Broken Angel ArHi SS : Updated Chapter 8!!!

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Hello my lovely ARHI fans and fellow IPKKNDians. How are y'all? ⭐️I am new to IF , actually I had made an account some time back but forgot all about when I got busy with life 😛But now IPKKND has pushed me into getting active again. Such is the magic of our lovely Arshi. This is the first time I am writing a fanfiction ever so please plzzz give it a chance. Read the 1st chapter before throwing the tomatoes on me. 😳The story starts when they were having Aakash and Payal's sangeet and Shyam had the plan to kill Anjali with that Bicchoo. This story is my take on what would have happened if the scorpio had bitten Khushi instead. Also there is another twist in the story which will be revealed later on.
Broken Angel
Chapter 1
"No, this trick won't work... How on earth are you ever going to explain in terms of chemistry and physics so important a
biological phenomenon as first love?"
- Albert Einstein
Khushi's heart was beating so fast that it felt like it was trying to jump right out of her chest. The reason that her had heart suddenly decided to take part in a marathon was none other than that Lard Governor. Ugghhh'
she thought Devi Maiyya aap hamare saath aisa kyun kar rahi hain? Pehle toh us uss rakshas ne humein itna tang kiya, phir unho ne humare saath dance kar ke humein jitwa diya'. Humein toh kuch samajh nahin aa raha hai, aur hamara dil aur dimagh dono jalebi ke tarha gol gol ghoom rahein hain.
During this tirade, the main reason for her haphazard heartbeat danced in front of her eyes; the way Arnav had come into the room after the performance, the intensity of his eyes as he backed her up against the dresser, his compliment of her dress and the way he removed the clip from her hair stating that she looked better with her hair open. Khushi caught herself blushing and smiling while looking at the mirror and immediately scolded herself. Stop it Khushi Kumari
Gupta! Get a hold of yourself. The best course of action in the present circumstances was to just forget about everything and concentrate on getting through the party. And she still had to change
thought Khushi with a start.


She quickly located her clothes and started changing, all the while maintaining an iron like control on her thoughts to keep them from wandering into dangerous territory. After putting on her dress she realized that her dupatta was missing and she frantically began to search for it as she was already very late. She spotted it amongst a pile of clothes on the bed and reached for it. As she was reaching for her dupatta she felt a sharp sting on her palm and immediately retreated her hand.
"Ouch! ufff '. yeh kya tha?" Khushi exclaimed, while bringing her hand to her mouth to suck on the wound in an effort to lessen the pain. It must be an insect or
something she thought and very carefully reached for her dupatta again and hung
it on her shoulders. She quickly turned off all the lights of the room and went
downstairs.
As she reached the living room Khushi felt her head getting heavy
and black spots appeared infront of her eyes. She quickly balanced herself on
the wall beside her and took a few deep breaths to shake off the feeling of
dizziness. Once she felt normal again, she righted herself and went to find
Payal. Khushi didn't think much of the dizziness as she had not eaten properly
the whole day and thought that was the cause of it.
After dodging Payal's questions about her tardiness, Khushi settled in to watch the rest of the program. But she felt a prickly feeling on her neck as if she was
being watched by someone. She looked up to find none other than the reason for
her torment, Arnav Singh Raizada, staring at her with such a fire in his eyes
that she felt like they were the only two people in the room. Everything else
just' vanished. She became spellbound by his eyes which were hiding so much
emotion in them. For a moment, Khushi felt as if she could touch Arnav's soul just by drowning into his eyes. Her heart started its marathon inside her chest
again and she could feel herself going warm when suddenly, with a nudge in her
ribs, Payal broke the spell. Khushi quickly looked at her sister to realize
that Anjali was announcing something,
"Now, for the moment we have all been waiting for. Winner announce karne ka waqt aa gaya hai. Lekin uss se pehle mein sab participants ko thank you aur well done kehna chahoon gi keh unho ne itne achi tareki se hamari is shaam ko memorable bana diya. So a big round of applause for all the participants."
Everyone clapped and cheered with all of their enthusiasm to appreciate the efforts made by all the participants tonight.While clapping Khushi couldn't help but shyly look towards Arnav to find him staring at her with a slight smile and an intense gaze. She looked down as quickly as she could so that she wouldn't get trapped by his eyes again.
"Aur ab without further delay mein announce karti hoon
aaj ke hamare winner ka naam. Aur aaj jis family ne apni purzor taqat laga kar
jeet hasal ki hai woh hain the GUPTA FAMILY!"
"Wooohh!!!",Khushi screamed while jumping up and down
and hugging everybody within reach. Arnav saw how happy Khushi looked and he felt as if his heart would burst open with contentment at seeing her so happy. He never thought he would feel this kind of happiness at losing something
"Buhat buhat badhai Gupta family ko. Aur yeh Natraj ki
morat us member of the family ko jati hai jis ne sab se acha perform kia aur
woh hain Khushi ji!", Anjali announced with a wide smile on her face.
She beckoned Khushi to come on the stage to accept her well-earned prize. Khushi walked up to the stage and accepted the morti from Anjali. She turned around to look at everyone in the room cheering for her but her eyes were drawn to only one face.
Arnav thought Khushi looked like a goddess as stood on
the stage with all the spotlights on her. Her smile could rival the radiance of
the sun and her whole being just glowed. But there was something wrong, he
thought. Khushi's usual fair complexion seemed almost' grey in the stage
lights. And her normally pink cheeks didn't have their natural blush. While
Arnav was inspecting Khushi carefully he saw her lean against his Di as if she
was feeling dizzy. Arnav felt himself start to panic a bit. What was wrong with
her? Was she sick? Or was there something else? She was fine before' Arnav
decided that he would keep a close watch on her to determine what was wrong. Yes, he thought determinedly, I won't let her out of my sight and then I
am going to take her home as soon as possible. I will drag her out if I have
to.
With that decision made, Arnav started making his way towards Khushi,
who was coming down the stage by then.
Khushi starting feeling confused when Arnav continued to stare at her with a worried frown on his face. She was wondering about it when black spots appeared in front of her eyes once again. She instinctively leaned against Anjali to balance herself.
"Khushi ji kya hua? Kya aap theek hain?"Anjali asked in a worried tone.
"Haan woh thori thakaan ho gayi hai"
"Oh acha' toh aaye hum kahin beht jaate hain aur aap
kuch kha bhi lejiye ga."Anjali stated while leading Khushi down the stage
towards the chairs. Khushi was grateful that Anjali believed her. She was sure
she would be fine after she had eaten something and then she would ask her Amma for a band aid for the wound on her hand which was now throbbing with a
vengeance. Just as she was about to reach where her family was standing, Khushi
felt her body break out in a cold sweat, her head starting feeling heavy as if
all the blood inside her body was rushing towards her head and she started
swaying on her feet. She started to fall towards the ground when she vaguely
felt arms come around to support her. After that everything went blank.

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😊The End😊
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Originally posted by: pikudika

You have a way with words! The cockroach episode was a masterpiece! :-D

Awww Thank you soo much for reading both my works.
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Hello beautiful people!! Here is the second chapter. Thank you for reading this and an extra thank you for all who commented on it. Your support is the reason I am continuing. So without further ado I present to you CHAPTER 2.

Chapter 2

"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation."

-Khalil Gibran

Arnav watched with horror as Khushi's face reached a surprising degree of paleness and she started to fall towards the ground. He was trying his hardest to cut through the crowd to reach Khushi in time but his legs just didn't seem to move fast enough. At last he got to her just in time to kneel on the ground to catch her head on his lap. "Khushi! Oh God Khushi look at me. Open your eyes damn it!" Arnav's frantic voice reached the rest of the family members and they turned around to find Khushi unconscious, lying on the ground with her head in Arnav's lap. Everyone rushed forward to see what had happened to her.

Arnav's world had just come to a standstill and all he could focus on was Khushi's still form lying in his arms. 'What if ' What if she left him just like his Mom? NO! No. I refuse to let that happen.'

"Koi phone lao jaldi se. Ambulance ko bolao. Quick!" Arnav barked at anyone within hearing distance. He would have gone himself if he had the strength to let Khushi out of his arms but he couldn't. He couldn't even force his eyes to leave her face for a second lest he lost her forever in that dreadful second.

"Kya hua Khushi bitiya ko?" "Khushi! Kya hua tujhe? Uth na!", Garima and Payal were both on the ground beside Khushi with tears streaming down their faces.

Aakash had rushed off to call an ambulance. Anjali had taken in the situation and quickly called for the servant to bring a glass of water. She went to kneel beside Khushi to see if she could help in anyway. She checked her forehead and found that Khushi's entire body was too warm. She turned towards Arnav with worried eyes,

"Chote, zara Khushiji ka forehead check karo. Dekho unka matha and chehra kitna garam hai. Humein lagta hai inko bukhaar hai." Arnav jerked his head towards Anjali at hearing this and quickly moved one of his hands to check Khushi's forehead. His eyes widened as he felt how warm Khushi was. He quickly grabbed Khushi's hand to feel her pulse and felt his heart stop for a second when he noticed its irregularity.

"Di aapne ambulance ko bulaya hai na?" Arnav looked towards his sister with wide eyes. Anjali stopped short at seeing the dread in her brothers face but then quickly replied,

"Haan Chote. Aakash ko ambulance to call kar diya tha. Bas aane wali ho gayi. Tum-"

"Aane wali thi tho abhi tak aayi kyun nahi hai. Nahin mujhe pata karna hoga. Aakash phone do mujhe. Quick!", Arnav quickly grabbed the phone and dialled the hospital number. Everyone was preoccupied with Khushi but Anjali was observant enough to notice the signs of her brother's on the edge behaviour. He looked like a man who barely was holding on by a thread. Arnav's raised voice brought Anjali out of her keen observations.

"WHAT! Kya matlab hai aapka keh ambulance ka tire puncture ho gaya aur doosri aa rahi hain. Agar Khushi ko kuch ho gaya toh mein aap logon ko responsible samjho ga. Aur mera matlab hai kuch bhi. You don't want to mess with me!" With that Arnav slammed the phone shut and threw it on the ground. He felt a hand on his shoulder and turned to find his Di staring at him with comfort in her eyes. Arnav then looked towards Khushi's face which was being caressed by her mother's hands. He stared at her angelic features and felt his eyes threatening to release the tears that he was trying to contain with all his might.

"Kya hua babua? Ambulance kyun nahi aa rahi hai?" Buaji asked with worried eyes when she saw how Arnav had reacted on the phone.

Arnav opened his mouth to offer an explanation when he heard the sound of a siren. Arnav released a sigh of a thousand breaths and wasted no time in lifting Khushi into his arms. He didn't want to waste any more time. He walked as quickly as he could through the room and towards the door. Payal, Garima and Buaji rushed forward to keep up with Arnav's long strides. Anjali moved as fast she could with Nani being escorted by Aakash while Mamaji and Mamiji were handling the guests. Throughout this ordeal Shyaam was nowhere to be seen and during the all debacle everyone had forgotten about him. But now Shyam saw from near the staircase that Khushi was being carried by Arnav towards the door, unconscious. He ran forward to find out what had transpired.

Meanwhile, Arnav had reached the spot where the paramedics had set up the stretcher and he laid Khushi down on it very carefully like he was handling some precious treasure. Arnav refused to let go her hand and in the chaos nobody noticed this except Anjali. When they reached the ambulance, the EMT announced that only one person could ride in with the patient. Arnav was about to jump in when he was stopped by a hand on his shoulder. He looked behind him to see Anjali shaking her head discreetly and urging him to look at something. Arnav looked around to see Garima, Khushi's mother, getting in the ambulance with Khushi. Arnav realised with a start that he was no longer holding Khushi's hand and knew that he had to let her go for the time being. But that did not mean that he wouldn't try to get back to her as soon as he could because he just couldn't bear to be away from her for longer than he absolutely had to. He turned towards his family and said to no one in particular," I am going to follow the ambulance to the hospital so that Khu- Khushi's mother is not alone when they get to the hospital. You guys come with Aakaash."

"Haan, yehi theek rahein ga."

"Haan Jaldi karo babua. Garima ghabrae jaaye gi." Buaji and Nani both voiced their consent but Arnav didn't listen to them as he was already walking briskly towards his car. Anjali watched Arnav speed out of the driveway with a worried frown on her face. She had suspected a handful of times a connection between Khushiji and Arnav but never really confirmed it. But now seeing Arnav's reaction to Khushi's illness, Anjali knew that she hadn't even touched the surface of the depth of the feelings Arnav had for the spirited girl. Just as she was about to make her way towards the other car with everyone else she was stopped by Shyam. She realised that she had not seen him throughout the whole event and started to explain to him what had happened.

Arnav was driving at a break neck speed through the rush filled roads of Delhi. He cursed once again when a couple of bikers came in front of him and he lost his view of the ambulance when it turned inside the emergency entrance of the hospital. He dodged his way in front of the motor bikes and parked his car just as the ambulance doors were being opened. He ran full speed towards the ambulance and reached just in time for the stretcher to be wheeled inside the double doors of the emergency room. He ran the alongside the stretcher and grabbed Khushi's right hand tightly in his own.

"Khushi! Khushi please just look at me once. Just open your eyes. Please" Arnav continually pleaded with Khushi to open her eyes and look at him one more time but his plea remained unanswered as Khushi was wheeled away from him into an operating room. Arnav remained where he was in the middle of the hallway with the hand that was holding Khushi's a minute prior outstretched in the air in front of him. Khushi's mother had fallen behind when they wheeling her away, and she came to stand beside Arnav.

"Kya hua beta. Kaha le gaye Khushi bitiya ko?" Garima's voice shook Arnav out his trance and he turned to find her watching him with an anxious frown on her tearful face. Arnav realized that he had to get a grip on himself for Khushi because he knew that Khushi would have wanted her mother to be comforted and taken care of by someone.

"Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai Aunty, doctors Khushi ko check kar rahe hain."Arnav replied in the most calming tone he could muster under the circumstances. He then led Garima towards the uncomfortable plastic chairs attached to the wall and sat down with her.

"Doctors abhi kuch bolat to nahin hain bitwa?"

Just as he was about to answer her a doctor came out of Khushi's room and looked in his direction. Arnav got up, feeling like his heart was in his throat. He slowly walked towards the doctor, trying in vain to control the feeling of dread creeping over him.

"Aap patient ke rishtedaar hain?' the doctor asked. Arnav was ready to shout at him to just tell him about Khushi instead of asking stupid question when Garima answered from beside him,

"Hum Khushi ki Amma hain. Kya hua hai meri bitya ko ?"

The doctor nodded and looked at his clipboard before answering,

"Dekhye, aap ki beti ko blood poisoning hui hai. In simple terms, humein uske haath pe ek zakhm mila hai jo kisi cheez ke katne ki wajah se hai. Uski wajah se patient ke khoon mein zehr phel gaya tha aur jiski wajah se woh behosh ho gaye theen."

Arnav and Garima both gasped at hearing this. They just could not believe their ears. Arnav felt as the whole world was spinning in front him and he could feel his whole body growing heavy with fright. Vaguely, Arnav realised that the doctor was saying something else as well and forced himself to focus enough to listen,

"-blood se jitna poison detect hua tha utna nikal diya aura ab patient under observation hai. Hum ne abhi tak do insects ke naam deduce kiye hain jis ki wajah aisi poisoning ho sakti hai. Ek hai bichchoo aur doosra hai-

"Look Doctor, I don't want to know all this. Just tell me is Khushi going to be alright? Usse koi .. koi khatra to nahin hai. I mean will s-she sur-survie?" Arnav asked in a tone full of anxious and eyes full of dread. The kind doctor took pity on the young man and tried to answer his question to the best of his ability.

"Look young man, patient ki jaan ko abhi bazahir koi khatra nahin hai, lekin humein abhi usko under observation rakhna hoga and agar inko 4 se 5 ghanton mein hosh nahin aaya then it will be a bit serious. Abhi hosla rakho."

Arnav knew that the doctor was trying to calm him down and was just doing his job but he had lost any semblance of control a long time ago.

"What do you mean? Iska matlab hai keh aapko for sure kuch pata hi nahin hai. Yahan ka best doctor kaha hai. Mujhe abhi unse milna hai. Abhi!" Arnav's shout turned a few passer biers' heads and some nurses immediately shushed him.

The doctor didn't take offence at his words as he knew that the young man must be feeling terrible right now. He tried to diffuse the situation by using a soothing yet firm tone.

"Dekho, I understand that you are in a lot of stress right now but please have some faith. Sab theek ho jayega. Why don't you go sit down on chairs ok? I will tell you as soon as I have any new information."

Arnav clenched his jaw to control his emotions and gave a swift nod to the doctor while moving to sit down besides Khushi's mother. He tried to calm her mother to the best of his ability but he just didn't have the strength to do it. He hoped that the rest of the family would get here before he lost all his control. Just then he saw he saw his Di along with Payal and Buaji rushing towards him.

"Jiji! Payalia!" Garima exclaimed and fell into Buaji's outstretched arms. Payal laid her head on her mother's shoulder and cried silently.

"Chote, kuch pata chala. Khushi ji kaisi hain abhi. Kya hua unko?" Anjali asked the questions on everyone's minds. All the heads swirled towards Arnav and he replied in quick, detached sentences,

"Di Khushi ko kisi cheez ke katne ki wajah se blood poisoning hua hai. Doctors ne kaha hai keh abhi ke liye Khushi out of danger hain lekin agar 4 to 5 hours mein hosh nahin aaya to phir kuch kehna mushkil hai." Anjali's eyes filled with tears at hearing this and she raised her hand towards her mouth.

By then, Aakash, Nani and Shyam had also arrived and had heard the explanation. Shyam's eyes went as wide as a tennis ball and he started sweating profusely as the full meaning of the situation set in.

When Arnav realized that everyone was here he went off to the side and stood against the wall. In this position he could clearly see Khushi from the small window in the door. He unblinkingly stared at her face and braced himself for what he knew would be the longest night of his life.

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Whew! That it for today comrades. Click on the little comment button and tell me what you thought about it.

To everyone who took out time to read this far LOVE YOU! Muah!!❤️

Edited by hooriya93 - 13 years ago
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awesome update loved it that was very intense and emotional loved it and well written just one request please put english translation there is a lot of us who needs it thanks for the update loved it and continue soon can't wait for the next chapter thanks for the pm
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Awesome
Loved it
Hope Khushi gets better
Loved da way u showed arnav's emotion
Update soon
Umuahhh
xoxoxoxo
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Nice ff...but dear she is bitten by bichoo...its not a normal poison... Jab bichoo bite karta hai toh banda faint nahi hota...poison nikalney key baad bhi... 12 hours tak extrem pain main tadapta rahta hai immedate death bhi nahi hoti nd if a person is strong enough to survive the pain then uske bachney key thode bahut chances hitey hai...

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