ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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+ 15

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Loved The Map And The Chapter. Does Arnav Go To Work?

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serialmaniac

@serialmaniac

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

a mini comment 4 a mini update:
Great part do continue :-D

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

The map was indeed a blessing..now there is a picture in my mind when u point out the incidents and places...how and when and why certain incidents take place in certain places and how the characters reach those destinations...pretty interesting...now coming to the update...My dear friend this one is mysterious...totally...who is behind that closed door which closes without any sound...Anji's wishes...Anji as a whole is very mysterious to me...u left us hanging on a cliffhanger ...and I guess i'm hanging on one hand...very intriguing chapter...can't wait for the mystery box to open and the contents to spill out...

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Thank you for the map, it's appreciated. Nice update. Loved this hint: "would the loss of the key signify that at last her wish was to come true". 😉

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

I officially demand a ticket to Arhasia!!!

I honestly want to go there now!!! I love the world you've created here.

The map was beautifully done!

I can't believe you did it for us😃!

And as for the update, I have to tell you: you say so MUCH in so LITTLE!

He stopped in front of his sister and allowed her to take his coat off his shoulder. This was something he did not permit his servants to do. He preferred his sister removing his overcoats for him on his entry.

That was just too adorable. I was immediately reminded of a quote, "A sister is a gift to the heart, a friend to the spirit, a golden thread to the meaning of life. ~ Isadora James" Once again, you show us the connection between the brother and sister. Amazingly done. 😃Not many people can write about bonds but you write about them from your heart and I think that's one of the best things about your FF😆. I just love reading about it! 😛

She delighted with the newfound thought but decided not to raise hopes that sounded impossible, and proceeded to her room, his cold coat hanging by her arm, clutched close to her heart.

LOVE IT!!!! The way she cares about him...it just makes me want to go AWWW! 😊

And last (but not least) I really cherished how Khushi kept haunting Arnav again and again. I can't wait for them to meet again!😳

So...on last comment on the update: PERFECT!!! ⭐️

Edited by MrsRaizada101 - 13 years ago

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Cool!
The map really did give a clear idea of Arhasia .Khushi is now breaking into Arnav's thoughts.I love Anjali.The ever loving sister.Arnav is really lucky to have her.Hope she too finds some happiness in her life.
Thanks for the PM.

Edited by vidya.sanjay - 13 years ago

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

You really took the pain to create a map for us readers?! Thank you so much :) The map is very well described and loved the way you've described and included the minute of details!! It does really help a lot in imagining it as a reader.

They have the riches, the luxury, the fame everything that is materialistic, but what use of it when the heart itself feels so alone that all these things cannot even be relished properly!! Lady Anjali has all luxury yet she couldn't enjoy a simple meal. Truly saddening!!

Ofcourse how can he forget that feisty girl. She was the very first one to talk to him like that so no ways is he gonna forget her so easily and will Destiny ever allow him to that?! Nope. Finally there's a li'l hope for that sister who always wishes good for her brother.

A splendid chapter and the description of the map is just too good.

Waiting for the next chapters :)

Cheers,

Sia

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Salsa

@coldy07

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Wow...you actually made a map! Amazing 👏

Shows how much effort you put into writing this FF.

As for the update, the initial part was mysterious. Is there someone in that room? [:O] I'll wait for you to unlock the mystery.

The next part was really well written. You brought out the feelings so well. I loved how you expressed Arnav's feelings through clenching of fists...Anjali's thought about the key was so nice. Yeah her wish will come true soon 😳

PS: Again I loved the frills of the gown, the carriage! ❤️

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

I canNOT believe that you took that much effort in making and explaining the map for all of us!! 😲

I mean it was so well made and described that it really swept me off my feet and to think you made it in an hour!!!!!!! 😲 But seriously speaking this is gonna help me imagining the scenes in a better context, earlier I just used to think of the surrounding area fleetingly you know, (paid attention to ARHI after all 😆) but now it's gonna be reinforced with the wonderful imagery you have so sweetly provided... Also can't help but comment on the fact that Khushi's village is separated from the castle simply by the groove, orchard and the forest, that means lotsa opportunities for Arhi to meet up in wonderful post-card-esque scenery (haaah off to dreamland 😍) Oh and dear NO ONE really thinks of the color "folly" as that, i mean you made a whole freaking map of the place, the road color aint gonna matter girl!!!! 😉

Okay, now coming to the chapter, hmmm, there is someone else in the castle too???????? 😲 N Khushi is already on Arnav's mind huh, 😎 😃 no words... Hoping you update soon... can't get enough of this fantastical creation... take care... thnx for the pm!!! ❤️