. He smiled. And took them in.

She heard a knock on her door. She slowly opened it. But to find no one there. She looked down. And saw something. He could not have ended this night in a more perfect way she thought. She bent down and picked it up.

Precap: what is it? :) ...

he's got his confirmation, so its most likely to be her payal...

awesome update loved the update loved how they feeling where described perfectly done loved how arnav is so willing to do anything to make her have loved the update you rock babe loved the dance loved how you took it to another level of beauty

Res

Originally posted by: freezie

she will fall. literally and metaphorically in love. i was thinking about that. but stopped. i have another surprise planned for then they return. its a certain person. 😆

its not a dumb idea. fantastic actually. there will be a dance. for sure. so they might be able to do a number there. chalay ga?

ya ya 100 percent chale ga...now i'm gonna read the most awaited part of bkp *bachpan ka pyar * :P

Originally posted by: freezie

heheh. I think this drama has made me go insane with romantic day dreams. eheh. i have the writing things in my blood. but i still know i am an amateur at this. for sure :)

and study hard. i know i sound like an aunty when i say this. but its just a couple of years mehnat bas. phir life set.

its ok with the philosophical. i am a psychologist by profession so enjoy it. hehe. plus i love long comments. your 'jibberish' is what makes me smile at times. so dont stop :)

Awww i seriously love and don't worry u don't sound like an aunty!!!!!! But OMG I LOVE ThE TRIP SO MUUCH!!!! I LOVE SUNSETS and get to see them everyday cuz i live on an island near a bay!!! And they are so breathtaking!!!! they are slowly on their way to becoming more than friends and i love that!!!! Don't if you take time off if you needed i will wait for the upadates!!!!! lets see where arnav goes with this dance and how things will be whenn they go back!!!! Again LOVE this fan fic and love you for putting the time in to write!!!!!! ALWAYS STAY HAPPY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cant believe you put up 2 parts this soon gonna read part 23 NOW!!!!!


OKAY PART 23 was amazing!!!!!! loved that ARnav slowed down and knows what not to do!!!! I loved the cut little dance on the beach it was amazing!!!! Hats off to you!!! Waiting to see what he left in the door!!!!

Awww wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow i just luved it like anything..ur the best write..i'm deeply fallen in luv wid ur story... . ...loads and loads nd loads of luv to u...

thank for a amazing double update !! n d part were simply awsum..