Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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Posted: 13 years ago

#711

Hahah Anjelo. Poor Aman 😆 This Aman dude never fails to make me laugh. I like him 😳

Ooohooo She looks beautiful eh Arnav? 😉 Can't wait for the next chapter.

LOOOL Anna! The dress doesn't fit her now 🤣

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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#712

1. Don't listen to the dumbass anons. Those are always the ones that like to bring writers down by hiding a) Behind the internet b) Even more behind "anonymous" - they're insecure, idiotic, rude, and selfish and you don't deserve to be brought down by them

2. Often, the moderately paced back story chapters are my favorite in a fanfiction. Yes, the exciting romance stuff is wonderful, but it's the well written stories behind each character, the depth they have are what makes a story special, not Arnav and Khushi jumping into bed at first sight. The "filler" chapters are the backbone of the story and please write what you like as you so choose

3. This story is incredibly exciting - I'm so eager to find out about Aditya and what he represents in Arnav and Khushi's life. I love the red dress scene and Arnav admitting Khushi is beautiful. All of the transitions between the scenes were really well written - I could picture each part clearly in my mind. I can't wait till Arnav finds out the Aman and Khushi aren't real - I really look forward to the next update and thank you for writing so fast - I love reading this ff

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ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#713

Another awesome update Shreya. 😳 It's good that Arnav is jealous. Jealousy is really good in the process of love. 😉

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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#714

I can't believe people come around and bash peoples hard work! If u dont like it, don't read it! Anyways, great update shreya! I love how Arnav actually gets jealous but tries not to show! Hahah and Angelo and Aman! Too funny! So Anna got too big! Guahahab well, 5 pizzas in one day is guaranteed to do that! This Aditya dude is scaring me! Khushi should have told Arnav about those other messages she got from him as well! I'm really curious about aditya! Go khushi work that catwalk! Wet your lips and smile to the camera!! :D

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batgirl67

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Posted: 13 years ago

#715

at least anna got fat enough to make khushi a model!

i cant wait to see the ramp walk from khushi!

who is aditya by the way?

anyway nice update and who ever said it was a slow pace fic i surely don't think so! its an amazing fic and if they don't like then they shouldn't read!!!!!!!!!!!

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#716

awesome update loved the fuming arnav

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#717

Again Shreya...AMAZING chapter !!!!!
Lol...I keep reading the chapters again and again !!!!

Edited by seriallover17 - 13 years ago

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tina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#718

no matter what anyone says
and after avoiding this ff for months considering i thought it was taken from the "Proscriptive Relationship" i was a little apprehensive at the beginning because i thought it was gonna be exactly the same and i judged it too soon but after getting PMS all the time at last i gave it a try and i just loved it...and not everything is the same it's altogether very different...so i don't think it's that bad or the pace of the fan-fiction...it's perfectly fine and as a reader, not a full time writer though i can understand that every aspect of the character takes time to develop...and u are doing perfectly fine so, keep up the good work and don't let anyone bring u down...
thanx for the wonderful update...sorry for the long speech:)