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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: aria009hera
First of all, am super happy u updated!! like after eons and eons!!

And as always, this was written beautifully, the way u described d kisses.. seriously.. breath taking..

but i guess now i will be completely honest wid u.. hmm.. pata nahi kyun pria.. but this update felt like a season finale.. dunno y.. but aisa laga that dis was the end.. or atleast nearing the end..

I still love whatever u write!! But can u pls start a new ArShi series?? I really really wanna read one written by u.. And its horrible of me to ask dat wen ur so busy already.. but i m just being greedy!!

Love U Unconditionally my love!!

Thank you Anks!

Season finale?! Hmmm im not saying anything about that! 😉

Yupp! U got it! I've been thinking about writing something on ArHi, most likely an SS!

I even started. Got the prologue and first chapter done but its still under construction 😆

Plus i'm thinking im gonna finish writing the whole thing first and then post it so my updates wont be late like they are for this FF!

Love you too!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: aria009hera

so isnt this amazing dat i requested for an ArHi FF from u in my comment.. and den came to chk ur reply to my previous comment.. and saw dis..??

Dis proves how much in sync we are at tyms!! bwaahaaahaa!!! Now toh m gonna pester u non stop for one!!! Yaaayyy!!!

GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti
priaaa !!!!
my hotest gal :* ☺️ i was waiting for it madly ... thank god u finally updated !!! :* muah ...
it was a so so so fab jaaannn !!''''
seriously ,., out of this world ...
jaldi se update kr na ,,,
n cholly chotu comment deying abi kya h nah me achchi bachchi ban gayi hu toh thodi padhai b shuru kr di h :p🤣

Aww upi jaan! soo sweet!

Thanks dear!

ab jaa aur ache se par! 😆

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@Zehnaseeb.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Omg you are so right! u cant even imagine how hard it is for me to continue writing this.. 🤔
Thanks dear!
And I already revealed what happened to Shakti. She was cornered by 3 hooligans and they misbehave with her when Amar, Dharmesh and Archie find them. Amar beats up the dude and Shakti is stabbed in the process. Tha's all !
Hope that clarifies!

thnx for clarifying... i missed it😳

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

Yes you r right that it was short n u know when it comes to Arsha we want to read more n more but never mind if someone writes that much gud writes sometimes a short update. 😃
That was lovely that much n i loved d way tried to overcome her fear seeing her strength Kunwar besides her 😊. He is the best man any gal can have n she must be proud of her. 😍
Kunwar n his love has made her that much normal now n she is happy to have him.😎 Kunwar was worried whether she is alright or not but her response to him with that magical kiss confirmed that she will be fine soon n only Kunwar is made for her.
They were romantic n passionate.😳
I don't know weather ur inspiration should die at this moment of ff or not but update whenever u feel to do it.
waiting for next part.

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#856

hey haiii i read all ur updates they r mindblowing i loved them alottt...

i loved the passion of love btwn themmm😳😳... update sooon😃

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ShonaSparkzz

@ShonaSparkzz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#857

WOW
Its was the best FF i read

plz keep writing

TO TRULY DESCRIBE IN THE TRUE SENSE OF WORDS

LOVE BEYOND COMPARISON

U R A WRITER SERIOUSLY I ADORE UR CREATIVITY AND THE THE WAY U MANAGED TO EXPRESS EVERY SINGLE EMOTIONS THROUGH MINOR WORDS👏

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#858

PRIYA U HAD NOT SEND ME 1 PM ALSO AFTER 23RD CH.THANK GOD I SAW N READ IT OTHERWISE U DONT REMEMBER ME ONLY😭😭😭😭...THIS WAS MA COMPLANE.NOW STORY.IT WAS MINDBLOWING,AMAZING ,AWESOME.THE PASSION OF LOVE WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!😳⭐️👏👏👏 PLZZZ PM ME NEXT TIME!!!!

LOVE-TEHMINA!!<3<3

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#859

okay pehle toh so sorry for the late comment...

and congratz for becoming a dazzler...

now the update...

the best so far...

loved how shaks opened her eyes and found herself in the best place she cud ever imagine and how she was observing each and every feature like she was drinking his image...

and when he opened his eyes and asked her it was surely like concern emanating from him and embracing her in a bubble that wud protect her from everything...

and then she said it and they kissed with all the passion... the way u described was like breathtaking phenomenal... loved it... matlab superb imagination...

and when they broke the pleasure they were having and how they were just feeling the moment was so beautiful...

seriously loved it...

amazing.. Fab...