ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
gosh man this story is getting hell lot of interesting and exciting update b y update..!!
i mean there's so much secrets hidden in this castle oh his, and i wonder what his dark secret
is..?? o_O *sigh* but do feel sad for our beloved khushi...poor she..!! had to suffer so much for doing completely nothing.! and that boy in the carriage..at the starting of the update...is he some casual guy or has some role to play in khushi's life.? see that's what i was talking about..it's getting way too interesting..can't wait for your (aquiline's) next update.. curious as hell..!
beautifully written.! continue soon...
P.S. - hey aura..!! how's u and aquiline.?? is she enjoying her vacations..? i hope she did and had the time of her life with her loved one's.! do convey my regards to her.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

Plese let they be arnav in the gallery...n mami never gets tired of insulting people...here back she is ...anyway so soon payal n akash will meet n mami will blow a fuse on payal being her daughter in law...hmm so with the family coming close...lord arnav and the peasent girl khushi will be united...oh i am so excited..


@aura: did u write the chapter or did aquiline write n u unloaded it??


No i dint write the chapter...Aqiline wrote it n i updated it...
Edited by Aura7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a pleasant surprise, my dear friend.! ws waiting for ur update for so long nw, so u cn imagine hw happy i must b to get it out of da blue..😛
Absolutely wonderful n immensely informative update.. As u knw am nt into poetry etc, bt ur reference to Blake's work lead me ,searching it on google n wow...
..mind blowing!!!⭐️
although am nt sure dat i hv connected da dots ryt, i wnt u to explain it later, i thnk i'll enjoy it vry much.. bt khushi luking for Tyger; cud she b wondering at all da hardshps n events dat took place since hr childhood, hr becoming an orphan, missing hr parents,their death etc, must hv left hr wondering y da world hd to be a darker place for hr? y da God she follows so ardently hs to tk away all dat ws so precious to hr n let othrs enjoy da same thg.. perhaps dats y she liked babuji reading dat poem to hr..she's young n innocent, time hs yet alot to teach hr,bt untill thn its nt impossible dat she wud b wondering at da mysteries of lyf n da Creator Himself...Beautifully sketching hr state of mind [if am correct i'e]...n thn cums my fav part of da story, while she's wondering n secretly yearning to see n touch da rose bush, dat brought hr so much trouble previously, hw beautifully da Divine Hand tells hr da truth n gvs hr an insight into da near future,by showing hr da '
'The Sick Rose''.. am speechless aftr reading dat poem n what it implies.. what a perfect choice to shw all dat lies ahead{i.e; if i got it ryt}.. a sick rose dat cud be a representation of not only,lord's ailing heart, his ailing future,n may be his curse.. his lady's ailing future,hr heart..khushi's future..by a worm wch wud infest all three lives wth its corruption n evilness,probably the General.. ..
Fantastic..👏 i particularly loved da last scene Lin, i dnt knw whether arnav vl b there in da room, bt i felt it symbolized sumthg more thn dat.. khushi aftr trying to reach arnav's heart {da rose bush},previously hs finally managed to open his world[assuming its arnav's room n also dat she entered Arnav's library]... a world full of secrets n despair.. lets see if she enters it yet or evn more importantly, hw she enters it? if u knw wt i mean..waiting desperately for da nxt update,till thn dear friend tc n kp smiling n thank u so much for tkg ur time out for dis update n us..
* n also a special thank u to Aura, for being kind enuf to post dis for us..
miss you Lin❤️.
P.S; i had a cup of coffee n muffins to enjoy da story😉 n hey, i got to see a little bit of u today in both Anjali n Khushi..😊
Edited by shass - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Phew..finally i come here to comment!...
I'd read 2 chapters on the day you updated, and the remaining ones, slowly!..Been really busy, but yeah..finally got time to comment.

I'm really loving the way you're spinning this story..Why were those kind people at the mill introduced? Will they play a significant role later?
It was nice to read about Akash ..
So we'll have PaYash soon..And there's Mami also.
Latest update is also pretty good...Poetry and English culture go so well together. I'm glad you kept that intact.
Maami in your story is doing what she's best at..Insulting people..*Sigh*

I'm sure you've chosen the poem also because of some particular reason..But I don't think I can decipher it atm. Maybe later. Or I'll leave it up to you Aqui!.
Thanks a lot.
:)
Sorry for not writing comments on each chapter. But I don't think it will be possible for me to write those long comments anymore. I miss writing that way... TC!. Hope to catch you soon. Dunno why haven't you posted, but still. Hope you're doing fine! 😊

PS: Thanks Aura for the update! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
will arnav be back n find her
she shld hurry n run as fast as she can
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor khusi always stuck in wrong place at wrong time... m guessing it arnavs room... she will be doomed if arnav finds her there... oh my.. who will help her now?!!

wonderful update... though short...😃 cant get enough of it!!
thank u... for updating!!
will be waiting for ur next...
come back!! vacation is over now...😡

waiting waiting waiting 😍 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
well written
plz update soon
I want to know what is going to happen nw

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it continue soon thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!!! I cannot believe that I missed so many updates.
Starting with chapter 29 and 30 : I loved the way Khushi faced Arnav. Arnav as usual the ruthless one.Madhumathi is impressed with Shyam.Great going.

Ch:31...Shyam has saved Khushi twice.But till now it seems that his intentions are good.

ch 32...The sibling bond was a delightful sight.Hope Khushi does not land herself in trouble again.

ch 33,34,35...Loved their spirits and excited for the future episodes and Arnav Khushi face off.

Thanks a lot for the PM Aura dear :)
Edited by vidya.sanjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lin 🤗 ... I know about that darkness well, that is what captivated me the most about your work ... the belt, the agony, the pain !
Oh and that road and the unexplained pull ... that is pretty much how I feel about your work ... those descriptions, the way you share the gentle breeze of your words and tell me what is in Miss Gupta's heart ... the longing and memory with the rosebush !
Beautiful, I'm humbled you consider this oldie worthy of a mention atop such a magnificent piece of writing ... thank you little one, always in my prayers and thoughts, love to you and your loved ones ! x

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