New FF: Wings of a Dove

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ebanerjee

@ebanerjee

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Hellooo!

i came across your ff and I'm really interested to read more and comment on it!

Although im just a newbie, i'd really like to read more of your interesting FF. I pm'd you as well, if you could allow me to access to your blog.

If you could please send me a invite, i would higly appriaciate it 😊

Looking forward to read more of your work as it is absolutely intriguing and i loved the entire plot of your ff

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MizJ139

@MizJ139

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Hi :)

I have been following your blog quite avidly & am loving the plot! Can you please make it public again or add me to the list of people with access?

Would really appreciate it :)

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sahmed6

@sahmed6

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Hey there, had started reading wings of dove few weeks ago but took a hiatus as i had gone on vacation...am back now and would love it if you would please give me permission to read your blog...thank you:)

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jen_x

@jen_x

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Yay, u updated chap one, but can u plz allow me to read it on your blog also? :) Thanks you

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neena

@shadesofme

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

i read u are renovating the blog when u are done just inform me😊

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trpbabe

@trpbabe

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Another big huge WOAD fan here. Please PM when you update! Thx

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Hello!

I inadvertently stumbled upon your blog yesterday and was able to read only a couple of chapters. I must say it was coruscating , but,.was pleasantly surprised to see that it was unaccessible, later..I would be really grateful if you could drop a Pm as and when it is concocted..

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

HI! :D

First and foremost, I am In Love with 'Wings Of A Dove' [Hey that rhymed! xD]. It is SUCH an engaging story! I have always been a sucker for tragedies and emotional plots. Heartbreaking stories with a hint of sunshine in them appeals to me the most. This one, just as I expected, crawled into my heart and made it's own little space there. ^^

The very first lines stole my heart away. It reminded me of Rockstar, the movie. Those were the first lines there as well, weren't they? :D I love that movie. *Swoons*

Ahem. Moving on. :P I've read up til Part 18, when Jit proposed to Khushi. Now, one thing I'll tell you is that I'm a ferociously loyal member of Team Arnav. [Well, there are no teams. But no guy can stand a chance in front of Arnav, that's what I believe]. And seeing some on else with Khushi just made me seethe. :P
The death of the Maharani and Arnav's fiance seemed a little predictable to me. I was expecting that.

In Part 17, we got to see the contrast between the personalities of Arnav and Jit, right? Very well written, that part was. I loved it. :* But I felt a pang of betrayal at Khushi's reaction to the kiss. And it seems Arnav keeps getting more and more reckless everyday since Khushi left him. Me scared. :O

Part 16, the cutest beginning EVER! I love Love LOVE dogs. I have been begging for one for YEARS. No luck there. But I giggled through that part, right up til Jit's entry. And and and, before I forget. The last paragraph? It was MAGIC. You weaved those words to make such a vivid picture! I practically swooned at that point, imagining Arnav standing so still, with the moonlight falling on him and his eyes on the horizon- unfocused yet so gorgeous. Oh Gosh. How Romantique! :D :D :D

And this has become a REALLY long comment! I'll write more later. For now, I'll just go to a corner and cry my heart out at not getting access to your blog. :'P Till then, bye!