SS Part 6 of My Avenging Angel (Arhi, A Kiss)

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@debby_11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

a fantastic update...really they feel for each other so much still they r trying to avoid each other..really this ss is so interesting..loved the part...

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

First off, Thanks for the make out session Mary. Thanks for accepting my request, really appreciate it.

I enjoyed that a lot.

Part 6 was Fantabulous.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it all: Khushi hugging Arnav, taking care of his wound.

Arhi make out session.

Chachu's story about his past of lost love and the fact that he doesn't want that for Khushi/Darya.

I am so looking forward to the Ball.

Well done with the writting. Loved it all.

Continue soon. Thanks again Mary.

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inluvwivARHI

@inluvwivARHI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Wow awsum update...im speechless...thanx foh da pm nd cont soon

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Excellent job! Was waiting, patiently, for this. I loved that you had them kiss. They both so needed that. I'm glad Khushi gave everyone a piece of her mind, but I don't want her to be angry the rest of her life. I like where your story is going. Add more parts, when you can.

Love the twist with her chachu and Arnav's mom. So sweet and sad.

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

so much love yet so much pain they both are enduring.. U write beautifully... and wow chachu in love wit arnav's mom.. not expecting that.. yet a very understanding chachu.. asking her to follow her heart... and choose love...

love it.. thanx for the PM

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

WOW! Cant WAIT for the next part! This is TOO good!

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Great update Mary! Lovd it :) First part was soo cute ❤️

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Simran

@-HoneyBoo-

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

That was a great update Mary:)...keep it up and thanks for the pm:D

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Doesn't Imad look a lot like Arnav?

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medha

@medha16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

awesdome!!it was so good...another revelation...nawab and arnavs mom...i love dway ur handling the plot!these two families hav such complicated relationships!!!i hope arhi get bac together soon n arnav frees himself of all d guilt since its not his fault...it was just d circumstances!!!continue soon n thanx 4 d pm!