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@MyDarkPassenger

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

m really happy wid dis update...i wanted to know the reason... and u did it!

thank you!

lovely update..sad but so good! 😊

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#282

awsoomme mann wen next updatee

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Sincerely loved it..

i had thot that the breakup would be like heart-wrenching bahut dukh bhara but it was so nicely displayed and the fight it was mindblowing.

both wrong but also at the same time right...

i wonder if she had accepted it amar wud have let her go haina????

the desire to go near but anger taking control... anger deestroys evrything

but the anguish, pain sorrow loved it...

and the last parting line totally flat over it. kudos to u for that...

chalo do one thing acchi-2 cheezein socho and then mind khush karo
and jaldi se ek sweet update dedo

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

loved it tons it was amazing and i also like the sad updates not just anki here

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

awww priya we can never hate u...u r such a sweetheart n truly speaking i want dis update or i wuld say i egarly waiting 4 dis update coz i want to knw da reason da MAIN REASON of dere breakup...n kunwar's reaction...n i jst luv it...coz i knw after dis sady sady updates are gng to b over 😃...n dat last para is da proof of dat...hehe i jst loved dat "watch out baby ur prince charming is coming"...luv uu priya 4 giving me what i want 😊

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Awesum upst...

Finally d mystery night is revealed...

Finally kunwar is goin 2 bring his shakti bac...

Waitin fr don't updt...

Thnx fr D pm...

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Winz

@Winz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

Pria awesome...emotions conveyed beautifully & poor Ankita is dead...lol

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Anyaa_012

@Anyaa_012

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

No comments!!!!
tooo sad and also AWESOME!!!
dearr ur writin is damn goood!!!!
i almost started crying!!:'(
totally have no words!
update soon!:)
thanxx for PM!!

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Madhurya

@maddieee

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#289

pria one major plus point of ur ff is dat u r very much clear abt the story line👏... this much of accuracy is not found even in the real soaps... i was very eager to find out wat happened between shakthi n amar dat nite n i loved this update... it's awesome i mean it...😊

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#290

Wow dear. I have no words to express how much ive liked this one

N why should we hate u for that? Its so beautifully written.

Finally we got to know the reason. I could clearly feel the tension between them during the night of their breakup. It seemed so real that my eyes turned wet while reading it.

Indeed it was a very emotional one.

Keep on the good work

Will surely wait for the next one.

Edited by Arsha-4-Ever - 13 years ago