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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent update yaar!!!!!!! superb update!!!!!!!!!!! loved it a lot!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyyy manjiii🤗
finally u updtd this ff..was egarly waiting fr dis ff..😳
amazinggg update...!!!👏
aaawww samrat is such a caringg hubby yaar..❤️gunjan is indeed veryy luckyyy❤️
gunjan's relatives were really funny😆
loved d phn convos between sajan..😍
aawww they both miss each odr so much..
nd u described dt wonderfully..<3:)
i hope samrat goes to kolkata😉
cont soon..
wonderfully written updt..
lovee uu
SP..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally read this update :))

i loved it <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb part
continue soon pls🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey manji 🤗sorry for commeting so late
but i read whole updates it was amazing mindblowing loved it to the core👏 sajan scenes were awesome😳
awww samrat is soo sweat n caring husband loved his care n concern for gunjan❤️ n he getting worried bcoz of her conditon it was sooo sweat😳
loved the FB scene samrat aftergiving somuch hints also could not guess what she was saying😆 it was a cute scene😳
n now cmg to this update finally gunjan went to calcutta loved the understanding bet sajan loved their phone convo it was soo adorable 😍even though they r far away from each other but still the way they r connected n missing each other love their bonding its soo adorable 😍 really enjoyed reading it beautifully wirtten👏 keep it up cont soon n thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comment... 😔😔 Actually I had read it long time back but now I'm getting time to comment!
As usual, wonderfully written part! I loved the phone convo of SaJan!! Sooo adorable!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
And I guess you will end up samrat in Kolkata?? I mean, that's my guess... Infact, I'd love to see that!! 👍🏼 He is such a caring and loving husband!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Lucky gunjan! 😈
Now you have to update soon... As I'll be commenting quickly!! (quicker than this time atleast) 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Love youu!!!! 🤗🤗

Ria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Friends,

Firstly, I am really sorry for not being able to update very regularly. Its been difficult to adjust in class 11 and my health has been giving me a lot of trouble these days. I haven't been able to write much or even sit on the internet for more than 10 mins or so.

Secondly, I haven't even been able to reply to any of your comments separately :( But I have read all of them! Thank you so much for all your lovely comments and for encouraging me constantly.

So since I haven't been able to update I will give you'll a small Sneak Peak of what's coming up :

"Hello" I answered. "Samrat." It was Gunjan. I was just about to ask her how she was, when she started speaking so fast that I couldn't get a word. "Why are you eating your food now? Iknowyouhaveworkbut thatdoesntmeanyouwonteat!" "Slowly.. slowly Gunjan.. I can't make out a word your saying!" I said calming her down. "Why do you irritate me so much?" she said helplessly. "Sorry!" I replied. "I'm missing you samrat!" she said. "You are saying that? Think about me..?! there is no one at home, waiting for me to come home.." I said. I couldn't say anything more. I had never been so open. But she needed to know how important she was for me. She meant everything in life. No one or nothing is more important. "Too bad!" she said. "I told you to come here but you-- And then before I could say something there was a weird noise on the other side of the line. "hello? Gunjan?" No reply. OMG. OMG. What had happened? I jumped up from my chair immediately. "Gunjan? HELLO? GUNJAAN!" Just a minute ago she was screaming and now there was no reply. Suddenly I heard bui call out Gunjan's name. "Hello?" I said once again. This time bui answered the phone, "hello!" she said. "Bui! What happened?" I asked frantically. "She vomitted beta, and then.. then.. fainted." She replied. My heartbeat rapidly increased as I made up my mind to go to Kolkata that very minute. Thanks to my private jet that wasn't a problem.

The whole flight I just kept praying that she was fine. She fainted? Why? Was the baby hurting her? Was it very strong inside her? I was scared. What would I do? I was so horrified. I couldn't be patient, not when it concerned her health. I didn't care about anything else. She had to be alright. She had to. If this happened because she was scolding me then how would I ever be able to forgive myself. She had been taking so much stress for my food and all and I couldn't even take care of myself.

I rang the bell a couple of times. Then finally someone opened the door. I ran inside without seeing who it was. I knew where Gunjan's room was. I entered without knocking. It was all very quiet. I saw her lying in bed with her eyes closed.


Almost everyone knew Samrat was going to come to Calcutta. So here, he does come. Now, This is a very important part of the story. This time alot takes place in Calcutta. I really hope I am successful in finishing this fic properly. I thoroughly enjoy writing this one the most! :)

You will see the kid soon :)

Love you,

Manjari :)

Edited by Manjari1104 - 13 years ago
saduf thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update as always,
love samrat's concern toward gunjan...she is very lucky indeed...
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
owww hope gunjan will be fine can't wait for upd
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Posted: 13 years ago
SaJan care for each other so much! Hope Gunjan is fine!
Can't wait for SaJan scenes in Calcutta now! 😍

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