OS: Trapped (Part 3) - Page 4

👏👏love it...brilliant.awesome...👏👏

Originally posted by: MvDiva25

OHMYGODD.

BRILLIANT UPDATE. Woahh, I had NO idea that people had so much potential when it came to writing! Keep up the wonderful workk!

And thanks from the PM and accepting my buddy request! ;)

Do PM me with MORE of those outstanding updates!

xx

Originally posted by: writergrl1992

*dancing a delighted jig*

awesome update loved loved loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it's battle of wits between Chottey and Di, with Sanka Devi's runaway mouth as the wildcard 😆

SHOWTIME!!!!!!!!

i loved it

awww... cute

Omg Khusii is so cuteee !!! Loved you os.. Plz update soon and do pm me

"What if Di suggests some location within India?"
"I have too much class for that."
"What? You are incredibly rude. There some very beautiful places to see in India you know and where does class come in? You are a snob."
"Khushi, this is exactly why we are caught in this situation. You have to stop blabbering without thinking."
Khushi opened her mouth again in indignation at his remark but decided to let it go. He was right. Even if she didn't want to admit it.

Lol... I read the post & then went back and re-read it... It was that good. I can just imagine her trying to hide in various locations & getting into trouble because of her blabber... Lol.. So amazingly cute...

amazing update!! you write beautifully and the flow of the story is very good...keep it up 👏