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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Hey...
just read ur ff... nd loved it...
continue soon nd plz. do pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
hey loved ur pm...plz pm me when u updated nxt!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
sry guyss...sum internet problem is going on will update it 2morow...for sure!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: D3-Reyam

sry guyss...sum internet problem is going on will update it 2morow...for sure!!!



k wil wait.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
helooo !!:)
i just ended reading ur updates!! they're luvlyy yaaa..!!!
awesomee work !!
can u plzzz add me in ur pm list??Z(puppyface)
update soon ~:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
CHAPTER 4 PART 2

the first rays of sun enter the room and kria wakes up...kria saw her sleeping tat close to rey and tat too rey holding her made kria feel a little akward...she wanted to get out of the bed but she also did not want rey to wake up and decide to wait in the same position till Rey woke up...
Kria kept staring at REY because he loked soo sweet and cute when he was sleeping...
After sum tym rey woke up and saw tat kria was staring at her and broke her stare by saying sumthing

R:gud morning jaan...
K was shocked after hearing the word jaan
K:gud morning Rey
R:so wats your plan for today??
K:pata nahi,ghar jake pata chalega
R:so can i drop u home??
K:yaa...
R:so challo
K:but wat about the door
R:lets go through the window yaar

REY and KRIA jumped off the window but kria got hurt while jumping...kria had a tear in her eyes
Rey could not see her tear and carried her in her arms to his car...there he opened a water bottle and sprinkled sum water on the would...then he applied sum antiseptic and tied a bandage around that wound...
Kria was soo happy to see his care and smiled internally

Then kria adjusted herself on the seat...rey closed the door and they drove to kria's old house(the one showed in D3)
K:this is not my house!!
R:then which is your house??
K:can u plzz drop me at Sharon's house
R:u and at sharon's house??
<note:rey does not noe tat KriSha are sisters nor does Arjun>
K:yesss...now do as i say

rey drives till sharon's house...there SwaRon ar eagerly waiting for KriYaansh to cum...
They see Rey's car and are glad to see KriYaansh together...
Kria gets off the car but because of the wound she is unable to walk and thus as before Rey carries her in her arms...

They enter the house and Kria tells Rey to carry her till sharon's room...
Rey makes sure tat sh does not get hurt more and nor do they fall while Kria is just lost in Rey's thoughts...

IN KRISHA's ROOM

rey enters KriSha room and sees kria staring at her..he too gets melted and then as usual LLHH...<bg tune:oohoo ooohooo>

Sh:uhm..uhm...uhm

KriYaansh eye lock breaks and rey gently puts kria on the bed and takes a step back

K:bahot khasi aa rahi hai...vicks chaiye...
Sh:nahi par tumhe toh r...
K:plzzz chup kar yaar..

Rey is confused to see KriSha talking so friendly

R:yeh kya,do dushman itne friendly???
Sw:dushman??
Sh:wahi yaha dushman kon hai??
R:kria aur tum dushman nahi ho??
K:nahi...voh to...
<SwaRon decide to confuse Rey>
R:kya voh to kria...
sh:kuch nai
R:maine kria se pucha
K:Voh to
swayam:tum yaha mujse milne aayi thi naa
K:voh
Sh:haa...tumse milne nahi aayegi to kya mujse milne aayegi???
K:stop it yaaar...bechara rey confuse ho gaya hai...i feel sorry for him...
SWARON:kyu...voh tumhara kya lagta hai??
K:voh to mera bf...matlab ki !!!
SWARON:bf...uhm..uhm...uhm..
K:<raises her eyebrow>
Sh:ok f9
swayam tells every thing to rey...then arjun cumes in!!!
Ar:hi kriya..hi sharon...hi swayam and hey brooo u here????
R:haa..vo..
Ar:vooo voo chod kal raat ghar kyu nahi aaya??
R:kal raat mein kriya ke saaath tha...
SwaRon n Ar:uhmmm...
K:stop it...hey arjun...tum yahan???
Ar:haaan actually tum sab ko aaj raat dinner ke liye rey ke ghar pe invite karrne aaya tha<rey was not at home so rey's mom asked Arjun to invite them(only SwaRon n Kriya)>
SwaRon and kriya:thanxxx ...would surely cum!!!
R:par voh to batao ki kriya tum vaha kaise??
Ar:tumhe nahi pata ki Kriya aur sharon sisters hai!!!!
R:kya jhoot bol raha hai!!
Sw:jhoot nahi sach bol raha hai tera bhai!!!
R:really...tats glad to listen tat my best friend and the one i love are sisters!!!
Kria is blushing and swaron and arjun are teasing rey...
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Hope u lyk it guys and sry for the delay of weeks...m really sorry...i have now cum in 10th so have a lot of tuts and upar se the internet problem is also killing me...
but hope u guys like this part..and guys plzzz give long comments and will now surely update once in a week<if tat internet prob doesn't disturb me>
LuV u GuYzZ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
grammer mein jo bhi mistakes hui hai use plzzz ignore karna and spleeing mistakes tooo...HOPE u like it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
cute one loved it dear

thnx for d pm

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
amazing!!!!!
awww kriya staring at rey...luved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awsumm update n rey callin kriya jaan awww

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