FF(Arhi): Lavender [Thread 2 link - p. 159]

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

awesome story man.. i just read all the parts.. it is so nicely written.. the witty comments from both the side.. perfect story.. i am in love with it.

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

ohh..

this khushi.. and arnav... they are acting like grownups in ur FF... :D

thats a welcome change... ;-)

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@-Spirited-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

heeya dear

i had just come up with this ff yesterday n had read all the 10 parts but then i was in an hurry so couldnt put up on a underlining statement being the fact that i was in an hurry but still couldnt help myself from reading all that u had written up n the bad part being that i lost the link of the ff

Like mad i searched on the first 15 pages of the forum n couldnt find it but today to my luck i not only found the link but also n lovely update

This ff of yours seems to be like one of the mills n boons types i mean its really well written, it has an beautiful esscence n an class to it, actually i had seen the ff randomly on the forum, but frankly speakin the title dint pull me up so i dint read before n now when i read it i understand how wrong i was to judge n ff by its names

i can undoubtedly say that this is the best ff i have ever come up on this forum, surpassing all my previous favourite

N their characterisation is also well written n done, its like n picture perfect thing

N khushis transition from n silly wit to one of the best employees of the company was well shown n written, n hey giving khushi some clasyy clothes was also a very well done thing

n about lavanya this is the first ff where lavanya has got such a good n useful characterization

n asr i so love this man yaar u kept his anger the same but stil made him n more thoughtful person

uffhh... this is trhe longest comment i hav ever given to anyone *though i am used to putting in more than one word* but i guess it was required since it was for all the 11 chapters

lol i can really become an official stalker of ur ff😆

-Nikki-

Edited by niknavyu - 13 years ago

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priya..

@priya..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Hi D-

Just caught with all the updates!! Reading your ff makes me want to give the show one more chance... Your kushi has so much more spunk! Given that you are writing it, I would have expected no less:)

I like how kushi matured from a silly twit to a very matured girl...the glimpse into the journey of transition has been good!

So she has given this a lot of thought! Now he will too..she can deny all she wants..but there an undeniable , perhaps indescribable attraction..

I love this journey! Falling in love is awesome..but the slow journey of getting there is the best part!

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3llie

@3llie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: -publicenemy-

That's a great compliment :) Thank you!

I'm the one who should say thanks!! I was simply stating the obvious :)

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

ok so the sensible talk is done - how do they move forward from there?

I love how Khushi's the practical chick who's thought things thru - typical of a girl who's survived this long as ASR's company manager. It's awesome!

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Apsara1

@Apsara1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

I thought I had commented on the last update but I can't find it anymore! Maybe it got deleted... Anyways, it was a really nice one. I especially liked khushi's monologue!!

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: latekate

Usha,

My mother, right from the time the movie starts she would be asking "did they get married?" 😆

My intention was not a sad ending. I always feel that for a daily soap, which inevitably changes the story line over a period, they should never declare the leads. Just cast some 4 or 5 very famous stars or totally new cast and just allow the story to unravel and the audience should be guessing who will end up with whom? All the interactions between the cast should leave the audience guessing. By declaring the leads it is now only left with the presentation/chemistry and a bit of luck.

Hope i made some sense

Latha,

It does make sense and I quite agree to a certain point. And since i totally identify with your mom's thoughts, i would like to in the very very very very last scene like to be told by the author of who is pairing with whom because after all it is the author's story which i am reading/watching. If I was creative enough, would I not be making my own. And as i said, whoever they finally end up with is the hero/heroine. 😆 😆 You can be happy and i can be happy and everybody is happy, 😆

I have now got so used to sari clad heroines in your stories that as of now i am getting sari withdrawal symptoms in this but i know there are many years to go for heroine to progress to saris. I can't imagine it in this story though. 😭 😆 😆 😆