ArSha FF~Start Of Something Beautiful~Thread2~5/30 - Page 18

Originally posted by: ArSha_Forever

Loved It

Originally posted by: anniemathias

great update

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

beautiful update pria..

u wrote everything so beautifuly dat i had tears in my eyes..

i just loved it...

i agree wid u pria..arsha is bound to happen sooner or later..n i m realy enjoying d story...bcz u have described d intense n deep love dey have for each other realy beautifuly..

waiting realy eagerly for d update...update soon plz..

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome update...it was really very touchy

the pain, emotions , feelings were perfectly described...superb

loved it very much

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

Originally posted by: kriyaansh_visu

i loved the story line keep going the way you are going waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: Anyaa_012

awesome sad sweet update !!:):)
it's suppperrb!!
an yesss plzz make thosee happiee updates come sooon!!
sooo update sooon yaar!!:)
an thanxxfor PM!!:)

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

awsum awsum awsum and pm me wen u update next

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sad update n really i am too unhappy but i can understand kuch accha hone se pehle aisa hona natural hai 😔
Baap re Kunwar ko bhi agree karna isn't easy vo bhi tab jab us ko pata hai ki Shakti is coming too in the party.
But Kunwar agreed n vo bhi ek condition pe but now the toughest part Shaks ko manana which is nt gonna b easy again.😕
Shaks was nt agree to come there n when Sneha asked her about the whole matter she is finally gonna tell her watever is hiden in her heart.😭
The situation made me cry too, but how can she decide by herself that she doesn't deserve him bcz she broke his heart just for her selfishness.😒
Thank god Shaks ne apni feelings share ki but why is she stopping Sneha for making any effort but the gud part was Sneha's answer where she said that she doesn't have to make an effort as they r destined to b together.😃
Shaks is too shock to realize that fact 😲
Update fast

Originally posted by: maddieee

pria i loved it😊 shakthi's sadness is so real n it touches the heart... ur ff is coming out excellently pria👍🏼... very good writing👏

"What do you mean this is none of our business?" Alisha shrieked. "What the hell is wrong with you Sneha? How can you even say that?"

Alisha, Shantannu, Macci, Vinti, Priyanka, Archie and Samentha were staring at Sneha in utter shock. She had just announced for all of them to back off and let Amar and Shakti be.

"Guys let them handle this. Who are we to force them together?" Sneha curtly answered, trying to walk away only to be stopped by Macci.

"Who are WE?" he asked incredulously. "WE are their friends. WE want them to be happy. WE know that they need each other to be happy. WE are going to do anything it takes to bring them together."

"No WE are not!" Sneha exclaimed. "Just leave them alone."

"Sneha what's wrong with you? How can you just give up on them? How can you not do anything to help them through this? How can you just sit back and say let them be?!" Shantannu asked, unable to digest the sudden turn of events.

"You were supposed to convince Shaks to come to Samentha's birthday party so we can bring Amar and Shaks together but now you're saying we shouldn't interfere?" Vinti questioned, confused.

Each of them hurled questions and accusations at her, unable to believe that she was asking them to back off.

Finally Archie spoke up. "Shut up guys!" he ordered, effectively ending all conversation and catching everyone's attention. He turned to Sneha. "What did Shaks say to you that you're saying all this?"

Sneha was shocked for a minute, wondering how Archie knew Shakti was the reason for her declaration. She quickly recovered. "Archie, she had nothing to do with my decision. I've been thinking about this for a while now and figured its better if we dont interfere and make things worse" she smoothly lied.

"Make things worse?" Priyanka questioned. "How much more worse can it get?"

Archie eyed Sneha skeptically. "Sneha, I know you. You would never say this unless there was a concrete reason behind it. I also know you're saying this because you believe even without us doing anything something is going to happen that'll bring them together" he confidently repiled. "Shaks was really close to me and I know how she has a talent of convincing people. You were with her yesterday, something must have happened that caused you to say this. Something that involves Shakti. Something that you're not telling us" he arced his eyebrow, challenging Sneha to tell the truth.

Sneha looked away, unable to hide the guilt. She should have known Archie would figure it out. After all he knew Shakti almost as well as Amar.

Sneha sighed, giving up. "You're right Archie. I'm asking for this because Shakti begged me. She pleaded that we don't interfere. She said she doesn't want to hurt Amar anymore."

They all looked at her, surprise evident on each of their faces.

"Doesn't want to hurt him?" Samentha questioned.

"Yesterday Shaks and I talked. She poured her heart out to me and the things I saw and heard were devastating." Sneha answered, trying to hold back her tears. "For the past 3 months Shaks has been blaming herself. She thinks that she isn't good enough for Amar, that he deserves better. She thinks that she was selfish and that we all blame her for all this." Tears streamed down her face as she remembered Shakti's broken sobs.

Various expressions of confusion, dismay and panic spread amongst them, as they all registered the depth of torment and anguish their friend was suffering.

"Whaat?!"

They all whirled around to face the intruder.

Amar stood by the entrance, eyes fixed on Sneha, trying to comprehend what he had just heard.

A look of alarm came across Sneha's face before Archie tried to quickly cover up. "Amar?! What are you doing here? Aren't you were supposed to still be shooting" He tried to distract him, while Sneha quickly ran her palms across her face, dislodging all evidence of tears.

Amar strode towards her, grabbing her shoulders and looking her straight in the eye. "What did you just say?"

"Amar that wasn't... "

"Sneha please tell me the truth." Amar stressed, confusion and pain evident in his tone.

Sneha gulped and looked away as guilt washed thru her. She pulled away from his grip and turned her face away. She didn't have the courage to tell him, she didn't want to hurt him more.

Amar turned to his friends, looking at each of their faces. "Tell me what's going on. From the beginning."

Shantannu sighed before pulling him down onto the couch, retelling him everything about their plan.

"Our job was to convince you to show up and Sneha's job was to convince Shakti. But something happened... only Sneha knows that part."

Amar took in a deep breath before he confronted Sneha. "Tell me what she said."

Sneha looked up at him in silence, trying to decipher what he was thinking and at the same time trying to sort thru her own confusion.

After an eternity of silence, she finally spoke up. "How much did you here Amar?"

Amar paled as he recalled everything he had overheard. "I came in when Archie was talking to you."

Sneha sighed in defeat. "Then you pretty much heard everything." She turned away, trying to hide her tears from everyone. "Shaks has spent the past 3 months writhing in guilt and pain all by herself. She spent the past 3 months blaming herself for hurting you and degrading herself saying she doesn't deserve you. For the past 3 months she has been... loathing herself ... for breaking your heart." she gasped out, breaking down into sobs as she recalled Shakti's pain. "Guys I never imagined there would be a day when I would see Shakti, a girl defined by her very name, in such a dejected and broken state. It was horrible seeing her so beat down by her own conscience." Sneha slid onto the floor as sobs racked thru her body, her legs unable to support her weight.

Alisha and Shantannu instantly rushed over to her, trying to calm her down, while the rest tried to absorb everything they had just heard.

Amar had felt a mind numbing chill spread across his body as he listened to Sneha. It felt as if ice was shooting thru his vein when realization struck him.

Shakti was in pain...she was hurting...she was suffering from guilt...from heart break...his Shakti was crying...

Amar instantly cringed as a sharp raw pain pierced in his chest. He knew he had to fix this. No matter how hurt he had been, it didnt justify her tears. Nothing can ever justify her precious tears. Her pain.

It didnt matter anymore that he had been heart broken. It didnt matter that she had left. The past 3 months didnt even matter. All that mattered now was Shakti.

He would fix this. Fix her. He would make sure he got back his Shakti. His old Shakti.