ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 19

once again khushi is tortured by villagers due to our lovely master menace and once again her savior is shyam... cruel villagers ...totally loved ur updates ...and thanks for the pm ...

👏👏👏👏👏👏Wow Wow Wow!What an update!what r u really? you should not be IF writer , you truely belong to the hollywood industry!

Both chapters were vry nice, both laid down da foundations of wt may happen in da future , luvd da way u gave insight into da three crucial characters [arnav,anjali n shyam] n their relationshp wth each other.
khushi being mistreated by da villagers ws indeed a vry sad n yuck moment.! true face of da world; it chooses to show dominance on da oppressed n weak, totally being oblivious to da truth n passing a verdict wthout realizing da consequences,ppl's actions wud leave in da lyf of others,meanwhile, da real culprits get away wth da crime!
I lykd 'master menace' ,a vry Apt title for lordy lord.
also lykd shyam rescuing khushi [ for da time being].
da last para ws too gud, luvd hw u gave insight into both men's thoughts abt khushi.
da word 'DOLL' ws so appropriate for Anjali; gud thinking dear. dat 1 word spoke volumes abt her, sumthg am waiting to unfold later, i hope.
NICE UPDATE! me totally caught in da plot !😛

Lin.. Loved both the updates!! Very beautifully written, truly Gothic style!

That Lord Raizada is the brain behind the idea of the play, is something that came to my mind when people started looking at Khushi accusingly.. not before that! I somehow had a feeling that there were some mysterious forces involved with the act being so similar to Khushi's own personal encounter! My bad!
But then it became clearer how Shyam would be introduced to the Guptas and how Arnav is responsible for the introduction and also the disgrace that the guptas had to face!
Poor Khushi, being punished for no sin of hers! That little smile of victory on the lord's lips had me fuming!!

Shyam appears exactly similar to the way I always perceived him as in the IPK story as well! You know how I have always tried to justify his character until recently when I realized that it was beyond redemption! His point of no return started the day he played with Babuji's life! I still found reasons to justify him, not anymore!

This Shyam is more to my liking, he is falling for Khushi unknowingly.. its not a deliberate attempt at betrayal or infidelity! Really eager to see how you develop this character from here onwards!

The line that has me most intrigued is.. 'He didn't know why and neither did Lord Arnav that the girl they were thinking of was to be the answer to their questions, the healer of their hurting and the naive decider of their fates.'.. The healer of their hurting, answer to their questions!! The 'their' has me all excited!! Arnav, we all understand to quite an extent! What is Shyam hurting for! What are his questions!

Anjali.. poor soul indeed! She must get ready to lose both the men in her life to a simple girl who doesnt seem to have any knowledge of what thoughts she is eliciting in the two powerful, strong men!

Looking forward to the updates dear!

PS: We are in love with your writing so dont even think of changing it! Our mistake if some of us got too confused in trying to find symbolism where none existed!! We are a forum of over-worked minds!! 😊
Shyam is an integral part of the Arhi story so his presence although dreadful is completely welcome!
Love the Master Menace!! He makes our hearts beat! 😳

Khushi was brave...even though her life was sucked out of her...had to give it to her...a girl with a golden heart which is as strong as steel too...deadly combination but much needed...she has to tackle two mighty men ...loved her...absolutely...Anjali's Shyam can never be a one women man...true but its pretty sad...Arnav...u are haunted by her eyes and u want to haunt her to death?...unbelievable lord Raizada...but as they say when bad boys fall in love...they just fall in love...there is no turning back...can't wait for that to happen...or may be it has already...concealed heart is very tough to see...but those Hazel eyes will pick it up...soon I guess...anyways beautiful update Aq...loved it...

Great Shyam Saved Khushi. Hate Those Villagers. Poor Khushi She Didnt Do Anything.

Hey Aquiline glad you are back! I hope your exams went well!! Time to share my thoughts:

CH 19: Poor Khushi was assaulted for resembling a character in a play…. Felt really bad for her,, but I don't know why, I have this feeling that when Arnav (in CH 14) asked someone to do something for him ,maybe it was related to this play… Like in the show he got back at her by releasing her pictures of her in his arms to the media resulting in her humiliation… So I'm guessing that here he might have done that by asking the person in charge of the play to show her in a bad light.. But then again I can't imagine him telling the guy to include his sister in the plot, so maybe that part was just the doing of the organizers…. Hmmm, shyam to the rescue eh… Just as I expected…. Now I do hate him but I'm willing to give the Shyam in your FF a chance… Don't want my prejudice to ruin my enjoyment of the story! Now coming to the men, they specifically stated that they didn't want to harm her in anyway and tied her up to the tree… For the life of me I can't figure out why I sense that there is more to this scene than meets the eye (excessive symbolism finder alert! LOL It's you are to blame, your analysis of teri meri version 2.0 has me in a tizzy and I'm beginning to think that you have many more deep layers going on in the story).. Off to read the next part…

CH 20: Certain things here struck me as important, Anjali's playful declaration during the toast about being played around like a doll by the two men who don't have time for her is the plain stark truth… AHA, the way Arnav deliberately changed the subject from the plays exonerates my belief that he had something to do with it…. Lotsa parallels here…. Won't go into details…. Waiting to see how you take things forward….

Oh and I type my comment as I finish each chapter and I was glad that I hadn't read your P.S. before typing, happy to see that certain points of mine are correct… Good work dear…

Thnx for the pm