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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Don't leave us hanging like this plz... CVz r doing a pretty gud job of it already!!! Plz update, the stoty got me hooked...its awesome..

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Ishi

@Desai09

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Loved your OS Dii... Please continue..

I am eager to know what did Arnav see that he skipped a heart beat.. I have a feeling if you are ending this in a next part, you would not give it a sad ending.. Please pleas please do not give this a sad ending...

Will be waiting eagerly for the next part..

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Debu!!!! i can understand whats keeping you away!! i tried that myself!!! but cudnt keep away!! 😃 have to take care of some pending stuff!!! have really been ignoring things!! and doing EVERYTHING together gets so tiring!!! i have still to catch up on some sleep!!

This OS is just awesome!!! loved how you explained the awkwardness between them after the holi drama!! And Arnav missing talking to her was just awww... 😍 but this terrace that you have mentioned had me there!! actually yaar!!! so true!!! Arnav must be so scared, apprehensive of going to that terrace now!! it brought his whole world shattering around him!! WOW that you thought of the scenario!!!

tell us, tell us what he saw!!! i am expecting an emotional, romantic scene!!! 😳 i know its not shyamu!!! please please!! let it not be!!!

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The-kiddo

@The-kiddo

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

hey di.. I was eagerly waiting for your sunday OS, after all yours is the best dat goes perfectly after friday episodes 😆
plz do continue... and never make snake to enter der... I wish dey count the stars in the last part of the sunday OS. plz plz make it a romantic one, which arnav will get faith in his love, or some clue about her innocence..
you paused us in a terrible situation...-- both of them alone in terrace in the midnight😳
start writing now, and pm me when you update it k?