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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

So I finally found some time to read your 6th and 7th chapter.

I loved the bonding between Ananya and Arnav. And the masti and nok jhok between Arnav- Akash- Ananya was too good.⭐️

And I loved the Payal- Khushi scene too. Payal sounds like a wonderful friend to Khushi. She actually didn't mind helping out her friend in cleaning up the room and also watches baseball for her sake, even though she doesn't like it. That's what happens most of the times with friends right? You actually do something for your friend's happiness even though you don't like it.

And I also loved the whole scene in the music room. I could imagine the whole thing in my head.

Overall, this was really good. Keep up the good work!👏

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Kuku

@lankan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

It was very symbolic. I liked it :)

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Nice... You kept the intrigue going now he is curious to find out who she is.. Its paced out well and mystery adds a nice touch to the developing feelingz

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Aww Annie, this update was so dreamy.😍 Exactly like thr title suggest, out from a fairytale it was.😍

While reading this update, I could closely relate it to Samrat and Gunjan from Miley Jab Hum Tum. They met in an identical manner in the music room, with her singing and exposing her hidden talent. And that song, yeah she sung a different one, maybe a little better than the one you used (Just my opinion, this song is awesome too!), it was something like.

Yeh Zindagi Khulein Bahein Khari

Hawa Aur Chali Dil Kahein Tu Bhi

Zara Saath Aa

Like, really these lyrics are mesmerizing, and I woudl like to Thank you, for brining those memories of my fvaorite show back to me.🤗 Everything from her entering to the throb, and her singing to the tune, was so identical, only for the ending that the two of them did meet, and he caught her by surpise, however Arnav didnt really meet her, but just saw glimpse of her.😳

Thanks alot dear for this innocently lovely update.🤗

Looking forward to the rest of the story, and yeah Thanks alot for the Pm.😃

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: nav_bat
Aww Annie, this update was so dreamy.😍 Exactly like thr title suggest, out from a fairytale it was.😍

While reading this update, I could closely relate it to Samrat and Gunjan from Miley Jab Hum Tum. They met in an identical manner in the music room, with her singing and exposing her hidden talent. And that song, yeah she sung a different one, maybe a little better than the one you used (Just my opinion, this song is awesome too!), it was something like.

Yeh Zindagi Khulein Bahein Khari
Hawa Aur Chali Dil Kahein Tu Bhi
Zara Saath Aa

Like, really these lyrics are mesmerizing, and I woudl like to Thank you, for brining those memories of my fvaorite show back to me.🤗 Everything from her entering to the throb, and her singing to the tune, was so identical, only for the ending that the two of them did meet, and he caught her by surpise, however Arnav didnt really meet her, but just saw glimpse of her.😳

Thanks alot dear for this innocently lovely update.🤗

Looking forward to the rest of the story, and yeah Thanks alot for the Pm.😃

Mah papi, Batool!!!
Thanks a lot!🤗
To be honest, I very much was remembering the same scene while writing this scene out! Just that I didn't want Arnav and Khushi to come face-to-face like this so early!! My imagination just told me to wait till the right time!!! 😛

Hahahah...😆 I very much remember the song, buddy!! I even sing it all the time!! It's one of my favourite songs!! All my buddies would tell me to sing it, and also the other MJHT songs, as even they used to watch it!! I loved to entertain them like that, and my vocal chords would get a lot of practice with all the singing!!😆
No problemo, buddy!! I know that that MJHT scene was really one of the best scenes of that show and even I loved it!!❤️ 😍
Love you too, mah papi!!🤗

Annie😳

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Mah papi, Batool!!!
Thanks a lot!🤗
To be honest, I very much was remembering the same scene while writing this scene out! Just that I didn't want Arnav and Khushi to come face-to-face like this so early!! My imagination just told me to wait till the right time!!! 😛

Ahan, oh well its only good that they didnt see eachother, it would then for you leave no room for improvement, as improvsisng scenes, and giving an end to them, is what a real writer does.😳
Hahahah...😆 I very much remember the song, buddy!! I even sing it all the time!! It's one of my favourite songs!! All my buddies would tell me to sing it, and also the other MJHT songs, as even they used to watch it!! I loved to entertain them like that, and my vocal chords would get a lot of practice with all the singing!!😆
Oh yeah? I love that song to the core, and because I have a good voice, (oh I wonder where I got that from, everyone in my family is B-A-D singer.😆), anyways, my friends keep requesting me to sing, speically this song, as they could very well connect with Gunjan, and we are all hard core MJHT lovers.❤️
No problemo, buddy!! I know that that MJHT scene was really one of the best scenes of that show and even I loved it!!❤️ 😍
Love you too, mah papi!!🤗

Annie
Totally, must be my personal favorite scene, apart from the Valentine dance.😍

ILY more.❤️

Love,

Batool😳

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

heyyy nice update annie!!!! i liked it😊

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@Chocoangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

gr8 update wid lotz of blushingg..😆

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Annie!

So I featured in this!🤣 I wasn't expecting my name here!

For the first time, I felt like some famous actor in some movie.😆 I know I sound crazy but whenever I read my name in any story, I assume myself to be in their place.

Running nose huh! Poor u! Eat loads of oranges. or take vitamin c tabs. It helps and take care of urself.

I loved the whole Payal- Akash interaction. The blushing and staring session. But most of all, I loved how Arhi teamed up and teased both of them.😆

Nicely written! And ofcourse I loved it. Afterall, my name was in there!😎